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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART - VII

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hings were better than before & the atmosphere was eased out. No worries & no more stress.They were just waiting to meet Naina.Shalini suggested them to go back to academy & take some rest & come back later but they insisted to stay back…….all of them except Raj.He said he needs to go back to academy. He had some work……though he returned in just 2 hrs. He enquired about Naina & got a satisfactory reply. She was recovering……still unconscious but there was nothing to wory about.

Naina was shifted to the ward. Everyone wanted to see her. It was such a relief to see her in front of their eyes. Hours passed by…..but they were not smooth though not painful as they earlier were.

Pooja was in tears "Its all because of me".She was sorry for naina's condition & was repenting for being rude to Naina…..the girl whom she once called her best Friend & she has proved that she was a true friend.

"Kya hua hai teri wajah se…………." finally Alekh spoke. He was quite all this while.

"Kyun tujhe Naina ki yeh haalat dikhayi nahin deti kya"

"Punjaban…. Apne dimag ko jaasti kharch mat kar….vaise bhi upar waale ne tere ko dimaag hisaab se hi diya hai"

"Aankhen khol aur dekh kya hua hai teri wajah se…………..aaj itne dinon ke baad hum sab ek saath hain….pehle ki tarah….tere ko yeh dikhai nahin deta kya??"

"Aur raha sawaal Naina ka, woh theek hai……bilkul theek.Samjhi"

"Alekh is right Pooja.........Purani saari baatein bhool jaao. Its time for you guys to make a new beginning of a Friendship that will remain for ever "Rajveer tried to console Pooja.

"C'mon Pooja ab apne Shahrukh ki baat to tumhe maanni hi padegi, Haina??"Shalini made a successful attempt of making the atmosphere a bit lighter.

Another hour passed by, but Naina was still unconscious. Finally she moved...She moved her finger & then her hand.Everyone took notice of that. Shalini asked them to stay back.Naina was coming back to her senses but something was not rite. She looked in pain....her expressions were changing....something was reeling in her mind. She was in a semi-conscious state. For the nxt 5 minutes her face showed that she was in pain...she was restless & she was moaning.....there was a drop of sweat on her forehead. Something was disturbing her peace of mind & Rajveer knew what it was. He rose & went to her.......Shalini was not able to figure out what was wrong with Naina....Suddenly she opened her eyes & said something...........something that was so weak that even Shalini could not comprehend even though she was standing very close to her. But Rajveer knew what it was.............." Bhaiyya......"

And then she saw him........her Captain Sir. He sat next to her on the bed & softly wiped out those sweat from her forehead & gave her a very reassuring smile......she was feeling better....much better.

"How r u feeling...Cadet Naina 'Ah' Singh"

Naina could not help it now...a sweet little smile came on her face.

But d nxt moment that smile disappeared & she had a question ready for her Rajveer sir.

"Sir......"

"You did it Naina" He didnt even let her complete...he knew wat it was.

"Mission Accomplished Cadet Singh...congratulations!!!"

"Academy has accepted that your brother was not a traitor & very soon the whole country will come to know that......you brought him his lost glory"

"Tumhara Bhai aur Mera Dost ek Shaheed hai Naina.........Captain Navin Singh Ahluwalia is a martyr....and its all thanks to u"

There was a Pride so evident on her face........she was smiling though her eyes were wet...........& gradually tears started flowing out.........she has been holding so much of pain within her ever since she lost Navin...it was coming out. She was hysterical.

Alekh came closer "Mat ro Naina.......ab sab kuch theek ho gaya hai....tu jeet gayi hai Naina.Jis pal ka tujhe kab se intezaar tha yeh wohi pal hai....isko aise apne aasuon k saath mat behne de."

"Yes Naina...this moment is yours...Hold it forever" Raj said that with a heavy heart....but Naina could not control her outburst.......

She was exerting herself & she needed to calm down. Shalini asked her to calm down & when she realised Naina wont be able to get a grip over herself, she put her on sedatives. She needed lots of rest.......within next few minutes Naina passed out again.

Everyone walked out of the room when they were sure that Naina is fine except Shalini.......Naina was fine but Rajveer was not & Shalini wanted to know why......It was bothering her now.She needed to know what was going on in his mind & she went out to confront him.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay guys here's the next part.Please tell me how it was.No1 is replying here.I want ur feedback.
Waiting for ur comments.
Luv,
Sanya..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
gr8 part sanya 👏 ...wanna know y raj is tensed now 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
the story's very gripping Sanya.. post the next bit soon.. This is like watching a show on thursday and waiting until monday to know what happens next.. eagerly waiting to know what's next..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
its gr8.i am really eager to know what rajveer is hiding frm shalini and y is he tensed.pls sont make us wait more.pls continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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THanx a lot guys bt I still dont think I hve enuf replies to continue.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Dis was d first RN scene of my FF and itna cold response.Not done guys!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68

PART – VIII

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he luked for him all over the place & finally found him standing in a lonely corner.

"Whats wrong with you"

He looked at her from the corner of his eyes & then asked "Kyun, kya ho gaya?"

"Kya ho gaya??.......You must be kidding.Shakal dekhi hai apni....12 baj rahe hain"

"I was luking for u everywhere & you are standing in this lonely corner & anyways wat do u think you are doing here"

"Kuch Nahin" came a curt reply.

She was fuming wid anger "You know what, main yahan apne liye nahin aayi hoon.....I am here for you...........so dont show me attitude....you get dat"

No reply this time.

She took a deep breath & moved towards him....she then kept her hand on his shoulder & then he finally turned to her.She looked straight into his eyes & said,

"Alekh....." her voice was soft this time, "whats wrong with you"

"Bola na.....Kuch nhin"

"C'mon Alekh, Kuch to chal raha hai tere dimag mein.I can see that.Bata mujhe,baat kya hai"

After a long pause he finally answered,"Apun ne kuch dekha"

"Kya??"

"Jab Naina ko goli lagi thi aur phir Captain uske paas aaye the....kuch tha unki aankhon mein"

"Matlab"

"Apun ko lagta tha ki Captain Naina se baat nahin karte the kyunki unko lagta tha ki woh unse pyaar karti hai"

"Toh?"

"Toh yeh ki apun galat tha....apun ne dekha...Captain...Naina se pyaar karte hain"

Neelu was stunned.She could not react to that.After a pause she finally asked "Aur Naina??"

"Jahan tak apun usko jaanta hai....woh bhi"

"Apun ko nahin lagta ki un dono ko koi bhi yahan samjhega.........lekin tu is baare mein kisi se kuch bhi nahin bolegi....Samjhi"

"Cool!!" But she still looked confused.

He went closer to her & placed a peck on her forehead & put his arms around her waist "Chal".

Raj was sitting in d corridor, all alone. All d cadets had gone to get some refreshment.They hve hardly eaten anything all this while.

"CAPTAIN RAJVEER SINGH SHEKHAWAT....................enuf is enuf"

Shalini was literally shouting at him.He was amused to see her like that.He got up.

"Doc are you alrite??.....Please tell me if you are not.Yahan, is hospital mein bahut achche doctors mil jaayenge.......shayad aapke jitne achche nahin but phir bhi koi na koi to mil hi jaayega........Shud I call someone"

"Just shut up Captain"

But Raj was smiling

"Okay...Okay, Tell me ab maine kya kiya hai" He asked politely.

"kya kiya hai....captain mujhe aapse sirf yehi jaanna hai ki aapke dimag mein chal kya raha hai.Kab se dekh rahi hoon main you are occupied with something & I wanna know wat is it"

Rajveer's face became serious " You really wanna know"

"Yes" She was behaving like a stubborn child but even Raj wanted her to know & he explained her everything.

"No way Captain...you cant do that......I mean how could you"

"Dont Captain...I think this is hasty"

"Just calm down doc & you'll realise its not"

None of them spoke anything after that......however Shalini could not agree to Rajveer's decision.

"Sir mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai" Huda intervened.

"Sure Cadet".

Shalini excused herself & left.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Okay guys here's d nxt part.I kno I m trying ur patience now bt not for long.Nxt part mein I'll tell u wats up wid Raj and Huda.So now if u want me to post my nxt part soon to jaldi se send ur replies.b quick & I'll b quicker!!!!
Luv,
Sanya..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
pls continue soon.i cant wait.i am dying to know what is exactly going on in raj's mind.plsssssssssssssss.

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