ArHi SS#3 A Fool Chp 15 Pg 56 10/04 Completed

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Great story...loved it...will miss reading it

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Perfect ending and I love the quote in the end.

"Every man has two men in him: A king and a fool. How do you know when you've found a queen? When she speaks to the king in you."

Arnav and Khushi are not perfect but they have come a long way to be a couple. Fight like a couple and solve the issue and patch up like a couple. They still have a long way to go with Arnav controlling his anger and Khushi not running away as a first thought but they will be fine.

Like Arnav said 'Bahut Sara pyaar aur thodi takraar.' Perfect recipe for a happy married life.

I loved this Arnav and Khushi. They were a lot better than the show in terms of there substance and stronger character. And to top it you added Ram and Gautami as there Cupid and mentor for relationship.

Like you said they weren't planed but "some of the best gifts we ever get in life are those ones we weren't expecting." - Jigs, ChokriASR

I hope your AD becomes better and you get time to come back and write new stories on arshi, apart from OS's.

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Saiyu,

Beautiful finale. Loved everything about it. Such an amazing story this has been. Yes, interesting to see you do the angst genre, and you certainly did a great job. 👏

I quite enjoyed the various characters, the chotte Akash and Payal, the natkhat Nani who manages to get her way, Shyam who is an upright person and certainly not a creep in any sense, an Anjali that is less whining and clingy! Will wait to read more from you! Jald hee...😆

Best,

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Habits wont change overnight and Arshi had grown together in their relationship. Lovely ending.

I will miss your work.

Stay blessed.

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Thank you Saiyu for such a wonderful story.

"It's all about loving your family"

This story reminded me of the above tag line.

Generally people say things in anger which they regret later on. Arnav is no different. but he cannot always make Khushi a punch bag. Hope he changes gradually for the better.

All is well that ends well.

PS: Just one question, why did Shyam do Khushi's kanyadaan and not her parents?

PPS: I hope, wish and request you write more.

And please ask your sister too to write more. Really miss reading her stories.

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#386

sorry sorry Laakhon sorry for late comment... ending to dhamakedaar tha...Arnav is always Arnav :)
superb story yaar..loved it..Thanks for giving it to us...after a month , ek ya do ya teen epilogue dedo pleaseee... there is lots of scope for multiple epilogues bcos of different personalities of Arnav and Kushi..

love
shailaja

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#387

What an update sirji ;D

❤️ i loved this update most !!!!!!

Acha hua arshi hotstar p wapas aye 😃 ...

Perfect ending saiyu ... i loved everyyythingg in this update ..

Arshi s takrar .. n pyar ;) ... thy hv got lovely families ...

I liked ram n gautami too ... :D if yu plan to write an epilogue ... nd if yu are willing to introduce arshi s kids in that .. thn please us mai Ram n gautami ko bhi add krna 😳.. maybe thy can name arhi s baby / babies 😆

P.s if yu r not planning to do any of the above stated things .. thn please change yur plans 😆

P.p.s i think ... after yu ll remove this story ... it ld be this laste update i m gonna miss most 😛

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

this was good.really good..especially the ending.

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#389

It was an awesome story Saiyu! Loved it totally. sorry I couldn't read it like after every update though I wanted tobut real life intervenes sometimes. Would wait for the OSs as or when they'll come.

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HummingWord

@hummingword

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#390

*New Reader Alert*

I stumbled across your story by chance when I was tired after the days work and was desperately trying to get some/any distraction from the boring commute! And "A Fool" happened.

In one word - "Brilliant"!!!👏

The way you built the story, where Arnav did exactly the same mistakes, but reasons were different. Where characters n situations were same but their behavior were different - Outstanding Job!!

I usually get dishearten by stories which shows weak Khushi, or any female for that matter. So, when the Khushi of ur story stood her ground, well, what can i say... i was seconds away from getting up and applauding her.

Shayam, Anjali, Garima, Shashi...u gave amazing twist to all these characters!! Good job there.

And Ram & Gautami - Such cupids they played for our super ignorant and bull-headed couple. Just loved this addition too.

As i read in one of your note, the Arnav of actual show was forgiven too easily by Khushi n by himself and so The way you made him grovel and beg...well, i lovvvedd it. It seemed real, it seemed fair!

So, basically what I am trying to blabber her is that a story that i just flicked through, made sure that I don't put down my phone until I was done reading all its chapter!!

You are an amazing writer and have a way of keeping the readers engaged from start to end!! Kudos dear!! Hope to read more of ur work! Till then, stay blessed! 😊

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