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Chapter 22:
Claps for this one👏👏Its so romantic and sensual but at the same time you didn't cross the line.Phew, Honestly Diya, I was SOOO worried when I wrote about the breast cupping part... I wrote , re-wrote and re-wrote the words of that particular scene so many times, so that it doesn't sound vulgar to the reader.But it was so needed - coz I wanted to bring in the stark difference in character of Chandra, compared to how the other womanisers like Nand, his sons, Malay and Parvatak are... and I wanted Nandini to understand the Honourable Men vis-a-vis the men she knew so far.And, I wanted to bring in the lovers' tiff so that they get to know each other more.Your words are a relief to me now. Thank You...Chandra getting angry on nandini's marriage shows his possiveness and love for her. Well nandini should get adjusted to his moods now 😉Yes, Moods and Insecurities also 😆 And Chandra should learn to calm his tigress nicely 😛They are so opposites in such matter :-- Chandra starts misunderstanding her and bursts out like a Phataka and then instantly cools down like a dampen diwali cracker.- Nandini, starts trusting everyone around her, dimag ki batti slowly gets hotter like a charcoal, and then like a charcoal, it takes time to cool down her temper 😃Also nandini was not as meek as i thought in initial chapters. She gave it back well to chandraThey are both equal - in sword fight, righteousness, possessiveness, even verbal fights too 😉and also the way she planned to pass the marriage news to chandra was commendable.Thank youuu on behalf of Nandini 😊Coming to Nand, I have no words to describe his cruelty. How can someone be this willy to own daughter? I think he never loved nandini it was just a show off.Yes he never loved Nandini. More cruelty on the way... The more he emerges, the more his cruelty emerges...Are there more romantic scenes in next chapter?😳Yes, darling... more jealous scenes coming...
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