The Eyes You Saw - Chapter 39 and 40 on Page 90

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Chandra Nandini FF or Chandini SS

Dear Reader,

This is a Fictionbased on Chandragupta Maurya and Nandini or Niadrus, his arch enemy's daughter.

In this story, I am going to use the Promos shown by the Chandra Nandini Show, but weave my own dialogs and story around it. I also plan to bring different shades of women during that era.


My future plan to write different chapters of CGM's life, like reading few pages here and there of a Novel... like Chandra's marriage to Nandini, Nandini's revenge against Malay, Chandra Nandini with Bindu etc etc ... so, this could actually turn out to be like a Series of sorts about Chandra Nandini. Fingers crossed.

The references of a few actual scenes from the episodes will be referred in the Story, to show the thought process of the characters.

Hope you like it.

If you do like it, please click on the "LIKE" Button.

I would really love to read your feedback to help me improve my writing skills - so please leave your comments.



Chapter 1 : Page 1 (below)

Chapter 2 : Page 3

Chapter 3 : Page 5

Chapter 4 and 5 : Page 7

Chapter 6 : Page 12

Chapter 7 : Page 18

Chapter 8 : Page 25

Chapter 9 : Page 30

Chapter 10 : Page 36

Chapter 11 : Page 40

Chapter 12 : Page 47
Chapter 13 : Page 52

Chapter 14 : Page 53 (and... A word for Silent Readers)

Chapter 15 to 16 : Page 59

Chapter 17 : Page 69

Chapter 18 to 19 : Page 72

Chapter 20 to 21 : Page 73

Chapter 22 : Page 75
Chapter 23 to 26 : Page 77
Chapter 27 : Page 78
Chapter 28 : Page 81
Chapter 29 : Page 82
Chapter 30 : Page 83
Chapter 31 and 32 : Page 84
Chapter 33 : Page 85
Chapter 34, 35 and 36 : Page 86

Chapter 37 and 38 : Page 87

Chapter 39 and 40 : Page 90


Disclaimer : This story is no way related to history. So don't search for historical facts in this story.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!!!👏👏
You finally updated. I so admire your hand at writing intelligent stories. Devil's trap was one best proof of that.

Interesting characterization... So 2 people from rival clans are already in love and yet are forced to keep up a charade of enmity and prove it due to demanding circumstances. There sure must be a beautiful flashback of these two falling in love. Waiting what else are you about to unfold along with their romance.

Update soon.

Oho!! I am first again just like for Devil's trap.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazinggg start Congrats on ur new story 👍🏼Loved it completely ❤️Here u introduced Nandini's twin sis n another sis too great 😊Both ChanDni in love with each other Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yes my lucky mascot, you are again the first one to reply !!!
Dint expect you to read it so fast.
This time, no crime investigation story. But slightly a different angle to two lovebirds torn by enmity.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow that's a terrific prologue
he used his brains so well
he wrote a cryptic message
that only Nandini can decode it
I want to know their back story
loved it please continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Yes my lucky mascot, you are again the first one to reply !!!

Dint expect you to read it so fast.
This time, no crime investigation story. But slightly a different angle to two lovebirds torn by enmity.

No crime investigation😭...Aww... that's such a bummer. It's your trademark,you know.
But no way doubt my love for this one. I am sure I am gonna love this nonetheless.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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What a wonderful start👏 Sangeetha. I lubbed it😳
Pita maharaj has 3 daughters😉 neela and neelambari(one of my fav characters of tamil movies)might be twins*guess*😆

I think nandhu is still unmarried but chandhu is already in love with her😉 even nandhu might be loving him/ his eyes😉 without knowing his identity😳
The update was absolutely sweet , it showed Chandra's concern and confession for his Lady love😳
Chakku will smack him with his cane left and right if he knows Chandra's love for Nandh putri😲🤣 for what purpose he had been sent and what he was doing😆

There is some strong past events with these duo which made Chandra fall for her
Do continue soon⭐️ can't wait for long😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful start,as always your Ff are the best 👏👏😊
Thanks for PM😊
Waiting for next update ❤️
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Hi
will give u detailed review in some time... I loved it...

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