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Posted: 4 years ago

Btw, just WHAT is Inder's motivation now?

HE broke up. Refused to talk or anything, got back together due to Naina's insistence. Then refused to talk about any possibility of marriage to Aakash... AFTER having a prank marriage!!

Keeps swaying on his decisions like a drunk pendulum!!

Now what?

Is it the fact that Naina was the one to breakup this time? Sooo, he suddenly realized his love? He can't live without her?

Or maybe suddenly realized he isn't mute?


Pata nhi.. very weird, that guy is!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Age is just a number. Does not necessarily make you wise. Naina actions is not just juvenile has caused her self harm...wonder if she will get her act together. Annul the web marriage and not act in anger and spite for her own good.

Look forward to Anu conversation with her

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Posted: 4 years ago

Raanav is hiding his own truth with not just his family even with viveka. He needs to start communicating to her that their marriage is not just for their parents sake but he wanted to marry her..I am sure it won’t go well with viveka but wonder when this guy will come out and express himself. He shut down not because Naina issue but out of guilt. Poor vi wondering he is upset because of their middle class family 🤦🏽‍♀️


Naina - this girl goes beyond our expectations when we think this is the worst, she does much more that crosses the previous one..I am sure this women has not learnt yet and their is more to come.

Happy Friday!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Drunken married or married drunk

“Do you have ANY idea what a disaster it is for our family, if people find out that Mathurs’ daughter got married secretly by an internet ordained pastor?

Naina began to cry

Akash’s anger could not manage to tear her up

Anu’s one line achieved it

“Umm.. Ma it was a prank” Naina whimpered

“It was clearly not a prank…. He told his mother his mother told Veev, now she probably already has told Karen ya Sophie ya jo bhi hai Mrs Tandon, and Bua, this is bad….”

“Did you plan to live with him?” Akash asked her quietly

“I DUMPED him Papa”

“Phir us se pehle tumhe annul nahi karni thi shaadi ko”

“Divorce hota Akash” Anu cringed as she corrected him, this was NOT a non consummated relationship of two silly teens, this was a live in relationship prank

Akash looked really upset

Naina sat there sobbing, Viveka looked up from her book

Naina begged her again

“Ma… main baat karoon?”

“Tumhe kuch aur horseshit khilayegi tumhari behen and then we will all be in the dark until we find out there is a love child”

“MAAA” Naina shrieked

“Ma you are being ridiculous” Viveka interjected

“This is not appropriate behavior Veev aur maine aapki rai nahi poocchi” Anu was stern

“You are being…”

“veev? Chup” anu warned

“You are proving that you hate me” Naina insisted

“NO I am proving that I LOVE YOU, PAPA LOVES YOU. We want to get you out of this mess, otherwise we would have been fast asleep now”

Naina lowered her gaze

“Aur kaun kaun tha kamre mein?” “Us din” Akash went on his phone

“I cant remember” Naina got up and ran and hugged Akash

“Beta abhi nahi” he gently put a distance between them

“Kitne log gaye tumhare saath Dubai?”

“In that penthouse wer were like 12”

Anu sighed

She did not know when or how things got this far with Naina

She seemed to have the exact same days and nights in this very flat

How?

“I didn’t go to get married” Naina joined her hands in prayer and sobbed into it

Viveka jumped up and ran to her and hugged her

“You tell them, they love YOU”

“Shshhhhh shhhh”

“Ma please?” Viveka begged

“We have not yelled at her we have not verbally abused her we have not hit her, we have not thrown her out of the house” Anu said through grit teeth

“Let her explain Ma?” Viveka begged

“I don’t remember ANYTHING veev… I had 3 glasses of wine” Naina was distraught

“Dekho peekar shaadi kar lee aur pata bhi nahi” Akash muttered

“I am sorry Papa I didn’t think any of it was serious OK?”

“Ive done a bunch of stupid things too Maaa… you know…. I waited and waited to get married, just pursued a dumb unattainable Ph D and delayed Naina’s chances” Viveka nodded grimly

“That has nothing to do with the fact that, Naina eloped”

“I mean I actually delayed her Dadi kept harping badi kin ahi hui to beech waali ki kyon kar doge remember, since I turned 20”

“Har baat mein aap meri Ma ko beech mein mat lao beta” Akash was irritated that Viveka was defending Naina

Viveka had the most to lose

So much humiliation awaited her at Parashars tomorrow

She had basically lived up to Raanav’s expectation, by letting her sister elope

“Raanav will think YOU instigated her”

“that’s HIS choice Papa” Viveka said calmly

“You have been married for a month and 10 days now? This is not good for any of us” Anu said

“We are just speculating that everyone knows Ma… they might not”

“Why is he even telling his mother this?” Anu accused Naina

“I DON’T KNOWWWW I have broken up with him since Lohri”

She extended her phone to Ma

“Shaadi ke photo hain?” Anu asked swiftly

“I don’t know” she mumbled

“Lao do mujhe phone”

“I will get you water” Viveka whispered

Viveka returned with water and started heating milk for hot chocolate

She leaned on the counter and stared at the stove

She looked at her phone no texts or calls from Raanav Parashar, he was downing shots with the young interns at Power Engineers scowling to himself

“HAI PHOTOS USKO to HOSH hi nahi tha” Anu stormed into the kitchen waving Naina’s phone furiously

Viveka turned to her mother startled….

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Posted: 4 years ago

Glad this is a fictional story 😊 Anyway coming to the update as more of Naina is revealed be by her comments or actions one is left thinking ..she is 30 , has dated before, has world exposure ,is also educated but she is naive,gullible,not wordly and lives in a bollywood utopian world. She needs intervention.


Same is true for Viveka who said that Naina is in this state because of her as she being the eldest refused to marry so delayed Naina's marriage.🙈 Given the situation Naina is in (marrying someone intoxicated..and having seen those pictures when wide awake...did nothing)...ignoring that her sister is actually dumb and needs serious help even if she gets out of this sham marriage.

Glad Anu behaved as a parent and said so to Viveka and to back off.

Like your twist to original P &P...look forward to what happens next in this story. Happy Saturday 😘

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am actually getting tired of Viveka siding Naina all the time and blaming herself. And playing the class card with her husband.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Parents usually tell their little kids to not to talk to strangers, not go away with them if they are lured and always immediately tell their parents if any such incident happens.

I am sure Anu and Akash have given this advice to their kids too. And Naina even being close to 30 years of age did not understand the seriousness of this advice?


She goes away with a guy hardly known to her, to a different country, gets drunk among 12 other people there, and has no idea if she got married even? Does she even realise how much of a danger she put herself in?

Sorry, but she needs help and a harsh reality check about the outside world.


And same goes to Viveka too. She cannot and should not be taking the blame of her sister's actions on herself. If Viveka really loves her sister, then she should allow intervention in her sister's life. And frankly, Viv too needs some kind of counselling about how not to whitewash her sister's mistakes. Because doing this will only harm Naina in the long run and will not help her.

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Posted: 4 years ago

From the start to the end, Anubha was every bit savage here!! Every word 👏

Someone really needs to deal Naina a hard blow.. it doesn't look like she realizes the gravity of the situation. Her words and actions feel like she just wants to somehow be let off the hook.. that this episode be forgiven and forgotten, just because she doesn't care much for it!!


To a large extent, I understand Viveka's actions and concern towards her sister. But in not calling out her faults, she's actually enabling Naina's drama..

Must be so hard to deal with this.. feel terrible for A&A and Veev. Apart from worrying about Naina, they'll be the ones who'd have to take responsibility for her actions!! 🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago

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There were 10s of pictures of that evening on Naina's phone, 100s she had additionally received over text

In many Inder and Naina were staring at each other moony eyed…. There were giggling videos drinking and general good times

“Hmm” Viveka groaned

“Tumhe kuch kaha usne?”

“Nahi ma”

“Abhi who banda apni Mom ko keh raha hai iska yeh matlab hai he wants a life with Naina?”

“I don’t know” Viveka felt a knot in the pit of her stomach

All the conversations she had had with Raanav on the topic came back to her in waves

“Not every middle class girl has her binoculars trained on a wealthy man in the room”

“Wealthy men are not as attractive as you have been made to believe”

“Its OK if you overestimate yourself, but being heterosexual underestimating someone of the opposite gender reduces your marketability”

“I invite you to tour Delhi so you can see for yourself the number of eligible men in officess and businesses, I doubt my sister or I need men to fly down from London and offer themselves”

NOW she was married to one of them and her sister had secretly married another one

She felt waves of anger disgust and pain

“Tum baat karogi Inder se?”

“He does not know my mother in law told me about his childish dipsh—behavior”

“Tell her you are going to talk to him then”

“Why cant Naina do it?”

“she insists she has broken up with him and will not talk to him”

Viveka rolled her eyes as she poured out the hot chocolate

“I am just hoping it never gets to Bua

“I am also hoping IIT reverses its decision and admits me”

“This is so much unnecessary drama”

Viveka nodded setting up a tray

“Raanav se baat ki?”

“Umm.. nahi he is out at a team building event with the interns at Nasik”

“Usko to pata hi hoga?”

“Nahi jaanti Maaa” Viveka was a bit irritated

“Sorryyyy” Anu was upset too

“raanav jo bhi sochega uski mujhe chinta nahi” she said bitterly

“TUMHE kya hua?” Anu whispered pulling her arm urging her to stop right outside Viveka’s door

“Kuch bhi nahi”

“Did he ridicule you?”

“No…. not yet”

“Kya kiya hai is ladki ne” Anu groaned

“Don’t worry for me…. I am sure I can take care of my situation”

“You married him ceremonially, legally, fully conscious… you shouldn’t be sacrificing your marriage “

You sound like Naina was asleep” Viveka found her humor

“Soti rehti to hum… soti rehti to main Inder ko phone karke jhaar sakti thi” Anu whispered

They sipped their hot chocolate quietly

None of them knew what the best next step was

Naina lay down beside Viveka

Viveka checked her phone again

Nope… no texts

She left for Parashars the next day, cringing as she walked through the atrium

There was no one at home

There was no expectation of any house work or chores from her

It felt like she was living in a life long luxury resort

Every time she attempted to grow a sense of belonging to the ultra wealthy surroundings something was disrupting it

There was no sign of her MIL anywhere, Lekha pulled her into a random conversation for a half hour when Viveka went back out to the gate to check if Rathiji was around and was returning to her suite walking over the well manicured front lawn

She wanted to go to her NGO office

She showered and took a nap

The day went by….. and then a few more days

Mathurs’ Rohini apartment looked like nobody lived there

Papa dropped Dadu and Dadi off at Bua’s just to clear the mind

Naina was being very polite very dutiful and very quiet

The twins

Were stunned to hear about Naina

Anu advised them not to make a big deal about it

The help came by to tell her the cleaners had lost one of Raanav’s sea green shirt

She texted him hesitantly

“the cleaners might have misplaced your sea green shirt… I am told”

He didn’t respond for a few hours

“ Sorry your Mum probably told you” she told him immediately

“No she did not Viveka Mathur, I don’t stay in the same room as her, so I did not know”

She lost it when she saw the sarcasm

“When you didn’t respond for 5 hours I assumed you had heard”

“No She does not walk through my closet”

She left it at that

The next couple days she was at Parashars going back to Rohini on Friday night

On Thursday having yet another run in with Raanav over some surround sound wiring he had requested for the now defunct music room

The home audio guy gave her the specs for what he had brought and insisted on installing it despite being told by rakshit that it was not the right “density” or “wattage”

Rakshit had stopped by and told Viveka to check with Raanav

“Tumhari pasand ka wattage nahi hai surround sound waale ke paas he said he will install a booster box”

“I had asked him for………” Raanav sent a paragraph

Viveka sent him the image of the brochure, you can talk to him, I can give him my phone, he left his phone at the office”

Raanav sent back another paragraph

“I am going to go take a shower you can chat with him on my phone”

“You want some sound guy to have your phone”

“Its an iphone 8? Not a Pro G max 20 10 Terabyte” she mocked

“You are fine with him texting your pictures to himself?

“Fine… I am going to take a shower I will have him call you when he returns to his office” she conceded with a guilty flush

She went to her parents Friday night knowing fully well he was going to return

On Saturday morning she sat in her parents balcony grating carrots for the season’s last gajar halwa Ma was making

And he showed up at 10 AM promptly….

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awww ... Darcy is here to get her 🥰 and hopefully will bring a solution to this Inder-Raina mess too

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