-Dil Jo Bhi K@he//CLOSED :( - Page 6

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Posted: 18 years ago
#51
COOL prt, this FF is REALLY interesting!!!!! 👏
continue soon!!!! 😃


p.s. sorry for not commenting earlier, just a bit lazy!!!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

COOL prt, this FF is REALLY interesting!!!!! 👏
continue soon!!!! 😃


p.s. sorry for not commenting earlier, just a bit lazy!!!! 😳 😳

aww thanks😳

Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part continue soon

thanks😳 just need 3 more comments😊
Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part plz. continue soon

thanks!😳 2 more comments till i cont😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i'll conut your comment only 1 more comment till i cont😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yay i commented so nowe u r going to have to continue 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: tava

yay i commented so nowe u r going to have to continue 😊

lol😆 now it's time to cont
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58


😳 !Part 5! 😳
Recap:
Misty is trying to hog Angad but Kripa always intruped
(so it's fight for Angad)
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We see people screaming and running out the house
then we zoom into a house
we see Angad,Josh,Prithvi and Laksh sitting on one sofa
and Kripa,Anisha,Savina and Nisha sitting on another
Nisha goes up to Naina
Ni:mom i didn't do anything!
A: oh yea sure Nisha mom guess who was the host of the party?
Na:Nisha sit down!
Ni: arrrrr i thought i had this one
Na: We all go out for dinner and this is wat u do throw a party!? u guys are grounded!
G:I totally agree with Naina!
L:i think i better go now bye everyone!
Na: wait a mintue Laksh already called ur parents and they have grounded u to so no point of going!
Laksh sighs and sits down
we see Naina taking car keys and cell phones from Angad,Anisha,Savina and telling Nisha that she cannot go one the computer or use any phone in the house
we zoom to a car
G: Josh and Prithvi u too are grounded so hand we over ur cell phones and car keys
P: mom what about kripa!
she just came back so shes not grounded and she didn't even know about the party!
kripa thinking: whew i thought i would have to book plane tickets back to London
P: Kripa would u plzz give us a ride to school tomorow
K:of course not!
P: come on Kripa ur the best sister I've ever had
J: Prithvi shes your only sister
P: oh yea...
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😊 !Next Day! 😊
We see Angad,Josh,Prithvi and Laksh are
walking to school
we see a car pull up beside them
it's Kripas car!
and Anisha,Savina and Nisha are sitting in it with Kripa
Kripa honks at them
and goes past them
'SPLAT'
we see the boys totally covered in mud!
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In class Angad and Josh enter in
the whole class starts to laugh!
Professer: Angad Josh u guys are late and covered in mud
the whole class starts to laugh again
Pro: QUIET!
Angad and Josh look around to find a seat
A: were do we sit?
Pro: on the ground
A: wat!
Pro: sit!
they sit down
Pro: ok class line up here and get the note about are project were going to do
Kripa and the girls line up
kripa says sumthing to Anisha
then when she sees Angad is about to get up she sticks her foot infront of Angad and he trips right on his face!(owwwwwwww )
The class starts to laugh
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Preview: I don't know 😆
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Ok thats it for now leave me lotzzzzzzzzzzzzz and lotzzzzzzzzzzzzz of comments plzz!!! 😳




Edited by savina_101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#59
yah first to comment funny part can't wait for the next 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: tava

yah first to comment funny part can't wait for the next 😊

thanks😳

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