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Shamz

@Shamz94

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#611

Amazing ending maybe a season 2 with there nil joks maybe just maybe ;)

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: pushp_barun
Superb ending :) will u write bitter sweet seaon 2 ??? Thats my all time fav . Pretty please :)

bitter sweet was memorable - i really enjoyed writing about Arnav's bitter shades and Khushi fight to make sure he stays that little bit sweet. I'm not sure what i would write if we had a round two!.. i'll think on it ..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Arhi as an happy family along with their kids..,how is asr with the new born kids not talking abt arnav but asr

i've never thought about ASR with children apart from that little i touched on with bitter sweet, the rift between Arnav and his son Aarav. Thank you for this is worth thinking about ..

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#614

Originally posted by: zaniax

Yes me!!😃
I wanna read one-shots along d the lines of IPK..like Shyam's past, Khushi reaction to Arnav blaming her for everything( Hated tht scene😡)Or a story set in a diff era..will add more if i hav other ideas :)

I don't do this kind of thing because i'm not sure about my capabilities to expand on the original plot but i get where you are coming from ..

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arshilife2cheer

@arshilife2cheer

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#615

Lovely ending. ...

Khushi back to Arnav. ... 😊 👏

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apekshash

@apekshash

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#616

Ended on a good note, it was good to see them renunite.

But there was no mention why he left khushi.. what were the conversations whatsoever he said he would like to end the marriage on the first time... etc..

if you have mentoned, then i have missed reading it.

Care to explain that part.

also - the remuneration part that khushi agreed to work - even that was not touched upon

i felt it was an abrupt end

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#617

while i do love a happy ending for Arnav-Khushi and hence is happy that Khushi is back to ARnav.

But I cannot forget the fact that Arnav broke his marriage, where he was supposedly in love with Khushi, for a better sexual life with LA. He also mentioned that he didnt cheat on Khushi...so that aspect was a little confusing about how he made the decision to break his marriage, in the process hurt his wife and his Nani for what, just a physical relation with LA ?

Or did he mistook that physical aspect to be love and thought that he couldnt survive without that aspect n hence probably in love with LA ?

What are the chances that he will not go back to his earlier thought process...cause while you did mention that this Khushi is better, not so shy ( m assuming its about her being in bed) but still, has he realized that the connection with Khushi is more on a soul level and the lack of awesome sex life is not important anymore.

I think this aspect has not been touched upon many stories. Most of the stories ARnav is a playboy, who ultimately meets Khushi, with whom his chemistry is explosive and so he doesnt even look at any other woman for sex, post her...but here he did...that too without cheating...maybe thats why I still have so many questions.

Anyways, I wouldnt want you to deviate from the plot you wanted to write and obviously this story is over, so no sense asking for answers. But just thought to share my thoughts with you.

Hope I wasnt too rude. It wasnt meant to offend you, in any ways...

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Manasa

@ManKiBaath

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#618

Heartbreaking and heartwarming update!!!

You admirably succeeded in reassuring us of celebration of love when second chance comes knocking your door. I just hope that in AD also this could be true with estranged couples.

Take a bow Jagruti, this was a lovely story!!!

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jagrutid

@jagrutid

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#619

Writers response. 03.10.2016

Hey guys I wasn't going to follow up anything more after the thank you note I wrote yesterday, to those who messaged me I emailed you guys back with a response but I've noticed that I've churned up some unhappy readers with this story. You guys are right, for you are dedicated and take passion in reading what I write you have noticed the flaws and inadequacies in this story.

There are loop holes that simply slipped my mind, the money matter being one of them for I did intend to write a conversation between Arnav Khushi on pay for her original employment agreement.

That was just me forgetting.

As for the Arnav thing and why he left Khushi I thought after one point it would make sense the way it does in my mind but I may have failed to create clarity here.

Lastly I would say to all those who felt that this was an abrupt ending I would like to say that this was the most natural of closes that came to mind and heart when I began to write I myself do not have any regrets with the last chapter maybe apart from the fact that I could have spent time elaborating the duration of time spent alone by Arnav.

I apologize to those who feel let down by this story or its end and can only say I hope you have liked something about this if not everything and also that you will join me again for another journey overlooking the faults with this one.

I am chuffed that my readers are hearty enough to be honest in their feedback.Thank you all once again.. look forward to seeing you all on a new thread soon I hope.

Edited by jagrutid - 8 years ago