The Eyes You Saw - Chapter 39 and 40 on Page 90 - Page 58

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I will be free after next week Di

I have 7 long pending reviews here

Sorry to make you wait for so long

I kept reading the updates in breaks

and they really refreshed my mind

Originally posted by: foreverasya

Hello @foreverasya, Let me first thank you for NOT being a silent reader. Thank you for vocalising your thoughts and interacting with the Writer.

Hey! I started reading your story just yesterday and have finished reading it in one day.

Wow, thats a real feedback for the Author that hints that the story is on the right track to keep the reader hooked. Feeling better after so many days. Thank you so much dear ...

You are a very talented writer and you weave the story beautifully. I absolutely loved the romance brewing up between them in the last few chapters. Would love to see more of how they felt when the war was going on and their after marriage life.

@BOLD .. I am a little confused with the question, dear.

How Nandini felt when the war was going on - was explained in the first few chapters of the story.

Or, You mean, how nandini felt when the War was going on between Chandra and her Father?

Again, i am confused about your question regarding their "After Marriage Life"...

Their marriage has happened but not known to the world. Chandra thought of starting it with Nandini, but the hopes were short-lived when she told him about the promise she made. So, that way, their after marriage is doomed already 😛 Now, the war has begun between Chandra and Padmanand, which resulted in his capture. Later, Nandini took over the captainship and waged a war with Chandra to get her father released. Now they have agreed to get married openly - with Nand and Avantika permission.

If your question is about their marriage life, AFTER THIS MARRIAGE,... Oh yes, I actually had plans of making it into Book 2 - where the karma of Avantika, Neela and Nalini and Nand will come to play... with Moora, Durdhara, Sujan and Lopa and Bhadrasal in full play... ofcourse, along with the After-marriage nokjoks of Chandu-Nandu life... But, seeing as the story is not getting enough response and reading here, i am thinking of closing the story with chandu-nandu marriage.

Also, I was wondering you mentioned in the first few chapters that Nandini always imagined his real face but they met in the cave after he abducted her. was it because he was dressed as a soldier?

Nandini has mostly seen only his eyes. when she got abducted, she was relieved that she did not have to marry Malay. and then, the usual kiddy 15 yr old excitement and happiness of experiencing an adventurous outdoor life for the first time in her life... she actually has not observed him at all. Its only when he gets married to her seriously wtih the 3 knots, and she's equally committed to him in that night, she thinks of looking at him. but the night's darkness in the cave doesnt allow her to observe him fully. its like - unless we lose something - we dont realise the value of it. (shit, i shd have put it properly in the story.. i will edit it accordingly.. thanks for pointing it out. )

lol bombarding you with questions already. But I'll be waiting for the next update..❤️

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I dont know about other authors. But i feel asking questions assures a writer that the reader has committed their time sincerely to the story and interested in its development wholeheartedly. If you have read my other comments, you would have realised that i am not bluffing. The Q&A from my readers encourages me to improvise my future plots, fine-tune my mistakes (like this comment above) and even bring some new elements to the story.

Originally posted by: foreverasya

You mean, how nandini felt when the War was going on between Chandra and her Father?

Yes, you got that right. lol I should phrased my question better, now that i think about it.

Again, i am confused about your question regarding their "After Marriage Life"...

😆 Should have phrased better right? But you got that one right too. The official marriage (kanyadan one ) and of course want to see more of the chandu-nandu romance.