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Posted: 18 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: lovely babe
bechari humari akki ko time nahi mill raha his brother is now in home so its too difficult to update fastly anyways she promised me ki update post karne ki koshish karegi to plzzzzzzzzzzz my friends thodi thand rakhois garmi me 😆

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good one yaar....I promise I'll update soon....most probably tomorrow...& yes my bro. makes it almost impossible for me to come online

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Akanksha😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

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160991

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Posted: 18 years ago

#173

My jaan....wo kisna nahi....Sameer hai. 😆 ...but its nice...luved it......great work 👏

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 18 years ago

#174

gr8 gng aakii... 👏 .... this vasu na..so mch she said 2 poor sameer.. 😭 ...n tht bhomi.. 😡 ..didn't speak a word...anyways..do try 2 cont asap...as u ff rocks dear.. 😃 ..n esp luv sameer n angad's character in it.. 😳 ..da mst... 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

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👏 good going. Yeh vasu bhi na 😡 😡 😡, baaz nahi aayegi... but i'm happy ki angad spoke for sameer, unlike bhoomi n avi jo chup chaap rahe 😡
ne ways, do update soon...

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Posted: 18 years ago

#176

Sameer reached the door….he was going out ….& at the

same time…Veena was coming in…..they met at the

door….one can easily read…how hurt he was frm this

conversation….He looked into Veena's eyes….his eyes

completely expressionless ….yet they cud talk of his

misery…..the poverty of relationships….he has always

faced…..he went away without saying anything……Avi was

in a way unable to judge the seriousness of the convo…

He was confused ….as how to react….guys Vasu is his

hone waali mother-in- law…& Sameer his best friend….so

please don't call him mean & all…lets see how he reacts

now…..

B: kya problem hai aapki mom….ache bhale mahaul ko bigaad diya…

Ve: kya huwa….I am jus not getting anything….Sameer kahaan gayaa…

Va: kuchh nahi aaiye baithiye…hum to apne kids ka bhalaa hi chaahate hain…..but inhe kaun samjhaaye….

Avi: de chukin aap apni suggestion….now please leave…

Ve: (yelled)…..AVI…mind ur language….badon se aise baaten karte hain

B: kya galat keh rahaa hai Avi…..inki pataa nahi kya problem hai…hamesha inki hi soch sahi hai….mom Don't u feel I am responsible enough to think bout myself…U cant force ur decisions on me…I know mujhe kiske saath dosti karni chaahiye & kiske saath nahi …Do u understand…

Vasu felt insulted….her own daughter was talking to her like this…..She was about to cry….she too left….Bhoomi felt bad….for what she said to her mom……Mom kaisi bhi ho…mom to mom hai…no one can take her place….

Ve: ye tumne achha nahi kia Beta…..U shud say sorry to her…

B: this time I am not wrong auntie….I wont say sorry

She too left….veena auntie was still confused…& Avi was

hurt himself…& was in no mood to narrate the whole

incident….. Lets see where Sameer is…….We see a road

….with many cars running with top speed…..On the other

side of the road…was a desk on which…….in a corner

Sameer was sitting…..quiet…..absolutely quiet….UR VERY

EXISTENCE IS A QUESTION MARK……AM I CLEAR…….ON THE

ROAD……..UNGRATEFUL EYES…….SO U KNOW HOW TO USE

FRIENDS….JAANTE HO KAISE KIDS ORPHANAGE MEIN RAKHE

JAATE HAIN……YA TO UNKE MAA-BAAP KE PAAS ITNE PAISE

NAHI HOTE…..KI THEY CUD RAISE THEIR KIDS……YA TO KISI

GALTI KI WAJAH SE DUNIYA MEIN AA JAATE HAIN……Sameer

pressed his ears tightly with his hands…After many

years….he had confronted the same question….that

unanswerable question bout his PARENTS…..this crisis of

parents is life's biggest misery….guys cud u imagine ur

life without ur parents…nahi naa…..but Sameer had to

lead this life….a life which was the result of great

courage & enthusiasm of this Young man….& today if

anyone questions his achievement….he is

unanswerable….how ironic & how painful…..he had just

one relationship throughout his lifetime till

now…..FRIENDSHIP…..yet someone wants him to stay away

frm his friends ….becoz…becoz he is selfish…..A SELF-

CENTRED …& UNGRATEFUL PERSON…..He raised his eyes &

looked into the sky…..cursing god…& his very

existence…..

"If u cudnot give me…..Parents…..Why u gave me a

life….maine kya bigaadaa hai tumhaaraa….ki mere bache

hue kuchh rishte bhi mujhse chheen lena chaahate ho…..I

hate u……U don't exist….& even if u exist u r blind

…..Answer me…..cud u……No u cant….becoz u r deaf &….dumb

too……I hate u"

Sameer had tears in his eyes…the ones that we cant bear

to see…..He took out a cigarette frm the pack….&

started smoking…..Anvesha was returning back from her

office….& her car passed through that road…..The doctor

told her that she has got a sprain in her toe….& it

cud be alright by a week….In the office…..the BOARD

OF DIRECTORS….have clear cut liking for ….Sameer

Malhotra….It was sure that.…he .will be the Marketting

Executive of the company…..This sentence had burnt her

EGO into ashes…..She in any way didn't want Sameer to

be a part of her company…..but now ….She had to bear

him in her office daily…. Seeing him on the desk

…..she stopped her car & went to him…..This is what we

call….GALAT TIME PE SAHI ENTRY……ab kya hotaa hai…lets

see….

As Anvesha moved closer…..she saw TEARS in his eyes……

her very new enemy was sad…..what cud u expect frm

her…..A normal human-being gets a high…& feels

happy….when his enemy is LOW….& sad…I tell u….SHE IS

NORMAL……she got a high ….seeing him like that…..His

joining letter was with her…..she thought of it as a

very right time to give him his JOINING LETTER…..Lets

see how she gives it to him…

First Anvesha took out a hankey …& …

Anv: (giving him the hankey)…..Get used to it….(she meant tears)…..U hav got the job….

Sameer first looked at the hankey …& then at her face…

S: U better keep it urself maam…..because if its….OTHER WAY ROUND…..I am not as GENEROUS..(beware Anvesha…He wont even offer u the hankey)…

Sameer left….leaving Anvesha ….as always…..SHOCKED & SHAKEN…..

It was 8'o clock then… Veena was cooking…...for 2 hours

remained complete silence… …a difficult imagination for

u guys…right ….this was the same house in which as

soon as u enter…the first thing that comes to ur mind

is…Masti……After sometimes Angad came in…….at bout 10:30

pm……

An: Sameer kahaan hai Avi….

Avi: I don't know….wo chalaa gayaa…..

An: Tumne use jaane kyun dia…u Idiot…oh god…kahaan hoga wo….jis wakt he needs us the most…we r waiting for him to come back …WOW…

Avi: Its better he got away….

An: ye tu keh rahaa hai Avi…..

Avi: haan…isliye kyunki …I understand Sameer….let him be at peace with himself….he will come back….

An: No …..I cant leave him like this…I am going to search for him……

Avi: ruk….

An: tujhe lagta hai…tere rokne se main ruk jaungaa…tujhe apne dost ki parwaah naa ho….mujhe to hai….

Avi: main bhi saath aa rahaa hun….bas meri thodi help kar….

Angad gave him a very confused look….he cudnt get the help waalaa part…kaisi help chaahiye ise….Avi continued….

Avi: Jaa kitchen se knife le ke aa….sabse badaa waalaa…jyaadaa sawaal mat puchhiyo….jaa naa..

Angad got the knife….Veena was seeing this ….she didn't get it too….As soon as angad got it …Avi asked him to cut the plaster with…that knife….

An: what …..R U MAD….no I cant help u out….
Avi: bas haath waalaa cut kar de…..so that I cud use the crutch …jaldi ….we hav to search for him…..

Ve: beta …It cud be dangerous for u….

Avi: no mom…the doc said to me that he wud himself cut it on the 5th day….today is 4th day…nothing serious mom..

At last Angad agreed….they were about to leave…ki….Bhoomi entered…

B: Sameer aayaa…

An: nahi….use hi dhoondhhne jaa rahe hain…

B: me coming too…

They were about to leave…..Ki tabhi…..
An: Sameer…..

The other two looked at the door……Sameer was standing

there…..He came inside…& without saying anything went

upstairs….On the roof…Sameer quietly stood at one

corner…..regretting the way he behaved with Anvesha…

Hers was no mistake…that he acted so sick before

her…..He wanted to be alone….all alone….He was angry

with himself….his naked self was before him…

This always smiling guy wasn't happy deep inside…& he

cud no more hide his tears frm his friends…..The other

three too came on the roof…..

An: Sameer….

S: leave me alone….

An: I know u r very sad….

S: (irritated)…so…..To tumlog yahaan mujhpe taras khaane aaye ho…..Jaao mujhe kisi ki hamdardi nahi chaahiye…

Avi: Kaise chhod dein tujhe aise…..hum to tere apne hain….(he put his hands on Sameer's shoulders…..giving him assurance….)

S: Don't u….dare touch…mera koi apnaa nahi ho saktaa….I
am a very selfish person…& u know my eyes….(he banged his fist on the boundary wall)….MY DAMN UNGRATEFUL EYES…..they r feelingless….absolutely no feelings for u….why u guys care for me so much……why…….ki I cant even think of my life without u….why…(& tears rolled down through his eyes)

Edited by aaakkii - 18 years ago