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Bakergirl

@Bakergirl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#601

Lovely ending...indeed less is best!

To me, it was not punishment dished out by Khushi, it was...

i dnt know how to describe...it was...

Ws like taking him through a sliver of time...to experiance her journey of those two years...in a span of two weeks...

Her magnanimence shone through & His flaws were flooded in it...

Thank you for penning this lovely story...

Cheers!!

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tina_1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#602

Nice ending ...thank u for including kids scene

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Arshifan_priya

@Arshifan_priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#603

Superb ending.. Khushi's last line so touching.. Happily ever after 😊

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 9 years ago

#604

Awesome ending!!! Loved that they reunited!!

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#605

A wonderful read. Arnav, sure did not go through the gruelling I would have liked. But I think Khushi is not me. :) She forgives easily. That is her character, otherwise, it would be out of character. So, I am not complaining. But I do think that her apprehensions were valid because she was so giving and loving throughout their marriage(first), but he still preferred La over Kushi. After he went back to La, if he was unconsciously in love with Khushi, he would surely have missed her.But only when La was unfaithful did he rethink their relationship. And when Nani was hospitalized, he truly felt lonely and realized that Khushi would always have been there with him. For that I think he should have proved his love and not got back it easily.

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

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Posted: 9 years ago

#606

Nice story . However , it still bothers me that he went back to La after leaving Khushi and only came back to her after La's infidelity . Also, somewhere it comes across that he gave this another try for nani's sake .. Lastly, was he ever attracted to her ? I couldn't understand if he would be really faithful and true to her this time . I felt he should have redeemed himself more but Khushi is a gem so no surprise there that she lets him off the hook sooner . This was a realistic story and I really applaud u for writing a different story for arshi . Usually we r used to seeing Arnav passionately in love or hate . Here he is vague and settles almost for her and that seemed real . Not everyone gets exactly what they want . But they might find something else and that could become exactly what they wNted .

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#607

Whatever Arnav did is wrong . He had left his wife for other woman . He did not love khushi enough to consider her feelings earlier . La's infidelity is an eye opener to him . Khushi left him second time but this is on her own will . Earlier her husband had hurt her by not reciprocating her love . Obviously she is scared to trust him in the second chance .

Arnav got the taste of the bitter medicine he gave his wife two years ago . The lover in khushi could not hold back her love . Her punishment lasted only for two weeks .

However i agree with her decision to get back to her husband . After all we have only one life , holding on to revenge , hate , will bring us nothing .

Love is all khushi wants and her happiness stays with her husband . This time ASR has learnt his lesson , so the second chance will be fruitful for both of them

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rockingsoni

@rockingsoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#608

Perfect ending.. enjoyed reading it..

Keeping writing..

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pushp_barun

@pushp_barun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#609

Superb ending :) will u write bitter sweet seaon 2 ??? Thats my all time fav . Pretty please :)

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jagrutid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#610

Thank you guys - i don't want to say a lot apart from thank you and that I hope to see you all on the other side of a new story very soon.
In the mean time I'm making a note of all your requests, some of them to even go back to some of my all stories... i certainly have some ideas I will go ahead with and others I will think about.
Again thank you :)