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anon343

@Anon12378

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: savina_101

How Rude😆

See...There you Go Again With the Comments! I'm Telling you stop! 😆 Anyways I wanted to let the readers know that savina will continue today..So Nisha Dont worry about it i hope you read my part....

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Savina

@savina_101

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#22

!Part Two!😳

Recap:we might as well start walking,Angad said calmly.
Savina looked at angad in disbelief
Savina:Walk???
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Angad:Yea walk waht else are we gonna do dumbo
Savina dragged herslef...while walking..she just couldnt keep up
Savina was about to fall but Nisha held her arm
Anisha starts to laugh
Angad:GUYS STOP LAUGHING AND HURRY UP!
A mintue later Savina trips
Savina start whining
S:I DON'T WANT TO WALK!!!!!
N:GET UP! WERE GETTING LATE!
S: how rude...
Savina gets up
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5 mintues later we see a car pull up beside Angad and his sibs the window slides down
Someone:need a ride?
Angad: Laksh aren't you supose to be at the game
Laksh:well Nania autie told me she left u guys there..I mean we cant win without are best player right?
Angad:yea..dats me...*Angad said proudly*
Angad hops in
Anisha,Savina,Nisha are about to get in but.....it wasnt in there destiny... 😆
Angad: Wait! hes my friend so I'm the one going with him not u guys
S:uh! what
they drive off and Nisha throws a rock at the car and gives a satisfied smile.
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5 mintues later we see the same car pull up
Angad:get in*rolling his eyes*
N: yea right 1st you tell us to get in when were half way there!
Angad:Just shut-up and get in
Anisha:No 😡
Angad:Sure?
Ssavina:Hey wait for me...leave these loosers behind 🤢
*Nisha pushes Savina Outta the way*
Nisha:Move
savina:Ahh How Rude *little brat*
Angad:will you guys Get in already! I have a game to win
Anisha:who says your goning to win? ...*Duffer* & both of you get your stinkin butts over here
S:toodles
N:yea peace out
Anisha: Even you Nisha......Uhh! Fine* Rolls her eyes&crosses her arms* I'm coming
Angad: then stop talking dufus and get in.
Anisha gets in and smacks the door shut.
L: hey what did the door ever do to you?
Anisha: oh nothing I just felt like it I was thinking of it...as Angads head
Savina giggles
Anisha: and savinas hand
Savina *sighs*
Nisha high-fives Anisha
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Angad hops out of the car and runs across the field with laksh.On the other hand nisha runs down the feild where her soccer game is being held.Savina calmly walks down the feild.While running to her game Anisha screams FASTER FASTER to savina.Savina all most falls over,and Anisha enjoys another laugh.
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M.C-And Josh Sharma passes the ball to Laksh headers the ball toward Angad..ok thats it the last 5 secs of the game and its all down to angad forefully,with all his strengh,kicks the ball straight in the net...YESS! ITS A GOAL! CHAMPION CUP GOES TO THE MUMBAI ALL-STARS!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT
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Thats it for now...Please comment I worked really hard and this is the 1st part I've ever thought up but it as typed by Anisha 😳 please ignore any spelling mistakes i was in a rush 😳

Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago

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Neha

@miss_neha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 18 years ago

#23

gr8 part... pls do cont soon

p.s wen r u gunna hav kripas entry

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Rutu

@berkeleygirl818

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

GRT part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 LUVED it!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!! 😃

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Savina

@savina_101

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
gr8 part... pls do cont soon

p.s wen r u gunna hav kripas entry

in the next part

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Savina

@savina_101

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
GRT part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 LUVED it!!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!! 😃

thanks...................😳

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Madiha

@Dark Love

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

grrreat part!! aww man they got a ride 😆 😳.. and our champion won, of course 😉 😳 so when is kripa's entry comin?? continue soon 👏

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Savina

@savina_101

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: erier101
grrreat part!! aww man they got a ride 😆 😳.. and our champion won, of course 😉 😳 so when is kripa's entry comin?? continue soon 👏

kripas entry is going to be in the next part

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Numera

@Numera*

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#29

cool story!! hmm so wait how can krips be friends with angad's sister but never actually meet him?? anyways hun i love the story!! its soo good! continue soon!

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Sharmin

@Shazii

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#30

just read it its brilliant pls cont soon

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