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Kalaaaaaaaaaa

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Thank u sooo much nishaaa

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nicely done, Raanav! Satyen is a shrewd observer of people and well versed in the art of diplomacy. Planting a thought will be way more effective than directing when it comes to his son.


“Mother is a perfectionist“ - wonder how he’ll feel when he realises she’s directing that very perfection to perfectly demean his wife.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Satyen is a dad, a well wisher for this son's happiness and yes a wise man. He did not refrain from voicing his concern and thoughts to Raanav which included talking about Smrita's (somewhat bad ) influence on him.

Ra response was natural (a straight shooter) that he is in control,a grown up and knows his wife and capable of navigating his marriage.


So Ra the protector and problem solver did not hestitate to lay out the rules firmly and politely to Lekha that Rathji will be exclusively Vi's driver. If it was Smrita would be he say the same ?😊

It will be interesting when he realizes that his "perfectionist" mom is hoping that his marriage will dissolve soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Satyen has lived with Smrita for a long time and knows her the best. Her positive and negative traits, all of them. Raanav is still getting there. Satyen very subtly told his son what his mother and Lekha are doing to his wife. For the moment, Lekha got told off politely.

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“I am not going to let you leave” he whispered tonguing her ear


I so hope he meant this not only for tonight but forever ❤️.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Reset opinion

Viveka appeared at the dinner table around 10, when the food had been cleared

Smrita gave her a side eye

She walked over to Raanav and sat by him and yawned

“Good nap?”

“I never take mid evening naps any more, Dadi doesn’t like it” she laughed

Satyen had walked out to the hallway to take a call

“Welcome welcome”

“I am sorry OK?” Viveka joined hands in prayer and laughed

“Khaana khaaya beta?”

“No I just got here”

She was wrapped in a gorgeous hot pink shawl, underneath Smrita noticed a bright yellow salwar

The girl was not a fashion victim

Lekha would not be seen dead in salwar suit at home

Summers, shorts

Winters, some designer sweats and hoodies

Raanav gently stroked her back with fingertips

“Your phone rang multiple times I chose “cant talk right now” he muttered

“Main SO rahi thi Raanav” she looked at him in shock

Her phone was still back in her room

“Is se bachke rehna padega tumhe” satyen laughed

“Were you like this when you were little”

“Hahahahah” raanav laughed at the little reference

“Little matlab… PAPA… I mean DAD samajh gaye hain”

“Papa bhi keh sakte ho beta, unless that word is special” Satyen smiled

“Did you annoy people?”

“A lot…” Satyen nodded

“I was the terror when I was little, he took over that mantle in adulthood”

“All because I have to be a tough lawyer” Raanav mock growled

“Have you been to a PS?” lekha asked innocently batting her eyelids like a Disney character

“As a matter of fact I have” Raanav responded silkily

Viveka missed the Q because she was telling Mahesh what she wanted to eat

“I would NEVAHH go in there… ughhhh” Lekha exclaimed

Satyen was hoping the topic would change before Viveka turned toward her

He really didn’t want his wife or Lekha to find out, he was certain Viveka would tell them

“Did you call those people beta?” Satyen distracted her as he sat across from her

“Oh the NY list?” Nahi, just dealing with some sample crises as you know” she laughed

“Oh yeah… umm.. that’s fine” satyen was afraid it was going to be any minute

“Thank you!” Viveka muttered with gratitude for the PS rescue

“You sound like you don’t know me” satyen smiled

“Arey showing gratitude is a good thing” Smrita screeched

“Not from ghar ke log” Satyen said firmly

“Lekha went to a finishing school that blasphemous to her “ Smrita plugged her ears

“That’s OK Mumma” “I am not going to change”

“Chaliye beta that’s fine” satyen nodded

Viveka’s dinner appeared like it would in a high end restaurant

“I cant eat so much, but I am going to try” she mumbled

Lekha was a size double zero, Viveka had no such obligation to keep

“Waise inhoney mujhe har baat pe thank kiya hai” satyen announced

“OH REALLY?” Raanav acted shocked

Viveka turned a bright red

“HOW does it feel to be thanked?” Raanav continued

Satyen looked quite confused

“Umm… what?”

“I wouldn’t know Dad”

Viveka acted like she wasn’t part of that exchange

The Parashars were a pleasant lot she thought to herself

“Viveka Lekha and I are going over to -------- (fill in with your fave high end designer)

For custom fitting and trying out clothes, you can go too

“Oh?” “Umm” “Sure”

“Though, since you are a Economist you might think she is wayyy overpriced” Smrita cracked herself up

“She probably is Smri” Satyen snubbed her gently

“I cannot wear no name clothes love”

“OK fine I take it back MOST of the Parashars are OK except for my MIL”

“Well have fun, main soch raha hoon kal office ke baad Aurangabad ke plans ke baare mein sochta hoon”

“You are not going ANYWHERE” smriti screeched

Raanav looked shocked

“I am not flying commercial Smri, chill”

“Raksh, please tell him”

“Dad… listen to her”

“I cant send Raanav he has to work with some discount lawyer” Satyen made a face

“WHO?” Smrita questioned

“The company lawyer of the guy that hit my car” Satyen said

“I can pulverize him on my own I don’t need you you can check out early and take Mom to dinner”

“Who are these low class people?” Smrita was energized when she thought she had her husband and son’s support

“U don’t know “ raanav nipped the conversation in the bud

“Are you pressing charges?” she turned to Raanav quietly

“I think so” he said with a conviction in tone that removed the doubt in his words

“Kyon? Papa to Dad to is fine right?” Viveka was dismayed

“Well… they are different people for sure!” she thought to herself somberly

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yeah, the reset was all within less than 10 minutes 😂.

I would be in dilemma whether or not press charges. Wouldn't say Ranaav is wrong.

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Posted: 4 years ago

“Waise inhoney mujhe har baat pe thank kiya hai” satyen announced

“OH REALLY?”Raanav acted shocked

Viveka turned a bright red

“HOW does it feel to be thanked?” Raanav continued

Satyen looked quite confused

“Umm… what?”

“I wouldn’t know Dad”

Viveka acted like she wasn’t part of that exchange


Lovely exchange. Wicked sense of humor Ranaav. Zindagi bhar sunayega yeh banda. There have been quite a few occasions she hasn't thanked him.

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