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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update.. the suspense is killing me.. please update soon.. thanks for the pm..
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recap of part 37[ rahul goes to meet his father where mr mehra was sitting wid desai, rahul gets annoyned when mr mehra says insulting words about sanjay, neha comes to sanjay's college..n in the midway rahul comes in front of her, she again fights wid him, in evenining in the party rahul tells sanjay that he is inlove wid a girl but whn sanjay asks the name of the girl, so rahul says he don't know her name. scene now shifts next day neha was going from the same road where rahul put mudwater on her n spoils her dress, this time rahul is following her.. but neha do not know this...n she at a distance she hires an auto, then rahul follows the auto, he see tht the auto stops near a women's organisation institute, neha gets down from the auto n goes inside without knowing tht rahul is also standing at a distance, n then rahul also slowly goes inside].....

part 38:- [ as rahul goes inside he see tht neha entered a room n he stands outside the room to listen d conversation, neha was talking to another social worker of that org. rahul was listening but suddenly a pastman comes at the doorstep but rahul was also standing there so he takes a magazine kept on the table and pretends to read, postman goes inside] Postman:- Ms Stela ke liye letter hai, (he says to neha, stela is neha's frnd, but as rahul was standing at the doorstep so he thought tht her name is stela) Neha:- haan mujhe de do. R:- ohhh!! to iska naam stela hai, gud.. (thn he listens to the conversation) ,Social worker:- hum jo funds ikkhate kar rahe hai, inn besahara aurton ke baccho ki padhai ke liye usmein se 2 lakh rupe kam pad rahe hai, (neha thinks..haan madam kuch to karna parega, main apne tarah se puri koshish kar rahi hoon.. Social worker:- main jaanti hoon, tum bohot hi mehenati larki ho, lekin ab hume thori zyadaa mehenat karni paregi..tum dekho agar kahin se donation mil sake to..baaki main to koshish kar hi rahi hoon.. (neha looks tensed, but still tries to smile) ok madam. (n then she goes..n as neha comes out rahul put the magazine above so tht neha couldnt c him)..
[scene now shifts, neha was walking towards her home, suddenly rahul's jeep comes in front n neha stops] N:- YE KYA BADTAMEEZIN HAI!! TUMNE MERA RAASTA KYU ROKAA. [rahul looks at her 4 a while wid a smile n thn speaks] R:- mujhe pata hai tum kyu pareshan ho,...... tumhe apne org ke liye paise chahiye naa.. (neha gets shocked) N:- ye tumhe kaise pata, R:- main aapke baare mein sab kuch jaan chuka hoon.. (thn he smiles n says wid hesitation) vo aaj aapka maine peecha kiya tha, insititute tak...N:- YOU R MAD!! pagal ho tum, (thn he smiles n says) haan vo to hoon, aapka!! MS STELA... N:- (neha gets shocked n thinks tht why he was calling him stela, but she do not respond to it much) N:- dekho tumhari faaltu ki bakwaas sunne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi hai, R:- main faaltu ki baat nahi karta madam. (thn he takes out a check n gives it to neha) ye blank check hai, jitna chahe amount bhar lena..lo. (neha gets very annoyed at this, she takes the check n tear it into pieces n throw it on rahul, rahul gets shocked on this, as it hurts his ego very much) N:- ye rahaa mera jawaab....main koi b**a**z*aru aurat nahi, jise tum ye check deke kharidne ki koshish kar rahe ho..(she says this, n goes..n rahul keeps on staring her)..
[scene shifts it was raining heavily outside sanjay n neha were sitting in their aunty's home, aunty n sanjay were sitting while neha gets tea for them] Aunty:- (she asks frm sanjay) to beta, kab socha hai tum logo ne shaadi ke baare mein, S:- bas aunty mera aur neha ke college ka ye last year hai, uske baad. Aunty:- dekho beta, main chahati hoon tum dono, iss mamle mein zyadaa der mat karo..kyunki iss duniya mein buraa chahne waalon ki koi kami nahi hai, koi kisi ka accha nahi dekh sakta. N:- aap fikr mat kijiye aunty sab theek ho jaayega... (thn sanjay interuppts..) are main to bhool hi gaya mujhe rahul ne milne ke liye bulaaya tha..bohot der se phone kar raha hai mujhe, N:- are abhi itna tufaan chal raha hai, abhi rukh jaao. S:- are neha tum usse jaanti nahi ho, vo bacche se bhi zayda chota hai, phir uske dimaag mein ye baat aayegi ki main shayad use avoid karne laga hoon, N:- tum aur tumhara dost. (thn sanjay leaves, then he reaches a pub, where rahul was sitting n drinking, he was quite drunk, sanjay comes towards him n sits) S:- rahul...tune mujhe yahaan kyun bulayaa, R:- (rahul was lookin at the table n his eyes were filled wid tears) S:- kyaa hua.. tujhe, (he was quite) are tu mujhe bataaega nahi to mujhe pata kaise chalega..(thn atlast he speaks) R:- Sanjay??? kyaa main bohot bura hoon, S:- nahi?? par tu aise kyu puch raha hai (there were many questions in sanjays's eyes as he never saw rahul in such condition) R:- (rahul then breaks down in2 tears n tell him d whole story, sanjay tries to make him calm).
[scene now shifts back to the present for a while to tulsi, pari n sanjay]
Pari:- iskaa matlab rahul aur tum ek hi larki se pyaar karte, ek baar usne mujhse iss baat ka zikr kiyaa tha..lekin meri bhul thi ki maine uski baat suni nahi..Tulsi:- kehte hai pyaar ishwar ki sabse badi den hai, lekin aaj mujhe lagne laga hai..ki pyaar se bada abhishaap aur kuch nahi, isi pyaar ke vajey se maine apne bete ko kho diyaa. Sanjay:- tulsi daadi, aap ke paas to aapka pura pariwar hai..lekin mere paas to koi bhi nahi tha uss waqt, mujhe uss rahul ke khilaaf kadhaa hona padha jisse main apnaa dost samjhta thaa..T:- phirr aage kyaa huaa ....
[scene shifts back to the past where rahul n sanjay were sitting in the pub]
R:- (tears r not stoping from his eyes, n sanjay was trying to make him calm) kyun ye sab mere saath ho raha hai, kyu vo mere pyaar ko nahi samjhti...i just can't bear this pain....it's kiiling me...(n he heads down on the table n cries n sanjay was siiting beside him)..S:- rahul, dekh main chahata hoon, ki kal tu ek baar neha se mile...tu usse khud saari baat bataegaa, aur vo uss larki se jaake baat karegi, lekin usske liye tumhara usse milna zaroori hai...R:- nahi sanjay, meri madad ab koi nahi kar sakta.. S:- dekh rahul, ek aurat doosri aurat ko samjh bhi sakti hai aur samjha bhi sakti hai, main kal neha ko leke..sunset point pe pohonch jaaunga..tu vahaan aajana...aur khud use saari baatein batana..mere liye use sirf itnaa kehna kaafi hai ki tum usse milna chahate ho...vaise bhi jabse vo pune aayi hai, tujhse mili hi nahi...R:- (rahul unwillingly agrees to meet at sunset point). S:- chal ab hostel chalte hai..S:- tu jaa mai kuch der baad aajaunga.. S:-lekin tu yahaan baithke drink mat karna, R:- (he smiles) nahi ...bas main kuch der mein aajaunga.. S:- ok..(n sanjay leaves) (after a while when rahul was also about to leave n he stands up he c a wallet is just lying on the floor near to the chair on which sanjay was sitting, rahul recognises the wallet as it was sanjay's, when he picks it up n c, tht there is a picture of tht same girl, whome he loves n thinks she is stela...n rahul gets stunned by seeing this)......

this part ends here ......next part will b updated soon....enjoy reading it frnds.


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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thx 4 your pm. Your story is just 2 gud n captivating. I couldn't stop reading once i started. Plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thnks for ur message, the updates is splendid ...keep it going
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh wow.. very interesting.. please update soon.. you are doing a great job!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap of part 37 [ rahul follows neha, n by this he goes inside the org. n stands outside the room in which neha was talking to other org. member, rahul gets to know tht neha needs money, but he mistakes her as stela, out side the org. rahul offers her money, but neha misunderstands it.. n throw the check on him. scene shifts at a heavily raining night sanjay n neha were sitting in neha's aunty's home where aunty advises them to get married soon. scene 4 a while shifts back to pari, tulsi, sanjay..where sanjay was telling them the story..then scene shifts back to the past where rahul was sitting in a pub..he calls sanjay, n rahul breaks down in2 tears, but later when sanjay goes rahul notices tht sanjay's wallet was lying on the ground n when he picks it up he c tht d gal whom he calls stela is actually neha, sanjay's fianc'e...n rahul gets shocked]

part 39begins....
[same scene] (rahul gets completly shocked n shattered, when he c neha's photograph in sanjay's wallet n he says to himself) TO STELA HI NEHA HAI....(then he remebers the time he met her n side by side he c his rememberance wid his frnd sanjay, 4 a while rahul just becomes quite..n after tht he leaves the pub)

[scene now shifts, rahul is having a bottle of bear in hand n he is driving, he is right now completly drunk, and it is raining heavily..rahul stops his car near an empty road, he comes out of the car n get wet in the rain...n he shouts in anger) NEHAAAA!!!!!! (n he breaks down in2 tears again n kneels down on the street, he cries n says) KYUUUUNNNN!!!! KYUUUNN HUA MERE SAATH AISA..WHYYYYYYY.....KYA GALTI THI MERI... OHHH GODD!!! THIS DARD MERI JAAN LE LEGA.....(thn a song begins... ho yehi sochta hoon kaise usko bhulaaunga naa vo kabhi aaeygi naa use bhul paunga..jeene ka thikana hai na marne ka bhahana hai(2) itna bhi koi yaad aaey naa rabba zindagi mein koi kabhi aaye naa rabaa......)

[scene now shifts, neha was sitting wid her aunty at her home, n talking suddenly neha's phone rings]
N:- hello.. Sanjay:- hello neha??? N:- sanjay tum kahan ho, aur kya tum hostel ponhonch gaye ... S:- haan iss waqt main hostel mein hi hoon, NEHA mujhe ek zaroori baat kehni hai tumse.. N:- haan bolo... S:- [sanjay then tells neha about rahul being in love wid a girl n other details] to neha kal tum rahul se jaakar sunset point pe mil lena.. N:- OK... LEKIN main use peechanungi kaise, dekho main tumhare saath jaungaa..tumhe main hi milavaunga... N:- ok..take care byee. S:- bye..

[scene now shifts, rahul comes to his father's bunglow.. mr mehra was sitting in the living room and was doing some work, when rahul enters he was wet, he was shattered in pain n in a very mellow voice he says]
R:- dad!!! (mr mehra looks up in gets shocked to c rahul in such condition, me mehra gets up in goes near rahul who was standing near the enterance door of the living room) Mr mehra:- BETA!!! KYA HUA...TU ISS TARAH YAHAAN, TUJHE TO ISS WAQT HOSTEL MEIN HONA CHAHIYE..AUR YE BHEEGA KAISE(rahul was looking down at the floor n very quite) KUCH BATAEYGA KYA HUA HAI. mujhe tension ho rahi hai... R:- dad!! sab kuch khatam ho chuka hai... mr mehra:- KYA!!! kya khatam ho chuka hai....R:- MERI DUNIYAA DAD!!! (then he breaks down in 2 tears at the doorstep..n kneels down on the floor..n mr mehra also kneels down to hug rahul, mr mehra..do not understand wat was going wrong as he never saw rahul like tht b4, his eyes also gets filled wid tears) RAHUL!! MUJHE SACH SACH BATA KYAA HUA HAI... (thn rahul tells evrything to mr mehra) MR mehra:- RAHULL!!!! main kyaa kehta tha tujhse, inn chote logo se kabhi bh dosti nahi karni chahiye.. (then he holds rahul's face wid his both hands) DEKHA BETA, MERI HAR KAHI HUI BAAT SACH HUI, MAIN JAANTA THA..TU JISE ITNAA PYAAR KARTA HAI..APNA BHAI MANTA HAI VO TUJHE KISI DIN ZAROOR DHOKA DEGA.. dikha diya naa usne apna asli rang. (then rahul cries n hugs mr mehra, n for a while both sits their on the floor..n rahul was still hugging his father, thn looks back to mr mehra n clears the tears from his eyes n says) agar neha meri nahi hui dad, to main use kisi ka bhi nahi hone dungaa.
MAIN USS SANJAY KO JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA ....Mr mehra:- RAHUL !!! PAGAL MAT BAN..TU JANTA HAI TU KYAA KEH RAHA HAI... R:- main theek keh raha hoon dad... neha se kal maain jaakar milunga..phir sanjay aur neha......in dono ko vahin dekh lunga...

[scene shifts to neha right now sleeping wid her aunty..suddenly she wakes up in terror] SANJAY!!!! (aunty also wakes up) Aunty:- KYA HUA BETA...N:- AUNTY!!! bohot darr lag raha hai mujhe..... Aunty:- kis baat ka beta... kis liye darr lag raha hai... N:- nahi aunty!! pata nahi..achanak ek darr sa lag raha hai..aisa lagta hai kuch bohot bura hone wala hai... (aunty smiles) nahi beta... aisa kuch nahi hai..sirf tumhara vehem hai..sab kuch theek hai.. chalo so jaao...(then neha lay back n aunty tries to make her sleep)...
this part ends here... enjoy reading !!! n leave comments


Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww's thats gr8888888888....yaar Duyus, u got a superb n clear-cut creative idea ...u r lucky yaar ...thnks for the regular updates n PM
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Originally posted by: wezyus

wowwwwwwwwwww's thats gr8888888888....yaar Duyus, u got a superb n clear-cut creative idea ...u r lucky yaar ...thnks for the regular updates n PM

thanks buddy😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aweesome part.. thanks for the PM.. and please please continue soon.. i want to know what happens.. you are an amazing writer..
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome Part .. & thanks for the PM .

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