ArHi SS#3 A Fool Chp 15 Pg 56 10/04 Completed - Page 40

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U've already completed AF... hell... I've bcm such a terrible reader... nd u cant imagine how guilty i feel for this... pls pls pls bear with me some more... (well a lot more, at least till June) But I'll be back... pakka wala promise... we wont remove it from IF by then... will you... pls say no...

Read ur entire story in one go. It was a beautiful read. U hv aptly portrayed that arnav always existed behind ASR and Khushi was the one who could see through the mask. I also loved the way u interlinked the shows sequences with ur own...awesome. do u have other stories? If so plz share the link. Loved ur work. Keep writing such wonderful pieces. Thank u.

Read the whole story in go.. Nice concept Beautifully written ..

This was such a beautiful story... Who said you don't do angst very well. The last three chapters blew me away.. All those changes in Arnav. I know you must have gotten tired of hearing this but I have to say it... Wish ipkknd turned out like this. The whole shyam and khushi being siblings would have caused people to have an heartache. I'm glad anjali got her much deserved sasuraal. Ram and gautami were a treat to read. Thanks to them our arshi managed to stay strong. All the characters had such an amazing perspective. I'm glad reading Arnav's repentance. I was well deserved and in the correct proportion. I mean we all want arshi together, don't we. I'm glad that you haven't give up on writing. Although I do secretly wish that you keep writing the new ones and post some of your old works... But it's ok... U must have your reasons. But wish someday you change your mind! A girl can hope... It's was an amazing journey... I know it's too tiring for you but we readers would love to go on more such journeys whenever you are free...

read it all over again...na jane aap kab ye story remove kar dain

reserved :)