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Posted: 18 years ago
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Plzzzz tell me if u guys r not interested.Should I discontinue??????Replies r not coming like it used to on LRLF!!!!

BTW Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot Chiya and Tas!!!Atleast u guys replied!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for not replying but plzzzzzzzzzzz do continue.
u r awesome writer.i love ur fanfic.
post soon waiting.........
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
wonderful story i really liked ur story. pls cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Sanya.. the wait for part 8 was realllllly long.. please try and post the next part soon.. Love reading the FF.. I love the way you can make the story so gripping 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#75
really eager to know wats going to happen
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the nxt part soooooooooooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: luckyrobin


hey Sanya.. the wait for part 8 was realllllly long.. please try and post the next part soon.. Love reading the FF.. I love the way you can make the story so gripping



THnx a lot dear...dats really flattering.actually d response has been much colder ever since FF got shifted to this section & dats sooo discouraging.i m working on d end of d FF & I hve not been able to write or think properly for a past few days.

Ne-ways may I kno ur name....wat shud I call u??
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART – IX

"S

ir mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai" Huda intervened.

"Sure Cadet".

Shalini excused herself & left.

"Yes Cadet Huda"

"Sir......I m Sorry"

"Kis liye cadet"

"For everything"

Raj forced a smile on his face "Its Okay Cadet.....You dont have to be sorry.Galtiyan kisi se bhi ho sakti hain....forget about it"

"Sir main yahaan sirf galti ki maafi maangne nahin aaya hoon...use sudharne aaya hoon"

"I didnt get you Cadet Huda"

"Kuch kehne se pehle main kuch poochna chahta hoon sir.....Please sach-sach batana"

"Okay Cadet Huda.....Poochiye"

"You love her....dont you"

Rajveer was not expecting this.He could not say anything.

"I am waiting sir"

Rajveer took some time & finally made up his mind "Yes........lekin main........"

"Aur kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai sir....Main jaanta tha, bas aapke mooh se sunna chahta tha & believe me sir aaj mere dil mein aapke against kuch nahin hai"

"Phoolan ko aapki zaroorat hai sir...hamesha se thi"

Rajveer could never expect this from Huda.He could not believe his ears.

"You have grown up Huda......You have grown up a lot"

"Maine jo bhi seekha hai, aap hi se seekha hai sir"

"Sir jise jo kehna hai, kehne dijiye.....lekin ab Naina ka saath kabhi mat chodiyega. Sir.......you are her strength, her inspiration & her............Love"

"Aisa tum sochte ho Cadet Huda...main ya Naina nahin"

"Nahin Si......"

"Mera ek kaam karoge" Raj didnt let him complete.

"Sure Sir"

He took out a piece of paper from his pocket & handed it over to him.

"Jab Naina ko hosh aa jaaye to use yeh de dena"

"Yeh kya hai sir"

"You may read it if u want"

Huda kept that piece of paper in pocket "uski zaroorat nahin hai sir..."

"....Lekin yeh aap khud use kyun nahin de dete"

"Batata hoon...Come with me"

Huda quietly followed Raj.

Shalini & all the other cadets were waiting for Raj & Huda.

"Cadets mujhe aap logon se kuch zaroori baat karni hai"

"Baat kya hai sir" Ali was curious.

"Baat yeh hai cadets ki main is academy mein jis kaam ke liye aaya tha woh ab poora ho chuka hai.......Now its time for me to go"

Everyone was left dumbstruck with this announcement.And especially Huda.....He had to oppose that.

"You cant do that sir"

Rajveer pat on his shoulder "Mera aur aap logon ka saath bas yahin tak tha......lekin main chahta hoon ki aap log aage badhein aur apne raaste khud dhoonde.Aap sab mein bahut kabliyat hai & I hope ki aapka batch KMA ki history mein ab tak ka best batch saabit hoga.I want to wish u guys all the best aur main ummeed karta hoon aap sabhi is desh ke behtareen sipahi ban ke dikhayenge"

"Sir when exactly you'll have to leave" Yudi enquired & the answer gave them another shock

"Rite now"

Shalini was still not sure about all this & it showed on her face. Raj went to her.

"Thanks a lot for being such a wonderful friend doct....errr....Shailini"

That brought a smile on her face & they hugged each other.

"I wish I could say that about you Raj.....anyways you take care & keep in touch"

"You too Shalini.......Byee"

Raj turned to Huda.He was trying very hard to understand why Raj was doing all this & Rajveer read his thots.

"Mujhe to jaana hi tha Huda...Tumhe to pata hai na....."

"....But you take care Huda.....apna aur....."

He didnt say anything after that & left. He didnt turn back to see them...not even for once.Not just that he didnt even met Naina. He just left.

They all deep down knew the reason.They have started to respect the relationship that Rajveer & Naina shared, the relationship that was once looked down upon.But they were right,it wasnt just a mentor-cadet relationship,it wasnt just freindship,it wasnt just concern.........the two of them were bonded by a very beautiful relationship that could not be described.Even Love was too small a word for that.Though no one said anything but they all knew there was just one reason behind this decision.........his cadet....Naina 'Ah' Singh.For her sake he was leaving the hospital, the academy & the city……………& it was for her sake that he didnt want to look back ever..................................

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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon fast asap.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
continue fast......... 😃 😃
but why Raj leaving??.. 😭 😭 😭 dont he want naina... 😭 😭 😭
plz.. 😭 😭 😭 RN..b 2gethr 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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RN ki life mein twists and turns itne saare hote hai...wat can I do in dat.
BTW Raj is going bcoz his job in KMA is over and he's leaving Naina bcoz firstly Naina is his student(d same old prob) & secondly he thinks she doesnt love him(as I indicated in Raj-Huda convo)
Baaki RN ka future main future mein bataungi........

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