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Posted: 18 years ago
awww.. no dont kill the romance.. the bus part was hallarious.. i had so much fufn reading that..


continue reall soonnnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
just read the entire thing...awesomee..... te bus part was hilarious....continue soooon....
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Posted: 18 years ago
grt part, 👏 👏 the bus part was hilarious!!!!!! 😆 😆 continue soon!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
sooooo cute!! continue soon pls!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

awww.. no dont kill the romance.. the bus part was hallarious.. i had so much fufn reading that..


continue reall soonnnn

thanks but sorry life cant stay perfect for 2 long

Originally posted by: Mrs.IqbalKhan

just read the entire thing...awesomee..... te bus part was hilarious....continue soooon....

thanks im happy u enjoyed it

thanks

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

grt part, 👏 👏 the bus part was hilarious!!!!!! 😆 😆 continue soon!!!!! 😃

thanks

thanks

Originally posted by: Numera*

sooooo cute!! continue soon pls!

thanks

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

rocking part Shaz 😃 👏 👏

thanks

Originally posted by: za7n4b

grt part keep ccontinuing

thanks

thanks

Originally posted by: me_iq

awww shazu tht was awsome

thanks iqra😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

part seven

Recap-

that night kripa was in bed when she received an mms this means a multimedia message,she opened the mms inbox

kripa u dont regret any of this do u?xx

she smiled and sent back this:

Photobucket - Video and Image Hostingread this and ull get ur answerxx

Angad smiled and they both went smiling off to sleeep

todays part

one week later

angad and kripa have only one week to revise for there gcses they haven't seen eachother for a few days,angad was studying on his music gcse and wasn't bothered bout the rest while kripa was studying all subjects,that night kripas mom knocked on kripas door

kripa-cum in

gayatri entered

gayatri-kripa were going to the party comeon

kripa-mom I got to revise

kripa-no cum on now ur dads aiting revise when u cum bak and wear asian clothes preferabally a saree

meanwhile at Angads house,Angads dad cums up to him

dad-angad get changed we have to go to a party

angad-well dad im studying

dad-angad pls don't annoy me and get changed ur mom layed ur clothes out on ur bed now hurry

angad-no ways im not wearing moms chosen clothes

dad-ANGAD!!!

angad-f9 wheres soham

dad-ive sent him to India to dadi hell be staying there for a few months

angd-wat!

dad-yep he was getting to bad here,so he needed to be tought a lesson ok enuf bout him hurry and go get ready

at the party kripa came in wearing this:

while angad happened to be at the same party and he was wearing this:

both were wandering around when they bump into eachother

kripa-angad tum

angad-kripa wala its getting hot in here u look burning man

kripa-u look pretty hot urself better then the horrible hoodies u always wear

angad-well mom made me…u studied

kripa-yea im so scared I really want straight a's

two months later

angad and kripa are really serious bout eachother now,its results day they go to the hall to collect there results,kripa opened her results and screamed in joy

kripa-I got A's omg(hugs angad)

angad opens his

angad-I got b and c for everything and I got a star for music and ive been accepted in soul music academy

kripa-that's great ive been accepted in (cheking)erm…. London College of Community Development Studies and Computer Sciences

angad-wat in england but u don't have visa

kripa-they give u one year free visa,omg aint this cool

angad-yeah totally cool(sarcasm)

kripa-kya hua angad tum kuch khush nahi lagrahe ho

angad-I know ,I mean my girlfriends going England far away from me im ova the moon

kripa-angad stop being childish,b4 we started going out we were mates so it doesn't really matter

angad-well I suppose so

angad and kripa spent more time together and became even more close not physically but emotionally,that day kripa was at the caf waiting for angad meanwhile some boys start misbehaving with kripa

kripa-yeh kya batemeezi hai,don't touch me

guy-batemeezi no no yeh to sirf hamari dosti hai

kripa-I dunt want ur dosti now move

she pushes them,the guy gets angry and was bout to slap kripa when angad came and battered them,everyone stares

kripa-angad stop

angad didn't listen to so kripa practically forced him out the caf and the boys ran off

kripa-angad did u haft to create such a scene it was so embarrassing everyone was staring

angad-kripa they were

kripa-wateva they were doing I was handling it

angad-but

kripa-no but angad that was stupid

angad-u know wat im stupid cuz I luv u,ha I love u,u the only girl ive really fellt sumthing for,the only girl that reached my dream,the only girl whose touched my heart,wen this happened I dunnow but I do know that I luv u,u find it stupid then yes im stupid!

he goes to the bustop when kripa comes next to him

kripa-im sorry

angad-f9 but if u do that again I wont be forgiving u

kripa-can we go out now

angad-no

kripa-why

angad-I gotta take u sumwhere cum

angad takes her to another caf and they go in al the lights were off

kripa-angad its closed

suddenly the lights cum on and kripa sees the place all decorated,she smiles at the banner,he knew it was her birthday she turns to anagd to hug him but doesn't find him,she then hears Angads voice

Mera dil jis dil pe phida hai - 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba haimeri ulfat meri wafa hai -2woh dilruba hai - 2 ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba haimera dil jis dil pe phida hai 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba hai..

he danced with her and then pulled her towards him

ji karta hai teri julfo se khelu ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le luji karta hai teri julfo se khelu ji karta hai tujhe bahon mein le

he hugged her

ji karta hai teri ankhon ko chumuji karta hai tere ishq main jhumu

he kissed her eyelids then spinned her round

dil karta hai tera sapna sajaludil karta hai tujhe apna banaludil karta hai tujhe dil main chupaludil karta hai tujhe tujhse churalusabse dilkash jiski ada hai -2ek dilruba hai -2ha dilruba haiek dilruba hai

he then got her bday cake out and she blew the candles,they fed eachother

mera dil jis dil pe phida hai -2 ek dilruba hai -2 ha dilruba haiek dilruba haihai..... maine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya haisirf tera intezaar kiya haimaine sanam tujhe pyaar kiya haisirf tera intezaar kiya haimujhse nigahein kahin pher na lenamaine to tera aaitbaar kiya hai hai tere khayaalo main khoya rahoonga tere liye har dard sahoongamere liye tujhe bheja hai rab nesaare jamaane se main yeh kahoongaho... jiska jaadoo mujhpe chala hai -2 woh dilruba hai - 2ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba hai

kripa runs to him and hugs him

mera dil jis dil pe phida hai - 2ek dilruba hai 2ha dilruba haiek dilruba haimeri ulfat meri wafa hai -2woh dilruba hai - 2 ha dilruba haiwoh dilruba hai

angad then takes kripa in his arm and twirls her round

5 mins later

kripa-thanks angad lekin how did u no it was my bday

angad-I love u that's enuf to no everything bout u

kripa aparts

kripa-lekin angad I don't love u

angad-but

kripa-look were frens,we went out,tahts all love I dunt no

angad-kripa

kripa-look angad I was gonna tell u ages ago that u no that im going England I think …I think we shud break up

angad-wat!

kripa-im sorry but its for the best

kripa goes leaving a heartbroken angad

angad gets his guitar and starts singing

Dil ka armaan thi, tu meri jaan thiTu meri zindagi, meri pehchaan thiTune dil tod ke, barbaad kiyaBarbaad kiya, barbaad kiyaHadd se zyaada sanam, tujhse pyaar kiya -2 Tera gham sataaye, meri jaan jalaayeYe dard-e-judaai, ab saha na jaayeAb saha na jaayeTera gham sataaye, meri jaan jalaayeYe dard-e-judaai, ab saha na jaayeTune jeena mera, dushwaar kiya -2Hadd se zyaada sanam, tujhse pyaar kiya -2Dil ka armaan thi, tu meri jaan thiTu meri zindagi, meri pehchaan thiTune dil tod ke, barbaad kiyaBarbaad kiya, barbaad kiya

angad got kripas photo out his wallet

Hadd se zyaada sanam, tujhse pyaar kiya -2

meanwhile kripa is at home crying

kripa-why am I crying

that's when she sees angad in her room

kripa-angad

angad-why u crying u haven't lost anything

kripa-angad tum jao

angad-I luv u kripa

kripa-but u cant

angad-(comes closer)I can

kripa-(crys)angad pls aisa mat karo mere saat

angad-kya pyar

kripa-ha

angad-kyun nahi

kripa-cuz I luv u too(shuts her eyes)ha yahi sach hai lekin main darti hoon kyuni main jaanti hoon ke hum dono ek doosre se door rehna parega lekin sacha to yeh hai ke main bhi tumse bahut pyar karti hoon

kripa slowly opens her eyes and she sees she is talking to herself

kripa-angad….matlab yeh mera vehm tha

3 days later kripa packs her suitcase,b4 going she rings angad,angad without looking at the id picks up

angad-hello

kripa-bye angad

angad-hello kripa wta do u mean bye

kripa-im going bye,I love u

angad-huh kripa wat did u just say

kripa disconnects

angad-hello hello,omg kripa chalejayegi

kripa is at the trainstation,10 mins for her train to leave,5 mins later angad comes running,kripa takes a step on the train when she hears

angad-kripa

she gets off and turns

kripa-angad tum

angad-kripa pls mat jao

kripa-I haft too

angad-pls don't leave mee

kripa-im sorry angad

angad-I love u kripa

kripa-I love u too

angad-agar mein tumhari zindagi mein kuch mayne rakhta hoon to tum nai jaoogi

kripa-angad if I mean anything to u ull let me go

angad-(crying)no

kripa-pls Angad

preview-will she leave or not?????????????????

😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg i cant wait
cont soon
another part
bcauz itz .... umm
IQBALZ BDAI
haha
iqbalz special
plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... hope she dusnt go!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwww nahiiiiiiiiiii...that was sooo emotonal shazuuuuu.....do con soooooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg that was so cute 😳 😳 i luved it! u rocked shaz!my princess will get her love [:D/] do cont soon! 😛 👏 👏

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