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recap of part 39 [ rahul notices tht sanjay's wallet was lying on the ground, he picks it up n gets shocked to c tht it was the same girl whom he loves so dearly, rahul completely gets shattered, in the heavily raining night he drives on an empty street, completly drunk, on the other hand sanjay reaches his hostel n calls neha n asks her to meet rahul tommorow, scene shifts rahul reaches to his bunglow where mr mehra gets shocked to c rahul in such conditon, n rahul tells him tht he will get neha by hook or crook, scene shifts back to neha were she suddenly gets up from her sleep in terror n tells her aunty tht something is going 2 b wrong but her aunty makes her understand tht there is nothing wrong it was just a dream.....]

part 40 begins.......

[scene now shifts, its morning time neha is standing infront of mirror getting ready n combing her hair n thinking]

N:- Aaj, bohot hi khass din hai, par pata nahi sanjay ko yaad bhi hoga yaa nahi...aaj hi ke din to sanjay ne peheli baar mujhse apni dil ki baat kahi thi, pata nahi isse yaad bhi hoga yaa nahi... [scene now shifts to sanjay in the hostel, getting ready n he is also thinking] S:- neha shayad aaj ka din bhul hi gayi hogi, par vo bohot khush hogi jab main usse gift dekar ussi tarah propose karunga jaise peheli baar kiyaa tha, (sanjay then looks at rahul who was standing facing towards the window very quitely, then sanjay looks at him n goes near him) S;- rahul, tu abhi tak taiyaar nahi hua, college nahi jaana kyaa.. R:- chala jaunga!!(he says by showing little bit coldness, sanjay then thinks) S:- lagta hai, kal ke vajey se pareshaan hai, tabhi shayad rudely baat kar raha hai, lekin isse ab iss situation se bahar laana hi paregaa(then after a pause sanjay says) rahul, tujhe yaad hai aaj rohan ka b 'day hai, shaam ko vo ek bohot badi party de raha hai, aur mujhse kaha hai ki main tujhe zaroor le aaun... (sanjay says this to change his mood, but it makes no differnence to rahul, instead he says) R:- tujhse ek baat puchun (he says very seriously) S:- haan puch... R:- tu apne pyaar ke liye kis hadd tak jaa sakta hai!! S:- YE KAISA SAWAAL HAI .... R:- nahi,, just casually puch raha hoon, S:- main apne pyaar ke liye jaan de sakta hoon!!!, R:- acchaa!! (he asks wid a witty smile on his face, thn after a pause he says) yehi to fark hai tujhmein aur mujhmein ki agar main apne pyaar ko paane ke liye jaan de sakta hoon, to usko cheene wale ki jaan le bhi sakta hoon. (sanjay gets surprised by such weired questions n says) rahul life is to move on, zindagi kisi ke liye nahi rukti, tumhe khud ko sambhaal na parega, (thn somebody calls sanjay,) HAAN AARAHA HOON, (thn he again says to rahul) aur haan aaj mai neha ko tujhse milvaaungaa, tu usse baat karlenaa..(sanjay then leaves n rahul says) life is to move on, HUHHH!! shayad tu mujhe abhi bhi samjh nahi payaa sanjay, jo cheez meri hai, use main hargis kisi aur ka nahi hone deta...,

[scene shifts in college, sanjay was walking towards the classroom in the corridor, suddenly rahul comes in front, n sanjay gets surprised]
S:- are tu, (rahul passes a witty smile), R:- kyun darr gaya kya…S:- nahi aisi baat nahi hai(he smiles n says), lekin tu itni der tak kahaan tha, R:- vo mujhe kuch zaroori kaam tha isiliye maine aaj koi bhi lecture attend nahi kiya, SANJAY actually main soch raha tha ki jitna jaldi hosake main neha se mil hi loon, taaki vo uss larki se mere liye baat kare, S:- (sanjay smiles) that's like a gud boy, R:- to phir tu neha ko phone kar de, S:- dekh abhi ek lecture baaki hai 1 ghante baad dono chalenge uske ghar, R:- to kya neha aaj kaam pe nahi gayi, S:- nahi yaar uski tabiyat theek nahi hai, aur upar se uski aunty bhi shehar se thore door gayi hai, R:- ohhh ( then rahul thinks something), to phir tu ek kaam kar main neha ko lekar sunset point ponhoch jaata hoon vahi par hum teeno baat kar lenge, S:- haan ek ghante baad main bhi aajunga. R:- ok.. S;- ok byee.
(then rahul n sanjay goes in the opposite direction, sanjay thinks) bichara rahul, hey bhagwaan iski madad zaroor karna, isko iska pyaar dilwado ..(n rahul thinks) sanjay ek ghante baad ponhochega, to job hi karna hai, sirf ek ghante ke ander hi karna hoga..

[scene now shifts, neha was sitting in her living room n was reading a book when, rahul comes from the back n knocks the door]
Neha:- COME IN!! (rahul comes inside n calls out her name) R:- neha!! (she turns back, when she hears a familiar voice) N:- TUM!!! TUM YAHAAN KYA KARNE AAYE HO, (rahul comes near her) R:- main jaanta hoon neha tum mujhse bohot naraaz ho, N:- MUJHE TUMHAARI KOI BAAT NAHI SUN NI, CHALE JAAO TUM YAHAN SE !! R:- PLS PLS NEHA sirf ek baar meri baat sun lo, (after pleading so many times neha agrees 2 listen to rahul) N:- THEEK HAI!! BOLO.. R:- neha, tum jaanti ho main kon hoon, N:- haan.. ek ameer baap ka bigra hua beta, R:- neha main rahul hoon, sanjay ka dost!!! (n neha gets stunned) R:- haan neha, main hi rahul hoon, sanjay ka dost, neha ye sach hai ki maine jabse tumhe dekha hai, main tumhe pyaar karne laga hoon, BUT BELIVE ME.. uss waqt main ye nahi jaanta tha ki tum sanjay ki mangetar ho, main yahan tumse maafi maange aayaa hoon, apni har bhul ke liye.. N:- (after sometime neha thinks n then she says) tum par bharosa karne ka mera man to nahi karta, lekin kyunki tum sanjay ke dost ho sirf isiliye, tumhe ek mauka aur de rahi hoon, par ye mat sochna ki main pichli baatein bhul gayi.. R:- (rahul smiles) THANK U THANK U SO MUCH…neha tumse ek aur baat kehni thi N:- bolo, R:- sanjay ne mujhe tumhara address diya tha aur kaha tha ki tumhe aakar bata doon ki vo iss waqt kisi kaam mein phas gaya hai, aur usse aane mein thori der lagegi, aur main tumhe lekar sunset point se 1 km door jo kaali maa ka mandir hai vahan le jaaun, vo bhi vahin pohonch jaeyga.. N:- WHAT!!! Kaali maa ke mandir, lekin kyun, well dekho neha sanjay ye baat nahi jaanta kit tum hi vo larki ho jisse main pasand karta hoon (he says wid hesitation) isiliye tumhe yaad hoga ki usne kal tumhe phone pe mujhse milvane ki baat kahi thi, N:- lekin sunset point mein kya kharaabi hai, R:- ye sab main nahi jaanta, jo usne kaha main vohi bata raha hoon…(neha thinks 4 a while n then she says main ek baar sanjay ko phone kar leti hoon) R:- neha sanjay ko phone mat karo abhi, N:- kyun R:- vo uske mobile ki battery low hai, isiliye.. R:- tum abhi zyada late mat karo, jaldi taiyaar ho jaao.. hume mandir pohonchna hai. N:- theek hai main abhi aayi.

[same scene… as neha goes inside, rahul calls some1]
R:- haan!! Sab kuch ready hai na.. (other person on phone) haan saab sab ready hai, aap bas larki ko leke mandir pohochiye, theek hai.. (as he ends the call, neha comes from the back n says) kisse baat kar rahe the, (rahul gets shocked n he turns back) vo….vo main…..vo neha meri sanjay se baat hogayi hai, N:- kyaa baat hogayi, kyaa kaha usne??? R:- well usne kaha hai ki usska kaam khatam hogaya hai, aur main tumhe leke mandir pohonchun, N:- theek hai..ab chalo..

[scene shifts to sanjay in the college, his class lecture is finished, he quickly goes down to n starts his bike, but he c the his bike is not starting]
(then one of his frnd says) Are sanjay!! Bike mein se to petrol leak ho raha hai, (then sanjay finds this very weired, n he thinks) are ye kaise ho gaya, kal hi to maine bike repair karvaiye thi, ye kaise hua…ohh gaud ab main sunset point kaise pohochunga, ek kaam karta hoon, rahul ko phone karta hoon, ki mujhe aane mein thora time lagega.. vo neha ko lekar sunset point pohonch jaaye, (then he calls rahul) R:- hello, S:- haan rahul, R:- haan sanjay..hum bas pohonch hi rahe hai, S:- are meri baat sun yaar!! Mujhe aane mein thora waqt lagega..(n he tells his wat happened) R:- ok…theek hai, S:- yaa bye..(right now rahul is driving n neha is sitting beside him) N :- kyaa keh raha tha sanjay, R:- vo keh raha tha ki, hum aur ktini der mein pohonch rahe hai, lagta hai sanjay tumhare bina bilkul nahi reh sakta hai.. (neha hesitatingly smiles)..

[scene shifts back to sanjay, taking his bike to a near garage of the college] S:- are ye meri bike ka petrol leak ho raha hai, isko theek kar do, worker:- theek hai saab.. S:- kitni der lagegi ismein…worker:- saab aadha ganta to lag hi jaaeyga.. S:- (sanjay thinks) ohh gaud vaise hi late hogaya hoon ab iss bike ke vajey se aur late ho jaunga, vaise bhi sunset point door hai, (thn sanjay says to the worker) job hi ho thora jaldi karne ki koshish karo.. worker:- ji saab.

[scene for a while shifts back to the present to sanjay pari n Tusli ]

pari:- main soch bhi nahi sakti thi ki rahul itnaa gir sakta hai, mujhe khud yakeen nahi hota, ki aise ghatiya insaan ko maine chahaa.. S:- main ye sab batake tumhara dil nahi dukhaana chahata tha pari..par main nahi chahataa ki jo, meri neha ke saath huaa, vo tumhare saath bhi ho… uss din maine neha ko rahul ke saath bhejkar bohot badi galati kar di thi, mujhe kyaa pata tha ki rahul neha ko pane ke junoon mein iss hadd taka age badh jaaeygaa,
T:- sanjay ab tak tumne jo kuch bhi batayaa usse ye to pata chalta hai ki rahul neha se bohot pyaar karta tha par issmein jurm karne layak koi baat nahi hai… (thn sanjay breaks down in2 tears n shouts) BAAT HAI DAADI, baat hai, ab tak maine aap sabko hum teeno ke rishte ke bare mein bataya, rahul ki dewaangi ke bare mein bataya, par usne apne iss pagalpan mein kyaa kiya hai vo batannaa abhi baaki hai……………..


This part ends here….enjoy reading n leave comments

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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey duyus thnx for ur PMs n gr8 dear 😳

Ur updates r jst goin fabulous n amazin 👏
U r so creative dear 😳

Waitin for ur nxt update...keep writin 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
You like the character of Pari a lot. I hope they give her more prominence in the show. Continue writing, Duyus. I am intrested. 😉 😳
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wow.. you are so good at leaving cliff hangers.. i am dying to know what happened.. thanks for the PM.. please continue..
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Nice Part :) .. continue pleaase ! & thanks for PM !
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recap of part 40 [ Ist scene in the morning neha was getting ready n thinking to celebrate the whole day wid sanjay as he proposed her on this day couple of years ago. sanjay on the other hand thinks to present a gift to neha, scene in college, rahul asks sanjay tht he will pick up neha from her home n reach sunset point, sanjay gives neha's adress to rahul, when rahul reaches to neha's home she gets shocked to know tht he is sanjay's frnd, rahul lies to her tht sanjay is busy in some work n he will reach in kaali maa mandir after 1 hr. n he takes neha wid himself, scene 4 a while shifts to present on pari, tulsi n sanjay where pari was regretting her decision to have relation wid rahul,] and now scene again shifts back to the past......

part 41 begins....[scene starts wid rahul who reached kaali maa mandir wid neha, neha gets down from the jeep, n she gets surprised n says]

N:- RAHUL!! ye tum mujhe kahan le aaye.. yaahan to aas paas mujhe koi mandir nazar nahi aaraha, ( rahul comes near neha n passes a witty smile) R:- tumhe mandir isiliye nazar nahi aaraha kyunki mandir peeche nikal gaya, hum bohot aage aa gaye hai. bohot aage neha (n he gently touch her face, n neha gets back) N:- RAHUL??? TUM AISI BAATEIN KYUN KAR RAHE HO...MUJHE DARR LAG RAHA HAI, PLS MUJHE GHAR JAANA HAI, R:- (rahul very calmly says) theek hai..chali jana ghar...ek baar hamari shaadi ho jaaye, phir tumhe main apne gahr le jaaunga... [n now neha understood the whole thing] N:- KYAA !! (after a pause she says) OHH AB MAIN SAMJHI, TUMNE YE SAB NATAK MUJHE YAHAN TAK BULAANE KE LIYE KIYA THA, R:- bulaane ke liye nahi neha, PAANE KE LIYE....
(then neha, tries to go, n rahul holds her back) N:- RAAHUL!! CHORO MUJHE!!! R:- TUMHE KYAA LAGTA HAI KI ITNI AASAANI SE MAIN TUMHE CHOR DUNGA....(thn he holds neha's face wid his both hands n tears in his eyes n he says) DEKHO NEHA... I REALLY LOVE U , N:- RAHULL CHHORR DO MUJHE( she shouts) R:- DEKHO...JITNAA PYAAR MAIN TUMSE KARTA HOON NAA, VO SANJAY USKAA AADHA BHI NAHI KARTA HOGA, vo sirf tumhari khoobsurati ke liye tumse shaadi karna chahta hai.. MAIN TUMSE BOHOT PYAAR KARTA HOON.. N:- PYAAR!!! ARE TUM KYAA JAANO PYAAR KYA HOTA HAI... TUMHARE JAISE LOG SIRF DOOSRON SE CHEENNA JAANTE HAI, JIS SANJAY KO TUM DHOKA DE RAHE HO NAA, vo sanjay tumhe apne bhaai jaisa maanta hai..( then rahul smiles n says,) R:- bhai jaisa hai, bhai to nahi naa...aur vaise bhi pyaar aur jung mein sab jaayaz hai...N:- (she gets shocked) TUMHE TO JITNA SOCHA THA, TUM TO USSE BHI ZYADAA GAYE GUZRE NIKLE... (then rahul throws neha on the floor,)

[scene now shifts to sanjay, who repaired his bike..n now he is going to sunset point,but he don't know tht rahul took neha somewhere else she is not in sunset point nor in kaali maa temple]

[scene again shifts to neha n rahul]
(neha gets up from the floor n taking some sand in her hand she throws it on rahul's eyes, rahul 4 a while becomes unable to see her, n neha tries to runaway, as she reaches near the jeep, another maruti van suddenly comes in front of her, n neha gets shocked)....

[scene shifts to sanjay riding the bike n thinking]
i hope aaj rahul neha se baat kar le, aur use uss larki ke baare mein batade, i am sure neha uski madad zaroor kar degi, ohh god mere bhai rahul ko jo bhi chahiye use mil jaaey......

[scene shifts back to neha she gets shocked to c some criminal type men came out of the car, n neha moves back n then as she look back rahul was standing, n he smiles n says] R:- neha darling....ab bhaagke dikhaao, (n then he look at one of the guy n says) AYE.... VO PAPER LAAO.. (thn 1 of the guy gets the paper, n gives to rahul) R:- LO ... ise sign kar do.... N:- KYAA HAI YE( she looks terrified) R:- isko registry marraige kehte hai, MAINE SIGN KAR DIYAA HAI..bas ab tum jaldi se inpe sign kar do... taaki hum pati patni ban jaaey. N:- DIMAAG KHARAAB HOGAYA HAI TUMHARA.... MAIN MAR JAAUNGI PAR INN PAPERS PE SIGN NAHI KARUNGI....(she says this n run) R:- ARE BEWAKUFFON!!! MERI SHAKAL KYA DEKH RAHE HO.. PAKRO USSE...
(neha run into a place which was covered with lots of trees n plants n rahul n other men r running after her..after running at a distance rahul n other men stops n he looks here n their rahul says to the men) R:- EK KAAM KARO... TUM LOG LEFT MEIN DHOONDHO.. MAIN AAGE DHOONDHTA HOON.... (now he is near neha,but can't see her as she is hiding by a tree but she can see him, n thn rahul shouts) NEHAAA!!!! NEHAA BAHAR AAYO.... DEKHO MAIN TUMHE CHOT NAHI POHOCHAANA CHAHTA.. PLSSS COME OUT...... (but she do not comes out)...

[scene now shifts... sanjay has reached sunset point, where he was unable to find neha n rahul]
are kahan hai ye dono... yehin to bola tha mujhe..... then sanjay c one of rahul's frnd.... (thn he goes near his frnd) S:- haai ankur.... Ankur:- hey how r u.. S:- i am fine... ankur..actually main rahul ko dhoondh raha hoon, kyaa vo yaahan aaya tha..A:- haan aaj subhe aaya tha, S:- haan uske saath ek larki bhi thi, A:- nahi koi larki nahi thi, balki bohot saare aadmi the... pehele maine socha ki rahul se jaake milun par dekha ki vo bohot gusse mein thaa, aur kisi neha ko hasil karne ke baare mein baat kar raha tha... mujhe kuch garbar lagi......... S:- NEHAA!!! (n sanjay gets compltely shattered, n he undestands everything.4 a while sanjay goes to the flashback where rahul told about the girl he loved n the weared questions he asked in the hostel room...tht time 4 a while he do not understand about wat to do....then he thinks to call nehaa)

[scene shifts back to rahul n neha,, ]
R:- lagta hai ye yahaan nahi hai, (n neha feels relaxed, as rahul was about to leave, n suddenly neha's phone rings, n rahul turns back.. n goes near the tree, neha was about to run, but he catches her this time, n rahul grabs her by her arms n says) BOHOT HO GAYA.... AB KE AGAR BHAGI TO JAAN SE MAAR DUNGA... (neha gets terrified...) N:- (wid tears n fear in her eyes she says) plss rahul.... mujhe chor do... dekho tumhe mujhse bhi acchi larki mil sakti hai....tum kyun.. mere peeche pare ho... R:- ( rahul gets angry n holds neha by her hair n says) TUMHARI SLAAH TUM APNE PAAS RAKHO SAMJHI.... AUR CHALO!!!

[n sanjay is riding the bike n constantly calling neha...n rahul is holding her hands n taking her, neha then bites on rahul's hand n freeds her hand n run again, but her cell phone falls on the ground ringing n she run away, then rahul picks it up n c tht it was sanjay's number he smiles n takes the call]

R:- hello sanjay!!! S:- TU... S**AA**LE**** MAINE TUJHE APNA DOST SAMJHA AUR TUNE MERI HI PEET PE CHURA KHOPA... NEHA KAHAN HAI....R:- i am sorry my frnd.. lekin neha meri hai...i know she loves me a lot.... bas iss baat ko manna nahi chahati...any ways take care byee... (n he cuts the phone, n run after neha) S:- HELLO HELO!!!!....
[same scene, sanjay now reached kaali mandir but there also he do not found neha...n on frustation n fear to loose her he shouts ] NEHAAAA!!!!!(n he kneels down on the floor n tears runs through his eyes n he remebers the time he met neha n side by side..about rahul n thn goes inside the mandir n says to kaali maa's statue) HEYY MAA MERI MADAD KARO!!!! KAHAAN DHOONDHUN MAIN NEHA KO, KYAA KARUN…PATA NAHI YE USE KAHAN LE GAYA HOGA..PLS BHAGWAN MERI MADAD KARO..(he says this n kneel down, by burying his face with his hands, then after a while he looks up to the statue n something comes to his mind and he says) agar neha sunset point pe nahi hai &am p;nb sp; kaali maa ke mandir pe nahi hai…. To kahin vo log mandir kea aage to nahi nikle..lekin aage to jungle hai..par iska koi bharosa nahi..lagta hai neha ko ye mandir kea aage hi le gaya hai… (thn he clears the tear drops from his eyes n then he goes out of the temple n starts the bike)

[after sometime sanjay reaches the place from where neha first ran away from rahul, n he then he gets down from the bike n calls nehaa] NEHAAA!!!!!!! (then suddenly sanjay notices some broken pieces of bangles on the ground… he picks it up n says) lagta hai meraa shaq sahi tha… rahul neha ko yahin laya hai… (n then rahul also goes on to the direction where neha ran to save herself)
…..(scene shifts to rahul….who is calling out her name constantly, after a while rahul notices a piece of duppata which can b seen from a corner of the tree, actually neha was trying to hide, rahul suddenly grabs her hand n neha shouts) N:- RAHUL CHORO MUJHE.. I SAID LEAVE ME.. (this time rahul slaps her, n starts taking her back to the same place from where they started running n after sometime when rahul was again trying to hit neha, suddenly some1 holds back his hand n when rahul turns back it was sanjay n rahul gets surprised to c him there) …….

This part ends here….. 😳


Edited by duyus - 18 years ago
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wow!! extra long part.. finally revealing the story.. keep it going.. cant to see how it all goes down!!
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Great 👏 👏 Continue soon n thx for your PM
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