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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap of part 34 [When sanjay n rahul fights, pari reaches at the spot n stops them, rahul leaves the place n sanjay goes inside the house..in sanjay's room pari tells him tht she is in love wid rahul, sanjay tells her tht rahul is not a gud person but pari do not listens to him, by the time tulsi reaches there n asks him about it. then sanjay starts telling them about his past, whn rahul n sanjay were frnds n sanjay was engaged wid a girl nehaa in delhi, n wat happened whn she reaches pune]

part 35 begins.....[Same scene...neha n sanjay comes inside the house,]
aunty:- are baitho beta?? [then both of them sits] accha ye batao, neha tumne yun achanak pune aane ka programe kyun bana liya..(sanjay interuppts wid the giggling smile) ab kyaa karegi aunty, bichari ka mere binaa vahaan man bhi to nahi lag raha tha naa isiliye... N:- JI NAHI SIR...main yahan aapke liye nahi ek zaroori kaam ke vajey se aayi hoon, Aunty:- kya beta? N:- aunty,sanjay aap dono ko to pata hai ki main padhaai ke saath saath ek women's organisation ke liye bhi kaam karti hoon, bas uun logo ne mujhe yahaan ke organisation ke saath kuch dino ke liye kaam karne bhejaa hai.. Aunty:- are ye to bohot acchi baat hai beta, tum kaam aur padhaai ek saath kar rahi ho..bhagwan tumhe khoob tarakki de.. S:- AUR MUJHE...(aunty smiles) HAAN BABA..tujhe bhi, lekin thori akal bhi de... (thn aunty n neha giggles)....

[scene now again comes back to sanjay, pari n tulsi]

(pari was sitting n tears were not stoping from her eyes n tulsi was standing near window n listening..thn sanjay says) sab kuch theek chal raha tha zindagi mein, aaj bhi sochta hoon, to meri rooh tak kaanp uthti hai...sochta hoon kash neha pune nahi aayi hoti, kaash ki uss din maine usse nahi rokaa hota..to aaj vo mere saath hoti, P:- (pari was now quite, n thn tulsi asks) kyaa hua phir... S:- PHIR!!!
[SCENE AGAIN GOES BACK TO FLASH BACK]
Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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[SCENE AGAIN GOES BACK TO FLASH BACK]

(sanjay was getting ready, suddenly nehaa comes)N:- GUD MORNING!! S: kya baat hai, aaj mera chaand din mein kaise nikal aaya, N:- aji chand nahi kirne kahiye, suraj ki kirne, S:- are wah sher o shaiyari bhi seek rahi ho lagta hai..( neha giggles) accha vo sab baatein chodo, abhi ek zarroori kaam hai mujhe S:- ACCHAA tabhi sochun ye daaku haseena aaj, umrao jaan ki tarah shaiyari kyu kar rahi hai, (neha laughs) accha ab sunoge, S:- sunaaiye madam, N:- sanjay!! mujhe tumhare college ke principal se milna hai.. S:- kyun, N:- actually hamara organisation, jin aurton ke bacche abhi padhnaa chahte hai, unke education ke liye funds collect kar rahe hai.. S:- ohh ok, N:- to sanjay main tumhara bahar wait kar rahi hoon tum jaldi se taiyaar hokar mujhe apne college ke principal se milane le jaana , vaise bhi to tum abhi college hi jaa rahe ho, S:- okk.. (n as neha was about to go sanjay calls her back) ARE SUNO SUNO..N:- haan kya hua, S:- ek zaroori baat to batana bhool ho gaya, N:- kyaa, S:- actually mera ek dost hai rahul, N:- ye vahi hai naa jiske baare mein tum aksar khat mein likha karte the.. S:- haan, vo tumse milna chahta hai...N:- ok, S:- par zara sambhal ke milna, N;- kyu, S:- bhai, larkiyan use dekhte hi..apna dil kho deti hai...(neha gives a witty smile) lekin tumhare dost ne abhi tak mujhe nahi mila na isiliye... S:- theek hai dekhte hai kon apnaa dil khoyega..aur apne hosh gavayega.. neha :- dekhte hai....

[scene now shifts to college, in the principal room]
Principal:- ye to bohot accha kaam kar rahi ho beta, har state ke colleges mein agar tum jaise honhaar students ho, to definatly desh ki uunnati ho sakti hai, VERY GUD...(neha smile) [thn principal says to sanjay] sanjay beta tum bhi bohot acche student ho, tum kyun uss awara larke rahul ke saath ghumte ho, ye paise vaale logon ke bacche colleges mein addmission to le lete hai, par padhai ke naam se bhi door bhaagte hai.. (thn principal changes the topic n gives the donation)...
[scene shifts, sanjay n neha in the college lobby]
N:- sanjay, mujhe iss check ko draft mein change karna hai, actually org. vaale check nahi, draft accept karte hain...S:- to phir tum yaahan ruko, main ye draft bank mein jakar banvake aata hoon, N:- main bhi chalti hoon, S:- dekho bank saamne hi hai, tum yehi raho main 10 min mein aajaunga..N:- ok ..but come soon... [SCENE NOW SHIFTS BACK TO TULSI, PARI SANJAY]
sanjay( mujhe kya pata tha, ki use vahan par chod ke jaana meri zindagi ki sabse badi bhul hogi, ek waqt tha jab main neha ke bina khud ko soch bhi nahi sakta tha lekin uss waqt mere pass kuch bhi nahi tha...aur kismat ka khel dekhiye tulsi daadi aaj sabkuch hai par mera pyaar nahi)

part ends here....

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plsss comment 😃 😊 is tht nobody reading my fanfic
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Posted: 18 years ago
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this ff i quite good actually 😃 continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you should start your own TV show 😉 😆 😊 ...you are tooo good!! 👏 👏 👏

-Nisha ❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap of part 35 [ sanjay n neha reaches in to their neha's aunty's home, sanjay is still telling them the story...story again goes in the flashback..in the morning neha asks sanjay to take her to his college to meet the principal as she was collecting funds 4 d women organisation. in the college pricipal becomes happy of wat neha was doing n gives her a check n advises sanjay to stay away from rahul n study, neha tells sanjay tht she wants a draft n sanjay tells her to wait in the college...as he will make the draft n come back scene then 4 a while shifts to sanjay in present who regrets about leaving neha in tht moment...]

part 36 begins [ scene now shifts back to neha waiting in the college lobby, whn suddenly a guy comes n pushes her n walks, neha was about to fall but she balances it n in anger she shouts on tht guy] N:- HEY YOU!!! BEWAKUF ..DEKHKE CHALNA NAHI AATA TUMHE!!! ( the guy turns back it was rahul, when he turns tht time he was very angry as neha called him wid names, but when he looked at her..he got completly blank, he do not understand what to say, there were two othr guys who prompts rahul to speak up but he is quite n looking at neha, then neha comes near him.. N:- (wid a witty smile) mujhe lagta hai bhawaan ne itni acchi shakal di hai to i guess aankhen bhi di hongi dekhne ke liye...Rahul:- i am sorry!! (tht was the first time rahul apologises n tht also very humbly, his two fnds who were standing at his side do not understand this n one of them says) rahul ye tu kya kar raha hai, iss larki ne tujhe bewakuf kaha n u r saying sorry... (rahul gives a witty smile, n thn looks at her n says) rehene de, life mein kabhi kabhi aise incidents ho jaate hai..kyun Miss.... (then neha tries to go n rahul comes in front of her again) R:- apnaa naam to batate jaayiye, N:- main ajnabeeyon ko aapna naam nahi bataati, R:- ohhhh!! attitude..good, (neha passes a witty smile n leaves the place, then she was going downstairs in anger when she meets sanjay) N:- SANJAY!! tum aagaye, thank god!! S:- kyun kyaa hua.. N:- kuch nahi, ek badtammez larka, mujhse bekaar ki baatein kar raha tha...S:- KYAA!!! KISNE KAHA..MAIN ABHI DEKHTA HOON USE... N:- ARE NAHI REHENE DO!!! aise larko se ulajnaa theek nahi.. S:- MAGAR USNE TUMHE!!! N:- chodo naa ……, chalo vaise bhi bohot saare kaam pare hai..lets go. S:- ok chalo…lekin neha rahul se to hum mile nahi, ek baar usse mil to lo, N:- sanjay, actually mujhe 2:00 baje tak ye draft office mein submit karna hai, aur 1:30 yehin ho gaye hai, I have to go soon, rahul se kisi aur din mil lungi. S:- theek hai..chalo.

[in evening scene now shifts, rahul was sitting wid his other frnds in a disco..his frnds were talking, but rahul was lost in neha's thoughts(as he is like slowly falling in love)]

(suddenly one of his frnds asks) are rahul (he suddenly comes out of his thoughts) R:- haan!! , Frnd:- kya hua kahaan khoya hua hai, R:- kahin nahi..kyun?? Frnd:- chal rehene de…(thn rahul's frnd says to other person) lagta hai uss larki se rahul ko pyaar vyaar hogaya hai…(thn all his frnds laughs) R:- (rahul also smiles,) nahi yaar aisaa kuch nahi hai, tum logo ko to pata hai, larkiyaan patana mere liye baayen haath ka khel hai, to phir uss ek larki ke peeche main kyun jaaun, frnd:- kyunki peheli baar koi larki tujse impress nahi hui… (rahul then again think about the incident)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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[scene now shifts to sanjay who brings neha in a mandir]

N:- sanjay tum mujhe yahan mandir mein kyun laaye, koi khaas baat hai, S:- neha.. aisa yahaan mana jaata hai ki iss mandir ke saamne jo ye per hai issmein agar sacche man se koi couple dhaaga baandhe to unki muraad puri hoti hai, pata nahi yaahan par kitne door door se log aate hai, apne jeevansaathi ke saath, yahan apni muraad puri karne, N(smiles) [thn they ties the knot on the tree] N:- hum hameshaa hi saath rahenge, sanjay agar tum mujhse puchoge ki main tumse kitna pyaar karti hoon, to mere pass iss baat ka koi jawab nahi hoga, lekin main itnaa jaanti hoon ki meri duaaon mein tum hamesha shaamil rahoge, S:- itnaa pyaar karti ho mujhse, N:- haan (n she smiles) lekin ye jo meri kundali mein ek dosh hai ki shaadi ke baad yaa pehele koi bohot bura maut ka saaya aa sakta hai, bhagwaan kare ki agar aisa ho, to sabse pehele maut mujhe aaye… (then sanjay stops her, by putting his hand gently on her lips to stop her from saying this n then sanjay says)…nahi neha…agar maut aaye to dono ko saath mein aaye…kyunki tumhare binaa iss zindagi ka koi matlab nahi, (then both look in2 each other's eyes)…

[next day scene shifts….nehaa was walking towards the organization center, suddenly a jeep passes n drops of muddy water falls on neha n her white kurta gets spoils, even some drops falls on her cheeks]

N:- YOU IDIOT!!! CAN'T U DRIVE CAREFULLY….[this time rahul do not listens to it but as he was near he see neha in the mirror, then he stops there 4 a while n smiles at her n he see tht she was staring at the jeep in anger, then he takes a back gear…n comes near nehaa, she gets shocked].. N:- YOU!!...R:- (smiles) kyaa main koi sapna dekh rahaa hoon, yaa aap vaakeye mein mere saamne khadi hai…N:- do chaante maarungi naa, sapne se haqeeqat mein aajaoge… (rahul laughs) ohh really… (then he comes out of the car, n goes close to neha, n she moves back) dekhiye thaapar chahe maar milijiye, par dil todne ki gustakhi mat kijiye ka, bohot kamzor hai.. N:- TUM SAMJHTE KYAA HO APNE AAP KO…. R:- SAMAJH…(he laughs) meri samjh to aapko dekhte hi kahin kho jaati hai, LEKIN YE KYAA HUA… ohh ho lagta hai iss chaand se chehre par daag laga diya maine..(then he takes out his hankercheif n gives it to neha) N;- ye tum apne paas h rakho, bohot jaldi, tumhare aasunn pochne ke kaam aayenge…(then she goes from the place n rahul keeps on looking at her)

part ends here.......

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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fantastic nikki and thx a lot for the pm i really njoyed it i guess u shd better start a show of ur own gr8 work buddy 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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whoa...ur ff is awesome!! luv it! 😃
plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey frnds keep on commenting 😃 😃

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