-Dil Jo Bhi K@he//CLOSED :( - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Numera*

cool story!! hmm so wait how can krips be friends with angad's sister but never actually meet him?? anyways hun i love the story!! its soo good! continue soon!

kripa has been in Londan for 6 or 10 years and the last time angad and kripa saw eachother was when they were little so they dont remeber eachother
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
great part can't wait for the next 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tava

great part can't wait for the next 😊

thankoooo 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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gweet story oww poked my eye again its funny its sounds cool and funny continue soon i no i dont make sence i wanna read kripas entry continues people....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

gweet story oww poked my eye again its funny its sounds cool and funny continue soon i no i dont make sence i wanna read kripas entry continues people....

Kripas entry is going to be the funnyest from all the parts😳

Awww you poked your eye😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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* I Might Post The Next Part Tomrrow! 😳 *
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: savina_101

* I Might Post The Next Part Tomrrow! 😳 *

Next part in a few minutes😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank god i have been waiting forever 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 3
Recap:
M.C-And Josh Sharma passes the ball to Laksh headers the ball toward Angad..ok thats it the last 5 secs of the game and its all down to angad forefully,with all his strengh,kicks the ball straight in the net...YESS! ITS A GOAL! CHAMPION CUP GOES TO THE MUMBAI ALL-STARS!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
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We switch to a different soccer field and we see a high boot going toward a net and SCORE!
Someone:YESSS!!!!
M.C: Anisha Khanna scores and wins the champion cup
for her team!
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Next we see Angad in a car with Anisha,Savina,Nisha
Ang:ummm why I'am I taking u guys to the airport again
N-because mom said so
Ang-u guys have ur own cars!
Ani-mine broke down
S-so did mine
N-I don't have one
Ang;well were at the airport now get OFF
Ani:don't go anywere!
Ang;I won't
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We see a girl walk down the stairs from the plane
Shes wearing this
Ani: Kripa!
K:OMG hi u guys!
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Kripas throwing her suit cases at Angad
K: here driver!
Ang thinking: What I don't even look like a driver!
they all get in the car
Angad starts to drive reallly FAST
K: OMG wat a driver doesn't even know how to drive!
Angad steps the breaks really hard
K: how rude!
Nisha starts to laugh
K: I rather go in a taxi!
Kripa gets out of the car
she slams the door (real hard)
and calls a taxi
Ang: who is she? and wat does she think of her self " Miss Perfect"
Ani: shes Kripa are friend
Ang: your friends with that Glam Babrie wait the reminds me of someone
N: who?
Ang: of course Savina u dumbo
S: How Rude
Ani: good one Angad!
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Anisha phones kripa
A: Hey
K: Hi.....
A: sorry about the driver thing by the way that was my brother Angad not are driver
K; oh.......... well i'm still mad at him!
A: i just phoned u to tell u about were throwing a party tonight
K: for wat?
A; we won the champion cup and it's also a welcome back party for u
K: oh cool i'll be there
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N: Angad u know who that was
Ang: who that glam barbie
N; tht was Josh 's sister!
Ang: what!
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(back to the phone convo)
A; ok wait someone as to say something to u
Anisha hands the phone to Angad
Ang: Sorry K R I P A
K; it's all right.................
Kripa hangs up!
Preview: We see a big house with people screming and dancing
Ok please leave lotssssssssssss and lotsssssssssss of comments sorry about the short part!
Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the comments unum ali and nehagupta_9
just maybe two more comments and I'll cont 😛

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