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Posted: 4 years ago

“Its an iphone 8? Not a Pro G max 20 10 Terabyte” she mocked

“You are fine with him texting your pictures to himself?


In the need to show the class difference between their worlds, Viveka should really not act stupid.


And why does she run away to her parent's place every time matters get uncomfortable and he has to come looking for her each time?

Yes Raanav has his own prejudices about the middle class and he has been quite vocal about it, but whatever is happening now regarding Naina and Inder is not his fault.


I miss that cool easy going Viveka from the beginning of the story. This Viveka is letting what is going on around her take over her personality.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Riding elephants

If the wedding was truly a joke, why is Inder using it now? Does he not think it was a joke? Or he is just throwing it out to buy time with his mother?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Drunken married or married drunk

How dare Naina accuse her parents of hating her? Anu said it right. Its love when they even care to know. If they truly hated her, they didn't have to care.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka is a floating presence in the Parashar residence.. it's like there's nothing to anchor her if not for Raanav and Satyen!


Viveka and Raanav are both so mature usually, it's interesting to see them acting up!

Veev is ashamed of what happened and probably worried about how this will affect her own marriage.. Raanav already had his mom's and his own prejudices to deal with, now add to it Satyen and his own wife's judgments!

They're both probably hypersensitive to any and all, real and perceived slights.. hoping to defend themselves, they're both already on the offensive!! 😆


Btw, not just cute, it was also brave of Raanav to go pick her up from Rohini.. 😆Given the latest breaking news, I wouldn't really fault him for wanting to avoid Rohini for a while! Just like Viveka might be wishing to bypass Smrita.. ummm, maybe for a century or two!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka and Anu conversation while having/making hot chocolate was revealing..no surprising.

Anu wants Viveka to talk to Inder because Naina will not ? Why ? Should it not be the parents? Why drag Viveka here? I thought she told Vi earlier she is the parent.

The deed is done,rather than worrying about Naina it is what Bua will think, what Vi inlaws will think. At least rightfully Vi did object that Naina should talk to Inder and not her.

Plus to tell the twins (who are grown up ..20 I think) that not to worry about their sister internet marriage...what is wrong with the Mathurs.

If Inder wants to stay married with Naina seems they all will be happy and agree...to save face ?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Naina honestly did not know about the pictures or was pretending not to know? Seems hard to believe that she didn't.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka keeps taking all the blame on herself and Naina conveniently lets her. All Viveka is doing is playing Naina's game. She needs to support Naina while calling her out on her mistakes.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Pro G Max

For now maybe the family just needs to wait and watch what Inder does. He has a gameplan whatever it is.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Jerk… free

Papa had asked her last night when he was returning and she had casually indicated “This weekend some time”

He hadn’t bothered to call her back after that Monday? Night to talk about it

Agreed, she should not have mocked him But he was freezing her off

Dadi and Dadu were returning for breakfast itself Papa received a text from Piyush

Mayank Awasthi’s parents wanted to meet Akash about the Karuna alliance

It was a shock to all the Mathurs

They did not believe in daughters being married before completing education and setting forth on a career

But instead of being rude, since Awasthis were related to Varsha Asthana Papa agreed to entertain one meeting

They were likely to come by in the evening

Karuna had refused to be home for that, being completely shocked such a proposal would arrive like in the movies

“Arey andar aao na beta” Akash greeted Raanav

Dressed in his Saturday best, jeans and an orange plaid flannel shirt, he looked very much the part of a wealthy scion of a elite business family

“How is everyone?” Raanav asked politely

“theek hain” Akash mumbled grabbing the fallen newspapers from the floor and picking up his tea cup

Anu was downstairs at a yoga class as a friends had suggested she try that for dizziness related to BP

Naina was in the shower, the twins were asleep

Viveka was up early to hang with Papa, they had gone for a walk around the society in the foggy end of January morning, Viveka and Papa talked about how the Naina matter was going to play out

She told Papa Smrita had gone off to Nasik to be with Satyen… for no reason

Viveka did not know what was cooking

She did not hear from Nupur or Inder

She wondered if the Inder even had been a one time thing or of Inder was planning something more to disrupt

Satyen had called her multiple times to check on something about the NGO and she had called him a couple times to check on him

“Aapka husband hamari khabar nahi deta aapko”

“Oh sure I do get it, but I tho… I was concerned”

“Mum’s here beta she has my feet and wrists clamped down” he laughed

She cares for you” she muttered

“I am lucky… just like Raanav is” Satyen insisted

“I will remember to tell him that”

“U know what DON’T I WILL”

“Oh?? Umm”

“Aur kya kahoon?”

“Umm.. nothing” she was suddenly shy

“I am going to tell him he needs to pamper you like a princess, and lay a bed of rose petals under your feet and never say no to you”

“He wont believe it but yeah sure” she had laughed

“He is a lucky man” “I cannot wait to see you beta”

“Me too u.h.. um.. Dad”

“U can call me Satyen if that’s too hard”

“I know in the West they use first names for in laws”

“Your Mum will lose it, we should try and prank her sometime”

“Deal”

This man… this man!!

This man made her feel welcome, was kind, did not talk family politics, did not judge her, did not ridicule her

He had not once asked her about the insurance or car repair or where it was at

He had quietly paid the workshop and left insurance completely out of it

He had had a “chat” with lekha to rein in her hysterics on the matter as well

It was no longer freezing cold, papa had closed all the glass balcony windows, the sun was beginning o shine through, with no damp laundry the balcony was a great place to be grating carrot

“Viveka betaaaa”

“papa I want to switch out, can you get me a bigger bowl for the gratings?” she yelled back

She was ensconced in the swing, with her ipad playing a TV show on CC, with FM playing on the radio

Raanav knew her hideout, he just walked right in

She handed a bowl of grated carrot

He took it from her

“which show?” he asked, he knew which one it was…. Gossip Girl

She turned startled to find him holding the large steel bowl

“Tum kab aaye?” she said weakly trying not to show how nervous she was

“that’s a nice welcome” he muttered setting the bowl back down and tucking his hand into his pocket and leaning on the door jamb

She scooted making room for him, not bothering to get up to greet or hug

He sat down deliberately letting his thigh overpower her

“Raa…” she scowled followed by an Uff!! And pushing up of glasses

“what are you watching?”

“Gossip Girls!” she shrugged

They watched quietly for a minute or two

“Why are you listening to FM?”

“I love Sunday morning FM they play old songs”

“How old”

“From the time I was a baby, not Raj Kapoor old” “Or Raanav old”

“Ah” he laughed under his breath

“Can I help?”

“Haath dhokar aao”

She didn’t fawn over him… ever

If she was doing it on the inside, he could not tell

Well… she was married to him wasn’t she?

He chuckled smugly

“I am not washing my hands now” he growled

“Theek hai main khud kar loongi”

“You knew I was returning last night” he was not happy

“Jaanti hoon”

“U were there until 7?”

“8” she said gleefully, she was lying, the guards probably spotted her leaving

“Is my surround sound done?”

“Nope”

“why not”

He reached for her hand, she fought it and finally relented with a groan

He was gorgeous and persistent

Sunday mornings were magical back home

“I didn’t call the AV guy I thought what if he saves my number and started calling me at midnight?” she sweetly smiled turning to him

“Witch” he grit his teeth

“Return my hand”

“No” he sat there, as she held the bowl and the grater and a half grated gajar in her hand balancing all on her thigh

He reached and shut off the TV show

And grabbed her phone by reaching across her and shutting off her phone

She pushed him off her body, the thankfully empty bowl clattered on the dhurrie

Papa did not check on them

Gingerly walked up to the bedroom and shut the door instead and stood guard nearby… kinda…

“U didn’t go run? Why are you so dressed up?’

“what? This?” He yanked the shirt tail

“Hmm… at least compared to me”

“I li…” he gently crept his hand up to grab a sliver of carrot from a few inches below her collar bone

She slapped his hand off

She is going to make him agonize he realized

“Kya lene aaye yahan?” she asked innocently

“We seem to love playing this game”

“Its not like I was not going to return… and have you come for me” she said sadly

He was pissed she didn’t didn’t have that expectation

He wanted to be wanted

He was a jerk

But he wanted to be wanted

“Dad said I didn’t have to feel obligated to be there, and should choose where I wanted to be”

She inadvertently irritated him by mentioning the man who he didn’t fancy at all at the moment

“Huh” he grunted

“Mera haath chhodoge?” she asked politely

“Free it” he goaded tightening his grip linking his fingers into her slim slender soft ones

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Posted: 4 years ago

Viveka should know that Ranaav cares. He always comes after her.

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