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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: diyak

Chapter 22:

Claps for this one👏👏

Its so romantic and sensual but at the same time you didn't cross the line.

Phew, Honestly Diya, I was SOOO worried when I wrote about the breast cupping part... I wrote , re-wrote and re-wrote the words of that particular scene so many times, so that it doesn't sound vulgar to the reader.
But it was so needed - coz I wanted to bring in the stark difference in character of Chandra, compared to how the other womanisers like Nand, his sons, Malay and Parvatak are... and I wanted Nandini to understand the Honourable Men vis-a-vis the men she knew so far.
And, I wanted to bring in the lovers' tiff so that they get to know each other more.
Your words are a relief to me now. Thank You...

Chandra getting angry on nandini's marriage shows his possiveness and love for her. Well nandini should get adjusted to his moods now 😉

Yes, Moods and Insecurities also 😆 And Chandra should learn to calm his tigress nicely 😛

They are so opposites in such matter :-
- Chandra starts misunderstanding her and bursts out like a Phataka and then instantly cools down like a dampen diwali cracker.
- Nandini, starts trusting everyone around her, dimag ki batti slowly gets hotter like a charcoal, and then like a charcoal, it takes time to cool down her temper 😃

Also nandini was not as meek as i thought in initial chapters. She gave it back well to chandra

They are both equal - in sword fight, righteousness, possessiveness, even verbal fights too 😉

and also the way she planned to pass the marriage news to chandra was commendable.

Thank youuu on behalf of Nandini 😊

Coming to Nand, I have no words to describe his cruelty. How can someone be this willy to own daughter? I think he never loved nandini it was just a show off.

Yes he never loved Nandini. More cruelty on the way... The more he emerges, the more his cruelty emerges...

Are there more romantic scenes in next chapter?😳

Yes, darling... more jealous scenes coming...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Oh can't wait for the next chapter then..me looking forward for some steamy romance 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
chapter 20

Acharya should not have trusted Parvatak at all here
he thought that he was a royal so he would be good too
but he had forgotten to never judge a book by its cover
I see now why Parvatak kept Malay under Acharya
but he had forgotten a guru will always be a guru
and a garbage like Malay can never cross his guru
Parvatak thought he won over Acharya but he is also a fool
By now he should have known that royals are mainly barbarians
they usurp others things and are cruel to the commoners
Malay is the least probable person to give guru dakshina
he created Malay and Parvatak as enemies of Nandini indirectly
Finally he realized his mistake in judging Chandra and Malay
so now he wanted to ammed his mistake and he planned for it
Umm he made another mistake he assumed Chandra will be like Malay
he should not have compared Chandra with either Parvatak or Malay
that in itself in a blasphemy and an insult to Chandra too
plus he has known Chandra to an extent now
how can he think that he will lust after Nandini
Chandra is his obedient pupil so he will follow his orders sincerely
So he read that Nandini will meet her husband that
that indicates that Khoon Bhari Maang event
She was married before her swayamvar only
Of course it is Nand obsession with Nandini again
she is his golden goose so he can't risk anything around her
His suicide drama is just hogwash to brainwash Nandini
There were no CCTV or chips that time
else I am sure Nand would have installed CCTV in her room
and inserted a chip in her body to track her 24*7
and that would have included the bathroom too
Of course the other children were not that important
so they were allowed all sorts of freedom
she was too soft and polite so never denied Nand
Again it is so clear how much she feels caged inside
and longs to go out in the open air and breath freely

will add more later
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Posted: 7 years ago
Ahh I see you've updated this! I haven't had a chance to read the new chapters yet but I'm excited to see what you've written when I've got some decent internet again x
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NIAMAJEN

Ahh I see you've updated this! I haven't had a chance to read the new chapters yet but I'm excited to see what you've written when I've got some decent internet again x


hope you get decent internet connection soon !
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I will be free after next week Di
I have 7 long pending reviews here
Sorry to make you wait for so long
I kept reading the updates in breaks
and they really refreshed my mind

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