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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: angeliclooks_me

dat was soooo touchin n awesome sanya!! 👏 amazingly written dear! 👏 n abt da last part... if im not wrong, naina holds raj's hand 😳 😳 😳 rite?? 😉 nyways... get well sooooooooooooooooooooooon 😉 🤗



Bang on Babes!! But socho heroine bimaar ho...Hero uska haath pakde aur woh react na kare , aisa bhi kabhi hota hai kya...😉

I kno dats soooo filmy bt ab itni hindi filmein dekhne se yehi hota hai....hehehe...
ne-ways Thanx for the compliment Juhi!!!😃

Kaash mere paas bhi ek Raj hota jo mera haath pakadta aur main jaldi se theek ho jaati.😉Tho I m feeling much better!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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So guys Here's the nxt part.Bt plzz I need more feedback. So I m waiting for ur replies.I need them to continue my FF wid speed.I hve finished writing more than half of my FF and I can be more quick with this.
Luv,
Sanya..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART – VI

H

e finally got up about to leave……….he slowly tried to place her hand back at the bed & took a step but couldn't take another. He was shocked…something had happened but his senses denied accepting dat………………………

"What happened Captain"

He slowly turned back……

His finger was clutched in Naina's hand……she was holding it somewhat tightly, though she still showed no movement…….but Shalini knew, a couple of seconds back she did react. Shalini rushed to call the doctors while Rajveer stayed back without making any attempt to release his finger from Naina's hand. Team of doctors & nurses rushed in & Rajveer stepped back & his finger slipped out.

All of a sudden there was a kind of chaos…….Doctors & nurses kept coming in & moving out…..all the cadets woke up with the sudden chaos in the corridor & they could not find either Rajveer or Shalini……They knew something had happened but that was good or bad, they didn't know that. The atmosphere was getting tensed & Rajveer came out. All the cadets wanted to know what was going on but he remained quiet……..He sank back in his chair without speaking even a single word………his silence was killing them. Bt they had no choice. Dr. Shalini suddenly came & saidd

"Captain please get these injections fast"

Rajveer took that prescription & hurried towards the medical store.

Shalini looked at the tensed cadets & told them that everything is gonna be fine very soon. Bt that didn't help them much.

Rajeer came back & handed over the injections to a nurse……….

Then there was no news …. No one knew what was happening inside. With every passing moment their apprehensions were increasing.

It took about another hour & finally the entire medical team came out. Shalini said she'll explain them everything & therefore, others left. Shalini looked sad…..she looked confused as if she didn't had words, she didn't know how to put it & where to start from. Every1 surrounded her but she still was not able to speak…….she looked at their faces….all the faces showed the same question & same fear….fear of loosing someone very special in their lives & Rajveer finally ran out of patience……

"For God's Sake Dr. Shalini, say something"

Shalini looked at him & lowered her eyes….she was still at loss of words.

Everyone's heartbeat increased when finally she opened her mouth because they knew they were not ready to face a bad news……….

"Guys………."

"Naina…….." she was stuttering.

"Naina agar tum logon ko aise dekhegi to…………"

she finally looked up & this time her eyes had mischief in them

"…to who phir se faint ho jaayegi"

"C'mon guys cheer up……she is out of danger"

"Phew……" a sigh of relief escaped everyone's mouth & then their lips spread out in a smile.

"Dr Shalini, you are absolutely incorrigible." Raj said that with some anger that was quite obviously pretentious becuse even he had a smile on his face…..& this time it was genuine & came from his heart.

"Thanks a lot for the compliment captain", saying this they gave each other a warm hug & Rajveer silently whispered in her ears "Thanks doc" & Shalini just returned a smile.

"Okay guys,listen to me now…Naina ki condition stable hai & she is out of danger lekin abhi use thodi der yahin rakha jaayega, ICU mein & then she'll b shifted to the ward jahan aap sab usse mil sakenge"

They were all so happy to hear that…..the corridor was suddenly filled with smiles, hugs & their loud cheerful voice…..or rather Noise!!!!!!!!

"Shhhhhhhhhhh………."

"Cadets behave yourselves, you all are in hospital…..silence" Shalini reprimanded.

Suddenly Rajveer's phone rang again.

"Is that BC, captain?"

& he nodded his head in negative, but expressions on his face changed suddenly…he was serious again.

"Excuse me" Rajveer said that & left.

He came back in 5 minutes

"Is there any problem captain" Shalini was curious

"No Doc …….nothing at all ….BTW did u inform BC" Rajveer was trying to ignore the topic….there was something he wanted to conceal……………that too from his confidant.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#54
woow 👏
its wonderful 👏 👏 👏 the way u xpress it 👏 👏 i can see it even 👏 👏 👏
cant wait 4 the next part.. 😃 😃 now tat Naina is kk.... 😛 😛 but wat's troublin' Raj???? 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#55
THanx sweety!!
And good ques minnee...Wats troubling Raj....Take a guess!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome jaanu....I m relishin ur FF....its kewl 👏 ....and extremely sowiee for not replying so far....I m so irreglar to IF ...that I dun get time to reply for every topic 😭 .....but I have been through every part of urs 😳 ....and its exceptional, extraordinary, magnificent, outstanding, preeminent, remarkable, singular, towering, uncommon, unusual...... 👏 and forgot to add.....I love Ritu's character in it....its kewl
Edited by sweetncute - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#57
dat was awesome sanya!! 👏 so ma guess was rite abt naina holdin raj 😃 nyways... wats troublin raj?? 😕 i realli hope he's not been called 2 da academy immediately 😭 😭 😭 or he's gonna have his trial 4 murderin ritu n nair 😭 nyways... plzz do post da next part asap! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thats Ok Swappy...bt itniiiiiiiiiii saari tareef...Hai Rabba!! I m flying.Plz do keep posting ur comments babes!!!Bt I m surprised...Maine Ritu ko Raj k hathon marw diya & u r Happy.......Khir tum khush te main bhi khush😉!!!!

Edited by sanyamalhotra - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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& Juhi well 1st guess was absolutely rite bt dis time.....well all I can say is ki jo chahe ho jaaye main atleast Raj ka trial nahin hone doongi ek nek kaam karne k liye...rther I m gonna get him promoted for dat.For d rest keep guessing & keep w8ing...just a couple of parts to go b4 I tell u wat it is!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No1 else intrested in replying ❓

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