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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: brainychild92

so prithvi is breakin them up! that lil!!!!!

u cant do this to them.. i no life aint perfect but ak are and i hope u keep it like that

i cant wait till 3 yrs past... they have to get together somhow rite


continue sooooooooonn

sorry for taing so long but im gona continue now and yea i hate pritvi too😛thanks for the comment😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Shaz

Stupid Prithvi idiot

just like bro right anyways thanks unny😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwwwwwwwww sooo sad.........porr angad 😭 😭

lolz thanks😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww. poor angad n kripa... stupid misunderstandings!!!!

i no i h8 misunderstandings too anyways thanks for the comment and is neha your real name its really nice if it is😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xobrown sugaox

amazing i just read it..............wow ur story is ooooo creative...like the setting and language...its like modern and all............................................poor angad and kripa 😭 😭 😭

thanks for reading it and im glad u lyke it and just to tel ya upen looks really hot in that pic in ur siggy😉😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

sos for taking long but ill continue now😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

shazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz omg i'm gonna killu how could u 😡 😡 😡 u r beeing EKTA KAPOOR 2 😡 😡 grrr my poor wife 😭 😭 cont soon 😭 😭

lolz laiba and dun worry if i create a problem i always solve it and pls dont compare me to kekta i hate her she makes fab dramas but she ends tehm to quick lyke kyph 😭😭but the repeats on now im so happy😛and i miss u yaar😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

sorry for taking long im just contnuing now😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Part 9

3 yrs later

Kripa got down the train steps in her short jeans and vest t-shirt, she looked around 3 years god she missed this place, Kripa hadn't really changed well she was now 3 years older and her hair was now curled permanently apart from that she was the same Kripa. She then looked to the poster on her left and a tear dropped down her eyes, she walked towards the poster and began talking to it.

Kripa- theen saal,na tumne phone kiya,milne ko bhi nahi aye,lekin ab mein agayi hoon,ab hum dono sath rehsakte hai,I love u I love u angad.

the poster was of angad new yorks desi rockstar angad

she got a taxi and made her way to Angads reharsals,she knew his reharsals were here cuz prithvi had told her on the phone,hed beena really good mate to her in these 3 years,she went to the doors the guard was sleeping so she went inside itsnot like angad wud mind her cuming in anyways.but asoon as she walked towards the studio the guard woke up

guard-ap kaun ho

kripa-mein kripa

gurad-kisse milna hai apko

kripa-angad

guard-appointment

kripa-hes my boyfriend why do I need an appointment

guard-oh im so sorry maam andar jaiye

she walked in the room and there she saw angad,he looked hot in the poster but he looked even more hotter now.,to surprise him she got behind him and put her hands on his eyes,angad who was annoyed by this behaviour angrily grabbed kripas wrist and pulled her to the front.

angad-who da hell……………KRIPA

Kripa Angad (hugs him) im back,lekin main tumse bahut naaraz hoon tumne mughe phone taknahi kiya anyways now mein vaapas agayi hoon im so happy to be I ur arms again.

angad got out of his trance and pushed her away from him

angad-who let u cum inside

kripa-(shockingly)angad

angad-u just shut up ok,securuity!!

the guards come

guards-yes sir

angad-who let her in

guard-she said shes ur girlfriend

angad-and u believed her,god wat do I pay u people for

a girl walks in wearing a mini skirt and a halter top,she touched Angads cheek

girl-honey calm down

angad-no ways ipshita did u see wat they done

ipshita-comeon she must be ur fan

angad-she told them she was my gal

ipshita-to kehdiya its doesn't mean she is comeon not every girls as lucky as me now are they

ipshita came infront of kripa,kripa looked at her face woah she wore a lot of make up

ipshita-now comeon get out(touches her arm)

kripa-(throws her hand)don't touch me

ipshita-well then get out and stop being a cow

kripa-talks the cow herself

angad-KRIPA!

kripa-angad tum isliye mughpar chilare ho

angad-kripa agar ek janvar bhi yaha hota to mein uske liye tughpar chilata u no why cuz u mean nothing

kripa-(she goes towards him and puts her hand on his cheek)angad tum aisa kyon kehrahe ho don't u luv me naymore

angad-(looks away)just go kripa(moves her hand)

kripa-so tum mughe pyar nahi karte angad kuch to bolo

angad-I don't u heard I don't..i h8 u

kripa-(crying)angad tum yeh sab(falls to the floor crying)kyon,I luv u so much art um ho ki aise batrav karre ho jaise tumne sab kuch buladiya,kyon angad maine aisa kya kiya

angad-guards throw her out

kripa-(thinks)I no he still luvs me aur shayad ek tareeka hai yeh sabit karne ke liye

preview-wat does kripa do??????

sorry for the delay ill try to updte quiker now😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: memze

i no i h8 misunderstandings too anyways thanks for the comment and is neha your real name its really nice if it is😛

That was an awesome part... even tho it was sad, i wonder wat kripa is gunna do!!!!! N btw neha is my real name n thanx for the compliment!!! 😊

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