IPKKND SS: Providence C15p109 Conclude LINK TO NEW SS ADDED P115! - Page 64

Originally posted by: pup03

Wonderful ending.. good to see them together.. loved the story 😊

Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

Just read the story... hmm.. have mixed feelings about this. If I had been khushi I would not have gone back to Arnav. He hurt her self respect, essentially told her that he was in love with someone else so couldn't love her, in clear terms told her that sex with her was not good enough and that her personality did not appeal to him. She had not changed as a person even if he has.

I wouldn't go back after all that...even Arnav discovering his so called love for her happened only after his ego was hurt and Lavanya choose to walk away and cheat on him... that's when he thought of khushi the person who always stood by him...

But i guess many people lead lives based on compromise and so will Arnav and Khushi. Over time it has the chance to grow into something more enduring. And if they can give it the name of love and be happy, it's great - that's more than what many people have.

Originally posted by: SherlockLover

Finished reading it!

But i am totally confused! It's just a mess in my mind.

The title "providence" of this story attracted me. But after reaching to the end I don't know what i feel!

I don't think its about different perception and approaches of those who read it but here about this fiction its mostly about the insufficiency of the writing! Its my feeling!

I don't think the end was justified!

I think character of "Lavanya" needed to be in the story along with the two leads!

Because its her who has been a sole determinant of arnav and khushi's relationship through her absence and presence!

That's why what arnav actually felt for khushi either during their marriage or after their divorce couldn't be clear because in the last you end up with a biased feeling of arnav used khushi and actually never loved her for the person she was!

Whenever a person leaves his wife ending marriage for the woman he loves, for whom he goes against his whole family then he must be feeling too strongly for that woman or even loves her madly!

here, i think that wasn't shown anywhere! I think lavanya needed to be in the picture, so many questions could have been answered!

The most surprising thing was when lavanya cheated on him he reacted like nothing big happened!

just one word and everything is finished! He loved Lavanya so was it that easy for him to let her go?

It simply showed what he would have felt when he divorced khushi when their marriage was already a loveless one!

I don't agree with arnav when he says he never cheated khushi during their marriage! because indirectly he did cheat on her! Not letting her know about his past love affair or under what circumstances he is marrying her and then later telling her that he cannot be with her as he can't forget his ex makes him a cheater too!

My question is "Did khushi mean a trial and error for him?"

Like let's try if it works then it's okay and if it doesn't then you have your girlfriend available!

These things doesn't show his maturity but only his confused personality!

Which later got confirmed when he actually started falling for khushi!

I can't say arnav loved either lavanya or khushi ever! with lavanya it was maybe passionate sex and with khushi it was maybe his mental needs! But it cannot be love! He couldn't be complete with any of them!

Practically speaking the pain of rejection or refusal is not an easy thing to tackle with! forget about forgiving that person and accepting him back!

I don't think any amount of "sorry" will ever be enough for healing a woman who was deeply hurt by the man she loved who basically rejected her simply because of his different sexual liking! Where in reality what khushi was offering him in their married relationship was much more great,valuable and long lasting than he could ever understand!

That's why i feel both arnav and khushi's character lose a touch of reality become artificial and unnatural! having flaws what makes us human and too much maturity makes everything superficial! Especially khushi , its impossible to imagine her character!

I will not say anything about this khushi because for me such characters exists either in Indian saas bahu sagas or in museum! And even if they do exists in the world we live in then the only word i would use for describing them is "fools"!

But i do feel that khushi should have moved on with another man who really loves her and respects her individuality and not like an option!

Another question that i had is maybe irrelevant but i would really like to know how can khushi be so readily agreeing to arnav's proposal of marriage? what if arnav had stayed happy with lavanya forever without bothering for her? He actually did this for almost two years where he was least interested in Khushi and her well being and enjoyed his life with lavanya!

Especially how can be she so desperate to be physically intimate with him, it actually feels very unnatural and weird? Didn't she feel hurt to be with a man who she had shared with a woman who was also responsible for her divorce? I don't think forgiveness and starting afresh in such matters is that easy for any woman!

Maybe that's why khushi feels so artificial as a character!

About Arnav I can only say he never loved Khushi genuinely! What he felt for khushi during his grandmother's illness was only a mental and emotional need which khushi fulfilled somehow and maybe that's what he needed that time! And so he took the chance!

As far as love is concerned I do't think he deserved it from her!

Originally posted by: zaniax

This is one SS I'll never forget as I was obsessed with it.😆Despite the shortcomings, there'ssomething weirdly attractive abt the story.

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Think this one had epic problems according to my readers from what I recall anyway
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