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Posted: 7 years ago
OK will wait for how he got Nandini chart
so strange na that men who underestimate women are defeated by women only
same happened with Mahishasura too as Devi Durga killed him
so Nand was scared of curses - I had thought he was totally fearless
he seems to be a man who does not believe is horoscope and stuff
Nandini is a cause that is his own blood rest people will be outsiders
of course he must have troubled at least a thousand women if not more
so it is hard to say who all will be responsible for his death
Poor Raj Jyotish - Nand should not have killed him
but then again an arrogant overconfident like him thinks he is invincible
Nand is a black mark in the name of a human
yes Acharya could have managed to hoodwink 2 soldiers
but good that Chandra helped him and he did not need to do anything
Luck was really on his side that day
Acharya wanted to take the responsibility to train the future king OK
Yes Ramakrishna and Vivekananda are perfect examples
of fierce and independent guru and shishya and both tested each other
Of course Acharya had to mould Dev to an extent to make him a king later
Yes it was so bad that the Dance Guru could not tell everything to Acharya
that would have helped things a lot for Acharya
Wow Avantika is also a cause of Nand death
Yes both taught each other so many things
they really complete each other in a true sense from the soul point of view too
normally whenever u ask any one views about your life and decisions
it is implied that person is an important part of your life so I think subconsciously you too knew it
but here he is giving her an explicit choice and he is making it clear he will do what she says
so from childhood only she always pushed him forward for his ultimate betterment
and yes she said the same thing to Acharya when Moora was listening to them
Both lost something that day to get back some of their lost things in the future
Of course Chandra knew what he had and what he lost so his pain was more
Nandini did not know that she was caged so her sense of pain was less intense
I wonder if Nandini remembered those words of his on the battle field
but she has no idea Chandra is her Veer right so may be she did not remember
Oh I loved the tamarind jam idea too and I love tamarind achaar
No I loved her sitting on his lap and it was no way vulgar
what children do in their innocence is never vulgar
Well I never sat on any of my cousins lap in my childhood
but we used to play a lot and enjoy and have a good time
walking hand in hand normally came when may be we were going on a slippery road
mainly for strength and support ; may be while climbing a mountain on a trip or vacation
but mothers also walk with their children taking their hands in their hands
So I found it very normal here too ; they were children and friends so normal
Yes only if he had known about Dev from the start things would have been so much better
Oh so they did not have the guts t tell Nand that Acharya escaped from them and that too for a boy
so they thought that they will handle the matter themselves
The innocent tribal men dies at the hands of the cruel soldiers
just like Surya's men died at the hands of the same cruel soldiers
that is the similarity between their deaths
The 3 years in the jungle and those horrid deaths made Chandra more matured and experienced
Nandini was caged in the castle and also kept protected so did not face such an experience
so she remained innocent for a long time and id not understand most of what Chandra said
Yes if Nand was Magadh king Chandra was Jungle king so they were equals that way
a brahmin Chanakya had taken Chandra under his wing so fate was on Chandra side
I think a chapter of Chanakya confession to Chandra about his mistakes is a good idea
we can know some of the major blunders that he did in his career
that will help you cover the feelings of many people as well
Most people except Chanakya underestimated Chandra for his age
they say na that dikhave pe na jao apni akal lagao
Chanakya made a blunder for Chandra with Malay but all his rest assumptionswere right
Chandra is in a perpetual state of war between his heart and mind w.r.t Nandini
Sadly most of Nandini assumptions about her family were wrong
Hmm so Malay knew Acharya war tactics well
thankfully he does not know much about Chandra war tactics
It was both Acharya and Nandini good luck that Acharya overheard Malay
Poor Chandra can't go against Acharya so he had to go on his orders
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Posted: 7 years ago

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That's a beautiful teddy, Priya!
I wonder if there's a festival where the husband's fasts for their wives...

This teddy is a Disney character and the name is Pooh bear
well till now I have not heard of any such festival
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey..Thanks for the updates..I read the parts and loved it as usual..:)
Will put my detailed comments for both the parts over the wkend..
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Posted: 7 years ago


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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 20:
Chandra knows that nandini is his pari. But in present does nandini aware that chandra was her childhood frd? I liked how you portrayed chanakya misjudged parvatak and malay which is closer to reality. No one would be perfect even that person is chanakya.

Impressive of chandra that he accepted his mistake and ready to accept nandini as wife at the same time he didn't forget his guru's words.

I am curious to know did nandini fallen in love with chandra on first glance? Or she has fallen for him after the marriage because those days once the women gets married they will obey the husband and he is everything irrespective of his character.
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Posted: 7 years ago
What if nandini had to choose between her childhood friend and chandra an accidental husband? Did she ever think about her friend coming back during her marriage with chandra?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 21:

My heart went to Sujan. Please get him fall for a well deserved lady and make him happy in this story..pretty pls 😛

You very well detailed out chandra's inner thoughts and struggle he is going through. Did he fallen for his wife he accidentally married or after knowing her as little nandini. I am glad that nandini atleast have lopa to share her emotions in that big palace. Poor girl, none cared for her in true self including her father.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: diyak

Chapter 20:

Chandra knows that nandini is his pari. But in present does nandini aware that chandra was her childhood frd?

@BOLD - Even today, Nandini does not know that Chandra is Dev. He has not told her. Reason for not telling her will come in the discussion between C&C in the coming chapters 😊.

I liked how you portrayed chanakya misjudged parvatak and malay which is closer to reality. No one would be perfect even if that person is chanakya.

Yes. I would like to think that ALL OF US are flawed characters - you, me and everyone else. Chanakya is no exception.
Chanakya was a young man, when Chandra was a child. He was old enough to teach Chandra. But he was young enough to make mistakes in his own life.
Thats how he read all indications of Nandini's charts so well, but made a mistake in misinterpreting the complete meaning. similarly, he thought that unlike Nand, Parvatak as a royal person by birth, would be honourable enough to help him when he told him Nandini's secret. But, Parvatak is as wily as Nand. Similarly, he imagined Malay would turn out to be a loyal student who would give him Nand as Gurudakshina and protect Nandini for him. But Malay turned to be a womaniser and a coward - so of no use to Chanakya basically.
Chandra hates Malay, no doubt. But, its Chanakya's mistake that Nandini gets into trouble with Malay and Parvatak. Its because of Chanakay, that Chandra gets two more enemies Malay and Parvatak.
This is what Chanakya makes guilty time and again - even in the Camp, he feels remorse and Chandra tries to comforts him.

Impressive of chandra that he accepted his mistake and ready to accept nandini as wife at the same time he didn't forget his guru's words.


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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 22:
Claps for this one👏👏

Its so romantic and sensual but at the same time you didn't cross the line. Chandra getting angry on nandini's marriage shows his possiveness and love for her. Well nandini should get adjusted to his moods now 😉 Also nandini was not as meek as i thought in initial chapters. She gave it back well to chandra and also the way she planned to pass the marriage news to chandra was commendable.

Coming to Nand, I have no words to describe his cruelty. How can someone be this willy to own daughter? I think he never loved nandini it was just a show off.

Are there more romantic scenes in next chapter?😳


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: diyak

Chapter 21:


My heart went to Sujan. Please get him fall for a well deserved lady and make him happy in this story..pretty pls 😛

Yes, I have a nice lady in mind 😉 But I am thinking, like HP Series, I will close this book with Nandini's marriage and open Book 2 for Sujan and Nalini and Malay... What do you think ?


You very well detailed out chandra's inner thoughts and struggle he is going through.

It was fun reading Chandra as a man, and not a King, isn't it? Even Kings are human beings but our history never brought the insecurities of the Kings on record. So, I thought, why not ?

I am glad that nandini atleast have lopa to share her emotions in that big palace. Poor girl, none cared for her in true self including her father.

Yes, Nandini has Lopa as Chandra has Chanakya as a support mechanism. But, Lopa works best as a friend and sister, while Chandra is a loner. he doesn't have anyone except Chanakya all his life. Just now, he met his Mother and Sujan but that only increased his responsibilities. Thats where he misses his Pari...

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