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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
good parts.. it is starting to unveil.. i wonder what mr. mehra is going to explain.. but it seems like he is looking out for pari.. cuz he knows what his son is like.. but can you please reveal what it is that rahul did.. it is killing me.. heheh
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap [ joydeep tells about the relationship of pari n rahul to tulsi, tulsi gets upset, n she talks to pari about it..but atlast she agrees 4 their marraige n she talks to mihir, but he refuses, by the time pari come n questions mihir, but mihir do not answer to it..n then mr mehra comes, he also stands against the marraige, but he do not give the reason 4 it, n mihir thinks about tht if mr mehra loves his son so much thn y he stood against d marraige]

PART 32 begins.....
[scene now shifts to mehra mansion, rahul is in the hall room wid mr mehra]

(rahul is very angry n throwing things on the floor, mr mehra was trying to make him calm) Rahul:- WHY DAD!!! WHY U DID THIS!!! AAP ACCHI TARAH SE JAANTE HAI KI MAIN NAHI REH SAKTA PARI KE BINAA, THN WHY U DID THIS( n as rahul say dis he hit his hand on a mirror n his hand starts bleeding, mr mehra c dis but he was still calm, thn he gets up n goes near to rahul, rahul was staring his father in a blind rage, then very softly mr mehra says).......Mr mehra:-Tum pari se nahi rahul, pari ke chehre se pyaar karte ho, main tumhara baap hoon, tumhari har harkat pe nazar hai meri..tumhe pari se itna lagaav kyun hai, main acchi tarah se jaanta hoon..(rahul thn looks at his dad, thn he breaks down laughing 4 a while n thn he says) R:- agar aap jaante hai, to phir ye bhi jaante honge, ki pari ka meri zindagi mein honaa mere liye kitnaa zaroori hai, ek baat to tai hai dad, vo kal bhi meri thi, vo aaj bhi meri hai, aur vo hamesha meri hi rahegi...(mr mehra stares at rahul)

[scene now shifts to sanjay in dehradoon, he goes to the place where he was living wid his frnd..now he is outside the house n is knocking the door..n thn the door opens] (Desai's frnd abhinav) Abhinav:- ji kahiye, S:- ji mera naam sanjay hai, main desai se milna chahata hoon, A:- desaai, vo to kal hi chalaa gaya, yaahan se... S;- OHHH NO, kyaa aap bataa sakte hai ki vo kahaan gaya hai, A:- dekhiye ye to mere liye bhi kehna mushkil hai, par ho sakta hai ki mumbai vapas chalaa gaya ho..(sanjay gets very upset) S:- ok thankyou, (as sanjay was going to open the door of the car, he remembers tht once he kept a file on pari's table, n he told pari about it to find it, thn he immediatly calls pari ) S:- come on pari..pick up the phone, jaldi uthaao phone..(in mumbai again..pari's room..pari was sitting in her room n crying, n as the phone rings she picks the receivor) P:- hello? S:- HELLO ?? PARI?? (in an upset n nervous tone) P:- SANJAY TUM?? kyaa hua tum itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe ho, S:- PARI VO SAB BAATEIN CHODO, DEKHO THEEK SE YAAD KARNA, maine tumhe ek red colour ke file ko dhoondhne ke liye kahaa thaa, main tumse ye bhi kaha tha ki vo file mere liye bohot zaroori hai, yaad aaya...(thn pari goes in the flashback whn she c a red colour file on her table) Haan sanjay mujhe yaad hai, aage bolo, S:- pari, tum ek kaam karo, shaam ko mera ek constable aaeygaa, raman. tum usko vo file dhoondhke de denaa pls...P:- sanjay sab kuch theek hai naa, S:- pata nahi pari, iss waqt mujhse kuch mat pucho...P:- theek hai..par tum apna khyaal rakhnaa, S:- u too..bye P:- bye... (now sanjay calls raman, he was in the police station working then he picks the receivor) S:- hello raman..R:- SIR AAP?? haan boliye, (thn sanjay tells him the whole story, n asks him to collect the file from pari in SN)
Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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same part

[scene now shifts back to pari, as she searches for the file she gets it in one of the cupboard drawers, n then she says to herself]

P:- sanjay ne kahaa tha ki ye file uske liye bohot zaroori hai, keh raha tha uski zindagi se juri hui hai..kyaa karun dekh loon, pata nahi iss file mein aisa kyaa hai, ek baar dekh hi leti hoon..( as she opens the file, and was turning the pages, suddenly archita n kt comes, n she closes the file) K.T.:- PARI??, P:- HAAN!! , Archita:- pari neeche chalo daadi bula rahi hai, (thn pari keeps the file back in the drawer unwillingly, n goes wid archita n kt)..

[scene shifts now, its evening time..the party begins, n on the other hand sanjay was coming back to mumbai]

(everyone were enjoying in the party, karan n taniyaa were standing, tania was looking tensed), K:- kyaa hua tania, tum itni pareshaan kyun lag rahi ho..T:-karan main ye soch rahi hoon ki aaj subhe jo haamare ghar mein huaa..kyaa uske baad rahul aaj yahaan party mein aaegaa, kyunki hame ye deal ussi ke vajey se mili hai, K:- pata nahi, main khud bhi iss waqt kuch samjh nahi paa raaha, lekin agar rahul yaahan aajaaye to shayaad ho sakta hai, pari koi nayi musibat khadi kar de, vaise bhi vo iss waqt kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi..(tania looks at karan)...
[raman comes in the party, he asks mohini]
M:- (mohini gives him an attitude) yesss, R:- kyaa bata sakti hai, mujhe pari kahaan milegi..(mohini jokes wid him) hmmmm, dekhiye aap galat jagah aagaye hai, pari to aasmaan mein milti hai, yahaan party mein kaise milegi.(raman gets irritated, n he says to himself) R:- lagta hai ye aurat paagal hai, M:- kyaa kyaa kahaa aapne R:- nahi kuch nahi, dekhiye mujhe sanjay sir ne bheja hai file lene ke liye, pari madam se baat karni hai...(pari was passing from raman n mohini n when she listens her name she turns back to raman and says) P:- kyaa aapko sanjay ne bhejaa hai, Raman:- haan madam, vo ek file lene ke liye, (mohini thn interupts) ye pehele nahi bata sakte the..kitne der se puch rahi hoon, kisse milna hai kisse milna hai...huhh(n she leaves the place, n raman pari stares at her)...[thn pari goes to her room to get the file, n in the party rahul arrives....ramaan was looking at people in the party suddenly he notices rahul n gets surprised n he says wid eagerness] RAHUL!!!!.......this part ends here..

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was awsome 👏 👏 👏 ...the reveling of the truth is getting closer ...great job 👏 👏 👏 !!!
-Nisha❤️
Edited by nisha921 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
recap as mr mehra says to pari tht rahul n pari can't get married, rahul gets mad at mr mehra in anger, on the second scene sanjay is in dehradoon searching 4 desai, he reaches the place where desai was living but his frnd tells sanjay tht he left dehradoon n there is a possiblity tht he is back to mumbai, sanjay thn calls pari to find the file, as pari finds it she thinks to look in2 it but kt n archita, calls her at d same time n she do not get time 4 it.in evening raman comes in the party as said by sanjay to collect the file, pari goes upstairs to get it, n meanwhile raman sees rahul n gets shocked

part 33 begins

in the same scene.... Raman:- RAHUL!!!! (he says this wid eagerness, rahul also 4 a while looks at raman but he do not recognises him as he don't know tht he is working wid sanjay, by the time pari comes wid the file n handles it to raman) P:- kyaa hua aap itne tensed kyu lag rahe hai, Raman:- vo..vo larka kon hai ( he points rahul) P:- vo rahul hai, Raman:- (he says wid curiousness) aap log usse kaise jaante hai, P:- vo mere nanaji mr mihir virani ke saath kaam karta hai...aur mera dost bhi hai, (raman gets shocked, n then he says) accha thankyou main chalta hoon, P:- lekin aap kuch pareshan lag rahe hai..koi problem to nahi hai, (raman pretends) nahi nahi ..koi problem nahi..anyways thanks (n he leaves, he passes by rahul's corner..rahul looks at him n thinks) ye kon hai, aur pari isse kon si file de rahi thi, (as he was going to meet pari, n she was also coming near him...suddenly mihir comes in between, n both stops...pari was standing at mihir's back n rahul at the front mihir tells rahul) M:- dekho rahul, tum yahaan mehmaan banke aaye ho..mehmaan banke hi raho...main nahi chahta ki iss waqt yahaan koi tamasha ho..(rahul looks at mihir wid anger but he do not say anything, then mihir holds pari from her arms n takes her n rahul looks at pari)...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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scene shifts..raman goes outside SN n calls sanjay...sanjay picks up the phone

Raman:- HELLO SIR!! (right now sanjay is driving) S:- hello raman!! kya hua tum itne pareshan kyu ho, R:- SIR KYA BATAAUN BAAT HI KUCH AISI HAI, S:- kyaa hua (n then raman tells everything to sanjay) S:- tum fikr mat karo..main abhi SN ke taraf hi aaraaha hoon, bas 10 min intezaar karo... (as raman cuts the calls n moves back..he see tht rahul was standing behind him, n raman gets shocked, n rahul gives a devilish smile n goes near raman..n says) Rahul:- to tum sanjay ke liye kaam karte ho, POLICE CONSTABLE HO.. hmmmm, Raman:- aur 10 min mein tumhari halat kharaab hone waali hai MR RAHUL.. R:- ohhhh main to darr gaya..mujhe to bohot darr lag raha hai, sanjay aaeyga, aur mujhe jail mein daal dega..i am really scared... (sudenly a car stops..n both of them looks at the car..n sanjay comes out of it...rahul again passes a devilish smile...as sanjay was coming near him...sanjay was remebering some sounds of a woman's loud cries n shouting , n then he comes near rahul..n rahul pases a witty smile)] Rahul:- hello sanjay....my frnd...my buddy..how r u..(sanjay also gives a witty answer) S:- tumne to kabhi socha bhi nahi hoga naa ki uss din ke baad hum iss tarah yahan milenge... Rahul:- nahi kabhi nahi socha tha....par itna jaanta tha..ki tum yahaan mumbai aa chuke ho aur mujhe yaani ki apni hi maut ko dhoondh rahe ho... S:- MAUT..(sanjay smiles) mr rahul mehraa maut ka darr unhe hota hai, jinke paas khone ke liye kuch ho, lekin tumne to mujhse meraa sab kuch cheen liyaa hai..ab mere pass sirf ye sharir bacha hai jo tumhe phaansi tak pohochake hi dum legaa.. Rahul:- ohh really... (thn raman suddenly holds rahul's coller n bewares him not to talk to sanjay like tht, thn rahul freeds himself from raman n was about to punch him back, suddenly sanjay holds his fist..n both gets engage in a fight..suddenly pari comes from the back..n gets shocked to c sanjay n rahul fighting..n she shouts) SANJAY!!!!!
Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap [raman saw rahul in the party, n gets shocked..rahul notices pari was giving a file to raman and he gets suspicious,later raman leaves the party n goes out..thn rahul was trying to go near pari when mihir comes n warns him to stay away from pari, raman goes out of SN n calls sanjay by the time rahul reaches there n listens, rahul n raman talks to each other thn sanjay comes n thn after a while situation worsens n rahul n sanjay fights wid each other n then pari comes]


PART 34 Begins.....P:- SANJAY!!!! RAHUL!! CHORO EK DOOSRE KO...KYA KAR RAHE HO TUM DONO.[thn both leaves each other's coller, n pari looks at both of them n gets confused] P:- WAT IS THE MATTER WID YOU (she asks rahul, but rahul was quite n looking at sanjay in anger then rahul leaves the place) P:- RAHUL!! MERI BAAT TO SUNO..(but rahul do not stop..sanjay raman n pari were standing there, then after a while sanjay also goes inside n pari n raman were standing there) P:- raman sir?? YE SAB KYAA HO RAHA HAI, MUJHE NAHI PATA THA KI SANJAY AUR RAHUL EK DOOSRE KO JAANTE HAI...KYA BAAT HAI SIR..YE DONO KYUN LAR RAHE THE...RAMAN:- pari...behetar hoga aap ye sawaal sanjay se jaake puche kyunki vo hi aapko iss jhagre ki vajey bata sakta hai. (raman says this n leaves the place)
[pari goes inside SN, in the party she was searching 4 sanjay but she do not find him anywhere) Archita:- kya hua pari kise dhoondh rahi ho, P:- archita tune sanjay ko kahin dekha.. A:- haan abhi abhi apne kamre mein gaya vo. P:- ok.
[scene shifts, pari goes to sanjay's room..sanjay was sitting quietly, on a sofa n looking at the floor n thinking..pari comes n sits beside him n wid tears in her eyes she asks] P:- kyaa baat hai sanjay...kyun ye sab ho raha hai, maine socha tha ki jaise hi tum dehradoon se vapas aaoge, main tumhe rahul se milvaaungi..kyunki main aur rahul ek doosre se pyaar karte hai aur saare gharwaale hamare khilaaf hai, aisi kyaa baat hogayi ki tum dono ek doosre ke dushman ban rahe ho..[as pari says this, sanjay looks at pari wid a shock on his face] S:- TUM RAHUL SE PYAAR KARTI HO PARI, P:- haan sanjay, i really love him par koi mujhe samjhne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi hai... [sanjay looks at pari wid lots of shock on his face, thn pari also gets suspicious n asks] kyaa hua sanjay, tum mujhe aise kyun dekh rahe ho, S:- pari tum jaanti ho ki kya kar rahi ho, THANK GOD KI gharwalon ne tumhari aur uski shaadi ke liye raazi nahi hue.. (pari gets up in anger) P:- SANJAY!! YE KYAA KEH RAHE HO TUM... [sanjay also gets up] S:- MAIN THEEK KEH RAHA HOON PARI..TUM JIS RAHUL SE ITNAA PYAAR KARTI HO, VO PYAAR KYAA NAFRAT KE BHI LAYAAK NAHI HAI..[as sanjay says this, tulsi listens to it n comes inside] T:- teraa matlab kya hai, sanjay..[both pari n sanjay then looks at tulsi] T:- kyaa matlab hai ki rahul nafrat ke bhi layak nahi hai, aur tu kaise jaanta hai rahul ko.. S:- DAADI, MAIN ACCHI TARAH SE JAANTA HOON ISE....P:- (wid tears n lots of questions in her eyes) KAISE!!!, S:- pari, maine apne atteet ke baare mein aaj tak kisi se kuch nahi kahaa, lekin ab mujhe sab kuch batanaa hoga, kyunki main nahi chahata ki tumhari zindagi bhi kharaab ho...T:- tu saaf saaf batana sanjay..kya baat hai, S:- [sanjay then looks at tulsi n pari..n starts telling the story]

Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ye baat tab ki hai, jab main pune mein reheta tha, zindagi mein sab kuch tha, kisi cheez ki kami nahi thi...vahan college mein meri pehechaan rahul se hui aur hum bohot acche dost ban gaye, dheere dheere rahul ki asliyat mere saamne aati rahi lekin maine har baar iss baat ko nazarandaaz kar diya..jaise ki , ek baar usne ek teacher ko itni buri tarah se maara, ki aajtak vo aadmi chal nahi sakta, kyunki uss teacher ne rahul ki class mein insult ki thi, uski saari buraaiyon ko jaante hue bhi main usse mauke pe mauke diye ki shayad vo sudhar jaae, lekin vo nahi sudhraa, phir usne har gunah ki hadd paar kardi, main ek larki se bohot pyaar kartaa tha, nehaathis character is played by aamna sharif, neha ke saath meri mangi delhi mein ho gayi thi..rahul hamesha se bohot khush tha ki mera ghar basne jaa raha hai..ek din maine use bataaya ki neha kuch mahino ke liye pune aa rahi hai, kyunki uski maasi yehin pune mein hai, ye sunkar rahul bohot khush huaa tha..usne neha ki aane ki taiyaari khud ki thi, lekin maine kabhi socha bhi nahi thaa ki vo iss hadh tak gir sakta hai, T:- kyaa hua tha sanjay.. NOW THE STORY GOES TO THE FLASHBACK (SORRY 4 WRITING IN CAPITAL BUT JUST WANTED TO HIGHLIGHT THE SENTENCE]

[scene shifts to pune railway station, nehaa comes out of the train wid a bag in her hand a bubbly sweet girl..sanjay was standing at the books stall at a corner, when neha waves her hand n sanjay do not responds n was busy reading the magazine] neha:- (smiling) kya ye magazine mujhse bhi zyadaa important hai, sanjay:- [still lookin at the magazine] hmmm nahi, main to tumhare liye ek acchi si design dekh raha tha dress ke liye.. N:- ohh really.. design dekh rahe the, yaa models.. (thn sanjay makes a naughty face n says) hmmm actually dono. (thn they both giggles n hugs each other)..[scene shifts to sanjay taking neha to her aunty's home] [at neha's aunty's home..they knock the door, aunty opens the door] Aunty:- (smiles) are aagaye tum log...(thn neha hugs her aunty) N:- (smiles) kaisi hai aap?? Aunty:- bas beta theek hoon..safar mein koi problem to nahi hui..N:- nahi nahi aunty, [thn sanjay interupts] S:- are meri mataaon , ab baaki baatein andar chalke kar lijiyega, saamaan pakar pakar ke coolie ban gaya hoon.. [then aunty n neha giggles] N:- tumhare saath yehi hona chahiye ..very good. S:- accha bhai, ab andar chalo..[then they goes inside]..
this part ends here...
Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
great updates.. please write soon.. want to know what rahul did.. please...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey itz fantastic, amazin, fabulous dear 👏Full of suspense...u vry well know hw to hold the reader..

Well waitin eagerly for the nxt move of Rahul..

Write soon dear..

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