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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome update .. and thanks for the PM [: .. it's getting better and better (:
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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
good job.. it is getting so interesting.. i dont like rahul's character.. i kinda hope to see sanjay and pari end up togehter.. but lets see what you have in mind for the story.. keep them coming.. enjoying...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
awww...that rahul guy kinda reminds me of ansh...obsessed with women 😆..great parts...continue soon 👏 👏
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Edited by nisha921 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Thanks. Ur imgaination is very good. U all should be the creative heads of some soap opera, it will do quite well........... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Gr888888888888 jobs ...keep it going, be famous like that ..create ur own show/serial ...y not try it ...we r with u ...thnks for the pm
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks every1 for commenting i thought tht maybe no one is reading my fanfic, but i am really happy to see tht so many people commented on it. 1nce again thanks ever1 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap of part 36 [neha was waiting for sanjay in the college lobby for him to return from bank, sudenly rahul bumped onto her by mistake, she fights wid rahul n goes back. but rahul falls in love wid neha in first sight, in evening rahul was enjoying wid his frnds in a disco where his frnds teases him tht he is falling in love, thn scene shifts in mandir neha n sanjay ties a dhaga around a tree, n neha talks about her destiny, next day rahul was driving n neha was walking just from beside each othr whn accidently, some mud water drops falls on neha, n neha again gets annoyed]

now part 37 begins [ same day when rahul accidently spoils neha's clothes, rahul enters his bunglow, in the living room MR mehra and desai were sitting.. n rahul enters the living room...desai n mr mehra were talking]

mr mehra:- ARE RAHUL BETA....(mr mehra smiles) AAO AAO.. (then rahul sits besides his father) mr mehra:-kaise ho tum. R:- main theek hoon dad. (thn desai interupts n says to rahul) D:- sir jee ek baat pucho aapse. R:- bolo. D:- sir jee, aapke pita ka itna bara bangla hai yahan pune mein, to phir aap boys hostel mein kyun rehete hai..(rahul then gives a witty smile n answers) tumhe bhi to sarkar se pagaar milti hai, lekin tum kaam hamare liye karte ho, D:- (he laughs) ab kya kare saab.. unti pagaar se to baniyaan bhi nahi aayegi, ab hum logo ka pet to aap jaise, ameer logo ke vajey se hi bharta hai, R:- tu kabhi nahi sudhrega..
MR mehra:- to beta.. aaj kya prograam hai, R:-dad aapko to pata hai ye college mera last year hai, so main soch raha tha ki apne frnds ko ek party doon, (mr mehra gets a bit serious n asks) kyaa vo sanjay bhi aayega party mein, R:- OHH GAUD!!! DAD PLS AAP DUBARA MAT SHURU HO JANAA. Mr mehra:- RAHUL BETA, main tumhare bhale ke liye hi bol raha hoon..zara aapna class aur status dekho..aur usse dekho, inn chote logo ka khoon hi ganda hota hai.. (rahul gets up in anger) DAD PLSS, MAIN YAAHAN AAPKA LECTURE SUNNE NAHI AAYA HOON, aur sanjay ke baare mein main kuch nahi sunna chahata..(n he leaves the place in anger)...
[scene shifts sanjay n rahul in college] S:- kyaa hua mere bhai, tu aaj itnaa gusse mein kyun hai, R:- kuch nahi yaar, papa phir apna lecture dena shuru ho gaye the, S:- kyaa ki main garib hoon... (rahul hesitatingly says yes n sanjay laughs) to pagal sahi to kehete hai, main garib hi to hoon, R:- vo chaahe kuch bhi bole, main unki ye baat kabhi nahi maanunga..tu mera dost nahi mere bhai jaisa hai samjha..aur haan aaj tu party mein aaraha hai..aur saath mein neha ko bhi le aana..S:- ok bro.

[scene now shifts, neha comes to sanjay's college for thanking principal 4 the check n inviting him in a cultural program, associated wid the organisation, as she comes out of the pricipal's office n walking a distance, rahul suddenly comes in front of her, n she stops] R:- HAI!! lagta hai, tum mere bina ek min bhi nahi reh sakti ho, i mean look at urself..kahin tumhe mujhse pyaar to nahi ho gaya (neha smiles n says).. N:- tum jaante ho tumhaari problem kya hai, tumhe bohot jaldi galat fami ho jaati hai, main yahan tumse nahi, college ke principal se milne aayi thi.. R:- jhooti..main jaanta hoon..tum yahan mere liye hi aayi thi..(neha makes a face) N:- u know wat..u r disgusting!! (she says this n goes, n rahul giggles n says ) R:- ab to jo bhi ho, tumhe to main aapna banake hi rahunga.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[scene now shifts in the party..where rahul was standing wid 1 of his frnd n talking]
R:- yaar!! tu kal sahi keh raha tha..mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe uss larki se pyaar ho gaya hai, sote jaagte sirf uske baare mein sochta hoon..lekin yaar vo larki thore alag type ki hai..mujhse hamesha naraaz reheti hai, kaise samjhaaon usko.."MAIN BATAAUN" (somebody says from the back) R:- (rahul gets excited) HEY BUDDY..(it was sanjay) S:- hmmm to mere dost ko pyaar ho gaya hai, R:- (rahul blushes)..S:- (sanjay smiles) gudd..kya naam hai uska.. R:- naam to nahi bataya usne, S:- KYAA!! NAAM NAHI BATAYA!! R:- kyaa karun yaar jabhi bhi milti hai hamesha mujhe galat samjhti hai, S:- phir to boss tere liye luch karna parega, dekh larki ko i love u bolne se pehele thori frndship badhani chaahiye, R:- haan ye idea accha hai, thanks yaar..S:- ohh ho thats ok. S:- vaise vo dihkti kaisi hai..R:- mat pucch yaar!! jis din se dekha hai.. bas har jagah vo hi vo nazar aati hai, i think i really love her..she is very beautiful..S:- lekin ek baat kahoon, R:- haan bol, S:- tu uski khoobsurati se nahi, usse pyaar kar..kyunki surat se zyada seerat zaroori hoti hai...R:- (thn suddenly comes to rahul's mind n he says) ARE HAAN... baaton baaton mein to main bhul hi gaaya.. neha kahan hai.laayaa hai usse saath..batana kahan hai... S:- are yaar use koi zaroori kaam tha isiliye vo nahi aa paayi.. lekin ussne ye message bheja hai..tht ki tum aapna khayaal rakhnaa..n study hard... R:- okkkkk ...lekin zaroor milvana unse.. S:- definatly...
[scene now shifts, next day, neha was walking from tht same road where rahul accidently put mudwater on her n spoils her dress, this time rahul is following her.. but neha do not know this...n she at a distance she hires an auto, then rahul follows the auto, he see tht the auto stops near a women's organisation institute, neha gets down from the auto n goes inside without knowing tht rahul is also standing at a distance, n then rahul also slowly goes inside].....
this part ends here.......next part will b updated soon...enjoy reading

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr8 job 👏 👏
plz cont soon..and thxx for the pm 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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greeat update .. thanks again for the PM .

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