IPKKND SS: Providence C15p109 Conclude LINK TO NEW SS ADDED P115! - Page 65

Originally posted by: PriyaDobriyal89

What the hell is this?😡

i finished reading and my head is spinning at a terrible speed...what nonsense is this all about?

to check and make sure i even read authors response and i dont know whether to laugh or cry?

do u really think this is a matured love story?

my FOOT!😆

It is the most kiddish and idiotic story written on ipkknd!

the lead female is still a kid who is obsessed with a toy and cant let go of it and the lead male is a foolish man with a highly confused mind!

and the author of this so called love saga is hell bent on convincing people about how unconditionally and truly these two leads are in love with each other!

one advice: no one is asking you what true love is! give us some intelligent stuff!

Your title of the story is right. Providence!

we all need that protective care of the God to save us from the torture we get after reading it!

I dont know but have you swore to completely destroy the character of khushi of ipkknd by making her spineless girl and showing her as a doormat?

is khushi a kid that she cant get over her husband - her favorite toy even after divorce and still wears a mangalsutra and sindoor under the kiddish philosophies of unconditional love? you put all our desi bahus to shame!👏

is she so obsessed with him that she cant let go him? how can she be a woman of dignity?

she was actually a hollow woman to crawl back to the man just waiting for one chance to return to him just because she cant get out of love with him?

women cant see their men loving any other woman and they definitely dont go back running in their arms when they become available to them! they feel hurt! which cannot be eased by a mere kiss from their man! such pain is labelled as adultery! and its not easily healed!

so dont tell us about which you have no experience of or know nothing about! nobody is asking for it

"khushi had no control over the matters when it comes to her husband! " wow!!!👏👏👏

Why is this so? is asr her addiction that she cant get enough of?

fading out of love is natural response when one gets hurt in love! I dont think you are aware of it as of now! people do get out of love just as arnav did in life and its a good thing!

love doesn't need to be true and permanent it just needs to be real even if exists for a moment!

your old fashioned dialogues where khushi is always saying..ji...ji...ji...make me feel its better to call this story as a love story 1847! because the story looks like it belongs to an old era!

do u really know what is unconditional love and how one feels it in such a situation? How can you write and justify this when you yourself said about having not experienced such thing in life?

and if u still write, at least make it look convincing girl!😳😳😳

the worst thing is your dialogues!

what was that?

"ham unake layak kabhi the hi nahi...kabhi lavanya to nahi ban paye?...really?"👏👏👏

Tell me only one thing do u have any personal problem with khushi to dishonor her this way?

u literally made her beg love from her husband!!

"Ho sake to hamare liye thodasa pyar bachake rakhiye!"

is she that spineless to beg for to be loved and u call it innocence? How sick of u!

"That night nani was in the hospital the only person I could picture was you, the only person I could think of, the only person that I felt I needed more than anything was you.

I can't claim to understand love the way you do ...or be in love the way you are I can only say that you are the only person who occupies my mind when I am at my worst and I think that is a pretty good start don't you."

its your hero's reply!

he still didn't love khushi the way she was in love with him! Then why the hell did he marry her?

to have emotional support when he is at his worst?

it means when he is at his high he doesn't need her his choice is lavanya but when he hit bottom he need support so he think khushi & he are meant to be together!

was he that blind to ignore all her care and love when they were married?

after all he had an option in lavanya! he could take risk! he did it!

was sex with lavanya more precious than everything that khushi was giving him in their marriage?

he loved lavanya! he went back to her leaving khushi behind!

and then what made him change his mind and suddenly realize that khushi is the one for him?

care to explain?😲

let me clear you one thing it simply means that arnav never desired khushi he desired lavanya as his woman and khushi at the most is his just a need!

he proved that twice!

in the practical day to day life, people who remember & come to us us only in their bad times & forget us in their good times we call them as selfish and dont consider them with high regard! though a pride can be there in us about people trusting us in their bad times...

but it cannot be the good thing to base a relationship like marriage in this case?

wasn't arnav a selfish man? that he needed khushi only when he needed her!

But never bothered to know about her when he was busy with lavanya?

This khushi is more surprising than arnav ...How can any normal girl forget this crucial fact and go back to such a man forgetting that he was happy without her in his life?

somewhere u wrote that arnav and khushi being attracted and started to fall for each other during their marriage. then wasn't arnav fooling khushi when at the end he left her for lavanya?

he may not have cheated on khushi during their marriage but he definitely had played with her...

and playing is more cruel than cheating...

he told her about his past...she still married him with a hope of a beautiful future...but what he did?

He left her!

and the irony is that he fell for khushi again but khushi didn't get what he once had said to her while leaving her...that she deserved better...than him!

and here, i object the khushi returning to him for no good enough reason except that he was now ready to think about them?

can he ever understand her pain? No

Can he ever repay her? No

how can healing heart pain be so easy? is physical intimacy enough to heal Khushi?

please dont write such stupid things!

I wouldn't have said this if remarriage had never happened...its okay if marriage doesn't work...not every marriage ends in love and a happy ever after! its okay not to feel love for your spouse as a compulsion of marriage ...but at least not make it a play!

i continued to read because i had a small hope that this story is about arnav's repentance or something like that with not a happy end...but it ended even worst than my imagination...

arnav was even a human to react naturally when lavanya left him. But he was so casual with her that once she left he had another option ready in khushi! such a sick man he is!

but khushi was a saint to just let go of it without making a fuss! Why so? because she is a matured lady!

Maturity is not given as a birth gift madam it is earned by experiencing life in all shades..we cry...smile...suffer...fall...rise..through everything that makes us human...that how we grow...get that in your head...

But yes, she did reacted and went out her suffering after marriage!

but why after marriage? why not before? what if lavanya never left him and they lived happy together?

i know this question makes no sense but its the most logical thing any one will ask in such case! Because it is what decides the fate of the story!

arnav is an immature person...🤢🤢🤢

when he was with lavanya.. he married khushi...when he was with khushi he wanted to be with lavanya ...when he was with lavanya and also khushi entered in his life he started to think about khushi...when lavnaya left him he wanted khushi...

i can only say he is a psychological case who needs a treatment!

this man after leaving khushi never looked back on her...when this girl was pinning for him he was happy with lavanya! so only when he was left alone he remembered khushi...why?

because she took care of his grandma...cooked food for him...take care of his house...stood as a pillar of support to him...so did he need a house maid or a lover? because he needed khushi only for those things which lavanya didn't give him!

Right???😡

it also tells one thing that Lavanya was his lover...a carefree spontaneous affair of passion and desire...she also became his companion...but Khushi remained as just as his wife...not only before but for now.also...

Another fiasco was khushi secretly putting condition for their remarriage...

but why in the first place get remarried to him? she could have taken care of nani as a caretaker!

then why remarriage?

to get physically intimate with arnav or to get what she wanted which wasn't available to her earlier?

she is equally sick!

How can this be love? which is only need based?

when i can see the confusion all around , people expressing their questions you are running away under the veil of "i see things differently!" attitude... when in reality it is just a mess of no clarity and confusion!

because the dear author dont think its important to write about what others think is important!

what bullshit is this?

any sane person will ask this basic questions?

not asking you to write for readers to convince them of something but the least you can do is make it look convincing from your so called perspective!

No matter what the end you gave to it... i took the liberty of imagining things differently in my mind and ending it on a peaceful note where khushi moves on from arnav and gets the best partner and lives happily...while arnav learns his lesson well...though i am not a sadist to keep him waiting or devoid of love..they both travel their different ways peacefully which once got crossed with each other...

thats how providence ended for me...

i dont think any one on this story reacted this way ...its an over reaction from my side... i know it...but i dont want to start my next day with an irritated state of mind,...i need to take out my frustration caused by reading it...

i think you have a special liking for a sadistic romance between flawed arnav raizada and a poor meek simple khushi who bears all this nonsense but still cant help but love arnav!

and i hate it!

because such romance or blind love sagas are romanticized only by fools!

and i am not one of them!

i have said all this because i cant even imagining being in the place of khushi and living that way..

u may have fun in writing this but i clearly didn't have while reading it...it actually irritated me to hell and made me do thing which i never did before...

to criticize...go to hell with constructive criticism...i am really expressing my hatred for this story...

hopefully, there are better intelligent authors who write good stuff...

will not read u or come across ur work...

make sure what gives u great fun also do the same for readers...

Originally posted by: Chanyaforever

Dear, after a long time I visited your stories and read this one.
As a married woman, wife and lover all I can say is that this story is hurting my feeling and messing up with my peace of mind! There are so much question unanswered and left open, I don't even know where to begin with...
It's in the middle of the night in Europe and I am left frustrated once again after finishing one of your story's...
Wish you all the best, take care, Chanya.