Hey 😃😛
I re read the whole story in a go today .. well i will say i liked it more this time .. infact i loved it now ❤️ ... i liked it earlier too but reading it now was more fun :D ..
I loved arnav most !! ... apart from his misunderstanding .. i just loved everything about him ... how much he tried to get khushi s forgiveness .. his redemption was bang on, saiyu ... there were scenes where i could imagine a sad looking arnav with slumped shoulders and low head .. when khushi told him that she said yes to marriage but did nt confess her love... i could see a sad arnav there ;) ... also when she accuses him of releasing the picture in media and plotting the whole thing i could imagine his face with closed eyes ( you describe pretty well *thumbs up* ) ..
So i was telling you liked EVERYTHING about this arnav .. i even Loved it that he was sooo busy during the fashion shows .. i find it attractive about him 😆 ( is it weird ? ) .. i loved how he always called khushi despite being so busy .. and when he came home to meet khushi and was all tired .. i loved it too ... he didnt want to make her or her family wait .. he was just too perfect .. perfect in both his personal and professional life .. I LOVe him ❤️ ..
He was a perfect brother and loving husband .. he was perfect in every relation bas shuru mai he was a fool ...
By the way i liked it too how he was trying to stop anjali nd shyam from moving out of shantivan .. i know he was being a fool again n was unreasonably stubborn ... but i found him cute 😆 ...
I have said this already ..telling you again that Lisa -sim -pam scene was really good (y) ... arnav didnt insult khushi and in this way i find it better than show..
Arnav is my favourite character from this story ... :D
Next without any doubt i loved the absolutely adorable couple - the shenoy couple ... BESt hai ... Ram was cute 😆 ... he was a foodie and i Love those who love food 😆 ... his going on non bhuk hartal was very funny and cute ... he was a fatherly figure to arnav n khushi both ... he played quite a role in bringing arhi closer :D arranging dinner ..motivating arnav n treating khushi wth so much affection !! <3 .. sweet hai !! ...
Nd gautami was sweet n loving as a mother too .. she helped khushi in realizing her love for arnav .. her nok jhok with ram was way too cute 😆 taunting him for the girth of his waist and for his eating habbits .. that was funny 😆
Saiyu ... there were so many times you mentioned about arhi kids ..
Ram told gautami that someday they can have arshi baby ' s picture in their room ... arnav told in media khushi is his would be wife n wd be mother of his children ... he wanted to release the pic of his first child even before marriage 😆 .. and then he says nani will dance whn their first child is born ... and yes yes not to forget khushi when sees arnav with manjari thinks that arnav will make a doting father .. why saiyu why . Itny sapny dikha k sapnoo ki dunya sy asli dunya mai kyu laai ...? Why did yu put "*completed*" in tittle of thread 🥺 ..? Honestly i did realize that the last update was the last update .. i thought aik epilogue ya kuch plan kya hoga.. but thn i see completed... :'( .. ab tou " Removed . No i dont have a blog" aany ki dair hai ... #itna asan hai tmare lye ( zyada ho gya ? 😆 )
Now about our heroine ;) .. khushi ... i felt so sorry for her in the beginning ... bechari ... arnav shdnt hv done wt he did to her ... but thn how wd yu hv written AF if arnav hd nt done all that 😆 ..
And about khushi ... i liked her strong character .. she did nt frgv him as easily as the khushi of our show .. here khushi had more self respect :) .. she was stronger as i said before but loved him too ...
I liked it when she did nt gv him the satisfaction by showing her gratitude ( during the Lisa coffee thing ) ... although i was worried initially that arnav dxnt farak hr anymore .. but no . Farak parta tha dammit.. she had cut her hair just to prove him a point .. she was the best arnav could.. totally understood him nd his anger ... she will handle him best i m sure ..
I liked their conversation " hum bhi nafrat krty hain " .. no i did nt like arhi hating each othr but i liked tht she spoke her mind always... even in that scene where she agrees to his proposal ... she was quite straight forward to tell him tht if the marriage was out guilt thn he shd back off ... khushi was sweet ... smart n straight forward .. but yes even after reading twice .. idk why she asked arnav to chose b/w nani s health n her forgiveness.. yes i hv read ur note n i knew it khushi wd hv been disappointed if he had chosen her .. but i cdnt get it why she needed to ask it in frst place ...
Also it dxnt gv her any idea of where she stands in his life or how much he wanted to be frgivn :s .. does it ? ..
Khushi s equation wth ram n gautami .. n wth raizada family was sweet as well :)
Khushi accusing arnav of considering her as cousin sister was very funny...like really funny 🤣 .. i still think that chapter needed a content warning 😆 ..
Anjali ... mujhy tou lgny lga hai k iss naam ka matlab hi badi behen hota hai 😆 ... she was a loving sister... Arnav ko bohot pyar krti hai bndi .. n i love her fr that .. i remember whn i was reading the story first time i found that odd where she beggs khushi to frgv n marry arnav .. but now when i read again i kinda liked tht scene too :'D .. very emotional ...must say .. anjali was like asli dunya wali sister .. she knew his brother was at fault but still she cdnt stay mad at him fr long .. n dxnt want anyone to say anything to him .. infact despite everything she wants best fr her brother .. :) .. yet she dxnt want bad fr khushi either... achi hai wo (*likes*) ..
But she had unintentionally betrayed / hurt khushi too ...
Oh and liked it here that anjali trusted shyam blindly fr right reasons.. unlike ipk :/ .. i hated it in ipk .. how she used to cry so much over silly things :/ .. n how even after knowing it from arnav about shyam trying to kill arnav she believed shyam .. n never once doubted him ..
Now shyam . ..
I felt sad for shyam of this story or say the one you know in AD ...
He was deprived of his real mother almost all his life ... no one can be blamed for this ..but it was the most cruel thing to happen wth anyone.. n that accusation by arnav was not good at all ..
Glad that grima finally accepted him .. n khushi too .. daer sy hi sahi usko apni family mil gai 😃.. happy to yu shyamu 🥳
His fights with arnav ... well .. i admit arnav deserved every word that shyam said ... he was caring brother .. nd a good husband .. i m sure he wd hv been good wth majari too :) ..
That pyash kiss scene wch shyanjali watched was cute !!
Saiyu .. i never realized it the first time i read the story that ... i was reading a story with an arnav redemption track but with no evil shyam ... thats first .. 👏 .. i know yu dnt usually write negative characters .. i like it ⭐️... shyam was there .. terrace scene was there ..MU was there .. but no negativity ... genius ho tum .. 😆😃
Garima ... well ... its sad that she faced so much in life .. she had reasons fr wht she did ... .. she was a victim too ... but all is well tht ends well ... glad she accepted shyam .. her love for her daughters was awesome :D ..
Payal was sweet .. she will be a great model one day ;D ... loved arnav n payal scenes ..
Akash was too cute ... 😆 having a crush on khushi 🤣 .. poor guy .. arnav ny uska valentines cheen lya 😆 ...
Manorma was good natured .. talking to khushi with affection .. it was good to read :) ..
I want to know if arnav has become part of khushi s prayers .. and if he tops the list ? 😳
Bacho ka soch na please !! Let arhi have kidSSS ... 😆 .. please ? Like .. very please ?? ( is that a word ? ) .. 😆
And few scenes that i love in AF ...
1. Arnav admiring khushi s hair .. also when later he tells her that they are still long enough to fan his pillow ;) ..
2 . Was the payash n arhi scene . That was too cute <3 .. feel like giving payal a tissie :* 😆
3 . Ram gautami scene .. couple trying hard to prevent hifying .. lol ...
And whenever they mock fight over ram s health ...
4. I really really liked that arnav with sleeves folded till elbow .. n tie hanging lose 😉
5. Arnav n media scene ... saying ENOUGh .. n everything that follows ...
6 .. and the last update .. puri ki puri bohot achi thi ❤️ .. but best was arnav mano ing khushi :))
( sequence has nothing to do with prefrence of liking .. like all the above scenes equally )
There was one update where arnav comes to drop payal s cycle ... he came following ram s advice only to drop the cycle ( to see khushi ?) Thats it ...? Yu said nothing happens after tht scene wo utna hi tha ..
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Aalu was right it was an awesome story ... :D .. pehli baar bhi achi lgi thi .. but now i loved it 😃 ...
No ramanchi saiyu .. pura cmnt parhna :P without dozing off :P
Otay ? ...
P.s all those places yu visited were so pretty !! ..
P.p s ... thanks to asrcraze for a fool ;D .. i ll suggest her to make similar promises wth yu .. so tht yu keep writing And KEEp Posting :D ... ( kash remove na krti tm saiyu 😡😭 ) :P
Bata .. happy fasting :D
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