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Posted: 7 years ago
You are absolutely right
I feel I can do anything now
my life is back again and I am free
I can breathe and sleep for long for some days
Di I wanted to ask you right now I can't join a job
as I have still a year to go
But do you know of any true online jobs
where I can work and earn ?

Yes this story consists of different adhyays or kands
I have understood that so well
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Posted: 7 years ago
chapter 20

Acharya should not have trusted Parvatak at all here
he thought that he was a royal so he would be good too
but he had forgotten to never judge a book by its cover
I see now why Parvatak kept Malay under Acharya
but he had forgotten a guru will always be a guru
and a garbage like Malay can never cross his guru
Parvatak thought he won over Acharya but he is also a fool
By now he should have known that royals are mainly barbarians
they usurp others things and are cruel to the commoners
Malay is the least probable person to give guru dakshina
he created Malay and Parvatak as enemies of Nandini indirectly
Finally he realized his mistake in judging Chandra and Malay
so now he wanted to ammed his mistake and he planned for it
Umm he made another mistake he assumed Chandra will be like Malay
he should not have compared Chandra with either Parvatak or Malay
that in itself in a blasphemy and an insult to Chandra too
plus he has known Chandra to an extent now
how can he think that he will lust after Nandini
Chandra is his obedient pupil so he will follow his orders sincerely
So he read that Nandini will meet her husband that
that indicates that Khoon Bhari Maang event
She was married before her swayamvar only
Of course it is Nand obsession with Nandini again
she is his golden goose so he can't risk anything around her
His suicide drama is just hogwash to brainwash Nandini
There were no CCTV or chips that time
else I am sure Nand would have installed CCTV in her room
and inserted a chip in her body to track her 24*7
and that would have included the bathroom too
Of course the other children were not that important
so they were allowed all sorts of freedom
she was too soft and polite so never denied Nand
Again it is so clear how much she feels caged inside
and longs to go out in the open air and breath freely
I am happy that she had kept the tunnel a secret
that again shows her strong loyalty to Veer
Her dressing as a man remind me of Portia from Merchant Of Venice
but again that is a good way to protect one self well
Lopa is such a trusted confidante she is lucky to get her
Veer really taught her something worthy and useful
Of course Veer taught her animal language well
It will be prove to be helpful in the future unknown to them
Badal is a real free spirit and only obeys genuine people
I think she herself feels caged in the palance
so she understands the pains of being caged so well
Hmm so Nandini and Badal are actually very similar
both love freedom and adventures a lot
both understand each other very well
Of course Badal and a dog are very similar
as both are very faithful to their owners
something which Nand wont ever understand or comprehend
It is great that they both had a secret code language
her way to reach out to Veer is so heart warming
it is so clear that she misses Veer a lot and he has her heart
I don't know why but I see a faint similarity to Shri Krishna and Radha in their relation
Shri Radha too used to miss Shri Krishna a lot after he went to Mathura leaving Vrindavan
and she too used to recollect the old days spent with him and remember him
No one can fill that gap except Veer himself
Of course Dev is an intelligent and perceptive guy
so he will grasp easily how women treat him
How sweet that he too misses her a lot and craves for her
Theirs is a true bond that will help them in the future
Of course I can understand his dilemme well
he is bound by oath and his karma is along that lines
but his heart is in a totally opposite direction to it
When the heart and mind collides it really created havoc in the soul
He assumed wrong view about her but that isn't his fault totally
it is said a child grows up affected by the atmosphere around
so he assumed that she too will be like Nand after so many years
he is judging her on the lines of Nand behavior
but his heart is thinking of her and their connection
he remembers everything from their times together
Fate wanted CN to meet so he went towards his DM house
After all these years that inn connected CN and brought them together
So Bijli i quite a friendly horse and made friends with Badal easily
It was natural that Badal too warmed up to him so well
So Lopa too indirectly made CN meet that night
I think Nandini subconsciously knew that the man was good
as else Badal would not have been friendly with him at all
Of course his refusal to fight at fight interested her
she saw a totally different personality than she was used to seeing
Both acted on their reflexes and drew swords
I wonder how and why she said he will get to marry her if he wins
she said it on reflex and did not realize she gave away her identity already
But now he also was interested in the fight
They both must have understood that they are seasoned warriors
Chandra thought he could use this person as a weapon against Nand in war
strangely enough Nandini really became a weapon against Nand later
Chandra noticed that the person had womanly curves
But I think he never thought that this was a real woman
Wow so Nandini also thought that he should join their army
Both thought that the other deserves to be in the army
again this reflects how similar their thought processes are
She thought he could be scared when he knows she is a princess ?
Again she was impressed when he withdrew his sword after her identity was revealed
she really did not believe that he wont raise his sword against her now
Fate had decided that they will be married in a way that night
so no one could stop it and the events played out that way
They were too involved in the fight and so no one noticed it at first
Of course he felt bad as he had come here on a mission
and here he had married some one by mistake
It was very shocking to her too as she was not ready for it at all
and she wanted Nand permission too but it was not his fault as well
His own character traits are totally opposite to that of Nand
he knows to take responsibility for his actions well
he knows to respect woman and also knows what sinbutdoor means to a woman
he is always so polite and soft spoken and he knows he should comfort her now
He is also impressed by her skills truly and he wants to rectify the situation
She was alone and so it was natural for her to be scared
but till now this man had given her no reason to fear him
and till now he had kept his word and did not harm her though he could
So I think here she is already trusting him to an extent
she is slowly getting impressed by him and recognizing his character
If it was any one else I am sure she would not have revealed her true identity
but she was off guard with him right from the start
may be her sub conscious knew that she could trust this person
so she had said that if he won he could marry her
she had forgotten that she was in the disguise of a man
She is seeing a totally new type of person than her family men
Chandra had gained her trust that night nd this would help him in future
Chandra could never imagine that his mission will be a success so easily
Well she had not actually challenged him when she said that he can't marry her
she was speaking out of concern for him and fear for Nand reaction
After knowing her true identity I think he is more impressed with her
but he did not know how she had grown up to be so he had to be cautious
she started to go as she felt that he could not think of any answer
but he stopped her and gave her such a confident answer
he can really turn on his charm mode when he wants to right ?
Chandra thought that Nand will easily agree if Nandini is impressed
but here he under estimated Nand and he will know it later
Nandini gave Chandra all the needed details for her swayamvar
I think this too she said it off guard but it proved useful to Chandra
she also was concerned for Chandra whom she thought was a commoner
He decided to win her in the swayamvar and of course we know that he succeeded
She is truly her fathers daughter and it is so clear how Nand abuses this for his own purpose
she thought he is over confident but he is really confident
she does not know his skills and will be proven wrong soon
I liked this meeting a lot
Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
chapter 20 is done
will review chapter 21 tomorrow
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Posted: 7 years ago
Di I have high fever from last evening so I could not review
I will come one I am better
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Di I have high fever from last evening so I could not review

I will come one I am better



Priya,
They say "Feed the Cold, Starve the Fever" to get better. This is a very age old saying that holds good even today.
Take care of your health. I know how active you are otherwise. So you dont have to give explanations. Sleep well. Take care of your health dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
What does it mean Di
Applying water cloth on the forehead ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
Girlieee when are you updatinnnggg.. can't waittt😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I have chicken pox 😭


OMG, you are down with chicken pox? Nothing to worry though. We call it "Ammai" - a disease that basically spreads because of unhygienic conditions.

All mobile phones / computer etc that you touch, take a tissue, soak it with just a drop of dettol and wipe off .. We use mobile phones everywhere. Thats the first place / beginning of all diseases.

1. keep yr room and house clean.
2. Grind Neem leaves and make a ball and drink it with a glass of water like a tablet. Since its summer, the heat will kill you.
Neem leaves inside your room and at the entrance of your door and house will keep the house cool, keep the virus under control and avoids spreading to others inside the house.
Crush neem leaves with hands in your bucket and take bath.

3. Use honey - drink it and i think you can apply it on your skin as well - to prevent the irritation on your skin, the itching.
4. Complete the antibiotic cycle that the Doc prescribe you. Dont stop once the disease is under control. You need to complete the cycle of prescription to eradicate the virus completely.

Take good rest. Sleep well. Drink lot of Neem paste, take bath with neem leaves, sleep with neem leaves around the bed (even on the bed), wash all your clothes / bed / curtains etc. when the disease ends.



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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: foreverasya

Girlieee when are you updatinnnggg.. can't waittt😛



yes darling, writing writing.. just got caught up with some personal work, since ppl at home have taken official leave, my housework has increased a bit :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks Di 😊
will follow all you suggested

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