ArHi SS#3 A Fool Chp 15 Pg 56 10/04 Completed - Page 41

A fitting ending to a very lovely story. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us despite your busy schedule. Hope you get the time and the urge write some more on Arnav and Khushi again, soon.

Hey

No epilogue saiyu ?

Its lovely.. read it in one go.. i have always wanted to read something where Arnav actually repent for his mistakes... Loved the Happy couple Anjali & shyam.. Also Gautami ji And Ram

superb totally out of my imagination.. so .. I just can't say it's just too awesome too brilliant SS .. please keep writing More n more!!

Ram Gautami make quite a adorable couple.. In real life as well as here.😊
Arnav can be quite a kid sometimes like he did when he got to know about Shyam Anjali moving out of Shantivan. I mean how can he not understand simple logic and words. But then this is Arnav... his emotional attachment with his family is more than normal. It's borderline possession. Wonder what will happen to him when he becomes a father of a grown up girl!!!😆 Poor Khushi... She would have a hard time convincing him to let their daughter marry a guy she loves and move-in with his family😃
Akash and Payal ki train bhi track pe aa hi gayi.. but does Arnav knows about it or is it known among the women section only?😉
I really want to whack Arnav on his head at times. I mean he is so hurtful with his words. Good for him that Khushi loves him and can't do without him just like him otherwise he would have been one miserable man. But then he does and says such heartfelt things that I melt... Can't blame Khushi now, can we?😳
I'm going to miss this story...
You better post some OS soon and don't stop with them.
PS: About re-posting your old work - You please re-post few of your works if not all. I want to re-read OS: Barun Sobti here.

It was a working day but yet I stayed up all night to read this story. Amazing and sweet

I have read many stories on our arshi..n I should say this has become one of my favourites! T way u have described thier emotions in every stage if thier life was so so awesome :)

It was one mesmerizing tale to say the least. i liked how you have devoted time in beautifully crafting other characters as well. Be it Ram-Gautami pair, Akash-payal or Arnav-Anjali-shyam. Each relationship has been depicted flawlessly in a way reader could instantly connect with them. However it doesn't take the centerstage awage from our leads ofcourse. Thats one beautiful apology you have penned in the last chapters. Totally in character with Arnav.

Wow this was a wonderful story with outstanding redemption track..
I seriously loved the way you have shown the feelings and the changes with time and the grounded things that stayed as the major hold for arshi's relationship.
I loved Arnav and Khushi equally and like how they had come across a longpath with time.
Mera arnav thodapagal h .. Kuch galtiyaan kar baith ta hain but in end we all know no one can beat him in any way.
Khushi sakht bante hain , but we know she can't live without her laad governor ... She had changed the man ..

Dear I am really happy that you took a chance to come bck and write such a wonderful piece of writing ..
Hope someday in future we do see u writing again a full fledged ff .. Till then I will wait and wihu luck for ur work and future..