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Posted: 4 years ago

This update is for the strong and protective men of Viveka's life.❤️


Akash as always- Viveka hero who calls for help when he cannot reach more quickly 🤗


The Raanav fan that I am, the thing that blows me away in this update is - that "Vi" to tell Viveka to shut up 😆 so cute 😳 The fact that he also texted Satyen and Akash was 👍🏼


No wonder Satyen has a large empire, he was able to smartly buy time to keep his son out of worry and send someone to help, and use his intellect to call Raanav for help since he will reach sooner 🤗


Nisha, we know how much Satyen adores Viveka, we hardly have an update of them spending time together. Would love to see one please?


Something I miss from previous updates about Raanav thoughts' about Viveka.

Edited by aina910 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Raanav went to rescue his wife. Maybe the lawyer needs to give her some tips on dealing with these cases without getting into trouble herself.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hyenas in heat

He looked at her deeply and did not respond

“Do you even have to ask?” was the expression on his face

“I don’t know anyone else over there, I married an Economist/Women’s Rights Advocate it looks like so yeah” he thought

“Main jaan bhoojkar nahi gayi Raanav uske ghar” she said with child like innocence

“The guy looked drunk to me” he said viciously

“The cop?”

He looked at her

She had no idea who was even drunk?

“I don’t know, could be, I meant the husband”

“Tumhe laga?” she asked shocked as everything made more sense now

“Why is Rathi not with you?”

“I told you last night over text I am at Rohini”

“And?”

“Aaj subah Lekha texted me saying she needed it to haul her friends across town”

He grit his teeth

“Rathiji hotey to kya kar lete”

“What did the SHO say to you?” he asked curiously

“That I hit the husband and caused bodily injury and I had an intent to commit a crime or something”

“Could you have called me sooner”

“Kya kehti main? I walked in on a husband abusing his wife and now am accused of instigating it and accused of hitting the husband?”

“Yeah pretty much that”

“Tum is liye aaye taaqi tum mujhe yeh keh sako ki maine kya kya galat kiya?”

“Oh I didn’t even go there…. YET Viveka”

“I am not a nari shakti pratinidhi” she snapped

“Whatt?”

“I am not a social activist dude…. I went to collect samples and”

“I asked you not to go to people’s homes” he flashed a humorless smile

A few minutes passed in silence

“Tumhe kisne bataya?”

“Dad?”

“Dad?” “OH NO” she clamped her hand over her mouth and cringed,

She pushed her glasses up

“Oh no!”

“Your Dad couldn’t make it so he called him”

“PAPAH ne call kiya?”

She pulled her phone out of her tote and there were many messages

“Ho sakey to aana raat ko warna kabhi aur mil lena beta, Varsha ab yahin hai”

It was Papa

Ma had texted her too

She called Ma

“Main theek hoon, ghar ja rahi hoon”

“Pahunchkae call kar beta”

“Sure Ma, Naina aa gayi ghar?”

“Nahi, abhi kahan”

She wanted to ask if she had a job yet

But did not ask in front of Raanav

“Raanav ko phone do”

“Did Papa tell you?”

“What do u think?” Ma chuckled

“Ma se baat karogey?” she asked muting the phone

He gave her a “look” and pulled the phone out of her hand

He unmuted it and said Hello

“I heard you were quite the knight in shining armor this afternoon” Ma smiled

“More like man in a wrinkled crushed shirt” he smiled

“Thank you”

“It was my pleasure”

“I”

“Umm..”

“Sorry” Anu mumbled

“No please… go ahead”

“Her Papa told me only after you arrived at the PS”

“Oh?”

“Words cannot thank you enough”

“No don’t”

“She was in danger… I will get the details from her when I speak with her, but you know”

“You already said it twice”

“Yeah I stopped before I said it again”

The Parashar kid threw his head back and laughed

Viveka drooled over that look

“Ma hasa rahin hai isko, meri baat par aisa kyon nahi hasta”

“Mujhse to hamesha kisi na kisi baat par ladta hai, we are like hyenas fighting over a carcass”

“Ufff” she sighed looking out the window

“Husbands ya wife travel karte hain to har ghanta call pe call karte hain, yeh mujhe din mein ek phone karta hai”

“Do mujhe” she sulked yanking the phone as that thought formed in her mind

He almost laughed when she pulled it off his hand

“Ma aapse ghar pe baat karti hoon”

“Aar rahi ho na shaam ko?”

“DEFINITELY, Raanav shaayad jet lag mein hoga, main to ZAROOR aaoongi”

Satyen was not home yet

He took a call in the empty music production equipment room

She walked the lawn calling Ishwar and Ratna

She went back in to sort through the papers, plug her laptop in to charge by her fave spot

And decided to go pick out clothes

He walked up to her and grabbed her

“Kya hua?” she asked coolly

He wrapped his arms around her waist

“Suddenly biwi ki yaad aa gayi ya zabardasti thanks maangogey”

He laughed FOR HER

A big throaty laugh

She watched his neck hungrily

He bend down and kissed her lips

The taste of him was so divine and exciting as his touch, Viveka stopped lying to herself and threw caution out the window and stood on her toes to fit herself closer to the hard male contours

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Posted: 4 years ago

Okay could Lekha not haul one of her RICH father's car? Is there only 1 car for her to use? Im sure there are many cars with drivers at Parashar. Satyen needs to seriously tell her offf 🤔

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nisha ek aur please 😳


I love how Anubha made Raanav laugh. Smrita will be burning 😆


Viveka simplicity comes from her parents. Their humility is shown here where anubha doeesn't hesitate to thank Raanav, despite having reservation about him.


Cuteness overload Viveka 😆 that monologue on fighting like hyenas over carcass 🤣

Edited by aina910 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: aina910

Okay could Lekha not haul one of her RICH father's car? Is there only 1 car for her to use? Im sure there are many cars with drivers at Parashar. Satyen needs to seriously tell her offf 🤔

Imagine what would happen if Viveka now is advised by Satyen to have security guard also 🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago

She protects and shepherds young girls under her charge when taking her craft people to meet someone, away from the lecherous eyes and hands of men. But at the same time there is a certain innocence and naivete to her. In many ways she's had a sheltered life, and she has not really crossed many of the lines drawn by the parents. Always keeping to the timelines expected by the parents, seeing to it that she is home by a certain time etc. Unlike Naina, who went ahead and did what she had to with no thought to her parents or anyone else. She had no idea that Babu could've been drunk. Not surprising, that segment of society it is the women who work and men will drink it away.

P.S: Yesterday I wanted to say that Dadi and Naina, the drama queens, should be packed off to some ashram in the hills. Maybe Lekha could be packed off to some spa in the hills along with Smrita😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Loved it. Absolutely loved it.

Viveka tum baas Harshu se mile janne ki baat chedo aab.

Wanna see what the Lawyer does. He has not been around for couple of days and now wife want to go mayka 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kizh72

She protects and shepherds young girls under her charge when taking her craft people to meet someone, away from the lecherous eyes and hands of men. But at the same time there is a certain innocence and naivete to her. In many ways she's had a sheltered life, and she has not really crossed many of the lines drawn by the parents. Always keeping to the timelines expected by the parents, seeing to it that she is home by a certain time etc. Unlike Naina, who went ahead and did what she had to with no thought to her parents or anyone else. She had no idea that Babu could've been drunk. Not surprising, that segment of society it is the women who work and men will drink it away.

P.S: Yesterday I wanted to say that Dadi and Naina, the drama queens, should be packed off to some ashram in the hills. Maybe Lekha could be packed off to some spa in the hills along with Smrita😆


I would love that 😆


And Viveka too can stop worrying about Naina all the time.

Even now after this big adventure while going home, she asks her mother if Naina came home.


And Viv leading a sheltered life also makes sense Priya. She is still not much exposed to the bad world we are living in. She kind of sees mostly good in most people or happenings around her.


This Rajitji seems to be Lekha's favorite driver at home, at least she pretends like it. Satyen needs to give strict orders that he is Raanav/Viveka's designated driver and Lekha cannot ask for him. And he should tell that to Smrita too.

I get why Lekha wants only him. It has nothing to do with him, the fact that Viveka was given prominence over her is what is agitating her.


I am actually happy that she will go away for a month on her Europe tour. Please take Smrita with you too.

Edited by canapoem - 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: canapoem


I would love that 😆


And Viveka too can stop worrying about Naina all the time.

Even now after this big adventure while going home, she asks her mother if Naina came home.


And Viv leading a sheltered life also makes sense Priya. She is still not much exposed to the bad world we are living in. She kind of sees mostly good in most people or happenings around her.


This Rajitji seems to be Lekha's favorite driver at home, at least she pretends like it. Satyen needs to give strict orders that he is Raanav/Viveka's designated driver and Lekha cannot ask for him. And he should tell that to Smrita too.

I get why Lekha wants only him. It has nothing to do with him, the fact that Viveka was given prominence over her is what is agitating her.


I am actually happy that she will go away for a month on her Europe tour. Please take Smrita with you too.

Yeah, Lekha is trying to act all proprietorial, for all you know egged on by Smrita. Maybe Smrita can do a European trip along side😆

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