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Posted: 18 years ago
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dil tere naam kardiya 😛

Part 5

kripa,angad,shaz,johs all go to there netx lesson maths

kripa-this si so boring I dun get none of it

shaz-tell me bout it I wanna go shopping

kripa-yea me to

shaz-hey I got an idea

she writes a note and forges a teachers signature,she then puts her hand up

teacher-yes shazmin

shaz-miss we have to go were all performing at the arts fest heres the note from mr west

teacher-(looks at the note)fine go

kripa and shaz are going wne angad put his hand up

angad-with them miss

kripa-but

shaz-shh cha lets go

outside

kripa-shaz why did u let them cum

shaz-cuz if I said no then the teacher would've asked mr west and we'd get done for it and I du not want detention for the rest of the term

kripa-true

kripa and shaz get to the bustop

kripa-I swear I cant believe angad how dare he shout at me

shaz-I cantbelieve josh how cud he smoke

kripa-anagd smokes aswelll its disgusting(no offence to smokers)

shaz- I no

kripa-oh god look behind u shaz

she looks bak and see josh and angad heading there way smiling

shaz-oh crap ab yeh dono ko kya chahiye

kripa-probabaly came to beg 4 forgivness

angad and josh sit next to them on the bench

shaz-u stalkers whyd u cum here

josh-(takes a deep brath)excuse me miss shazmin is bus stop mein tere naa niha likha hai ke hum nahin betsakte and were not following u we cum to go shopping and (scared..)……

kripa-and wat

angad-check out sum gals

shaz-WAT!

josh-yes u heard right

the bus comes kripa and sha zgo upstairs so do josh and angad,they sit opposite

shaz-(whispers)kripa im calling Rishi who u gonna call

kripa-why

shaz-wel there gonna make us jealous so well do it bak

kripa-yea but I dun care

shaz-I do pls kripa so do u have any male frens

kripa-erm there prithvi

shaz-no ways anyone else

kripa-yeah theres feroz

shaz-right call him and tell him to meet us at the next stop

kripa-ok

meanwhile……….

angad-wat do u think theyre chattin bout

josh-mughe kya pata

the bus stops ad two goodlooking boys cum upstairs,shaz hugs Rishi and kripa hugs feroz,angad and josh r not happy

josh-angad im gonna******kill that****I swea he is so******dead

angad-relax ignore them theyre trying to p**s us off just ignore them

kripa and shaz try making them annoyed but it seems no to be working

feroz-kripa I gotta get back to school

Rishi-yeah me too shaz

shaz-ok thanks for cuming

Rishi-anytime(pecks her)

feroz-see ya kripa(pecks kripa on the cheek)

they leave and kripa ad the rest get off at thenext stop in the mall the bull ring shopping center:

(these are the ones i shop at in birmingham,uk)

josh and angad follow them everywhere but they get girls with them and start hugging them but is not working ,sha zand kripa go in to thegirly girly shop which they no anagd and josh wud never cum in they cum out 5 mins later and don't see them anywhere

kripa-where have them 2 lafunge disappeared too

shaz-omg

kripa-wat

shaz-uppar dekh

they look up and see angad and josh with big banners aying sorry and theyre standing on the escalators

angad and josh- O yaaro maaf karna kutch kahne aaya hunKutch apne bareme samjhane aaya hunO yaaro maaf karna kutch kahne aaya hun...2Kutch apne bareme samjhane aya hunMai hun pardesi naujawan, dil me rahne aaya hun...2O yaaro maaf karna kutch kahne aaya hun...2Oy..Oy...Oy... Mere ehle vatan, o tera kya kahnaNasrino saman, o tera kya kahnaKhushboo e chaman tera kya kehnaMeri gango jaman tera kya kehnaOy...Oy...Oy...Ae desh se aanewale bataKaisa hai mera mehboob vatan...2Kya ab bhi vahan khaliyanome, sab neem ke niche sote haiKya ab bhi vahan bachpanwale, woh khel suhane hote haiKya ab bhi vahan rajarani ke, kisse dadi sunati haiKya ab bhi vahan per bachhon ko, maa lori ga ke sunati haiKya ab bhi vahan baisakhi me, sab jhumke bhangda pande haiOy...Oy...Oy... Kya ab bhi vahan baratome, sab tashe dhol bajande haiOy...Oy...Oy... Kya ab bhi vahan ke dhabome milti hai makke di rotiOy...Oy...Oy... Kya ab bhi vahan ke melome udti hai hasinoki chotiTere desh ki mitti ki vohi khushboo laya hun, vohi khushbo laya hunO yaaro maaf karna kutch kahne aaya hunKutch apne bare me samjhane aaya hun....Ae mere vatan kurbaanTu meri aan... vai vai... Tu meri shan...vai vaiTu meri jaan...vai vai... Tujhpe kurbaan... vai vaiMera armaan...vai vai... Meri pahchan...vai vaiMera imaan... vai vai... Tujhpe kurbaan...vai vaiKya ab bhi muhobbat ki lahre uthti hai chanab ke pani seKya ab bhi suroor chalkta hai madmast hawa ki rawani seKya ab bhi vahan pe galib mir ki gazle gaayi jaati haiKya ab bhi vahan pe mastani mahfilen sajai jaati haiKya ab bhi vahan ki iadome aati hai sevayiyoki khushbooKya ab bhi vahan tyoharome lagte hai woh mele harsooKya ab bhi vahan per shadi me dulhe ka sehra gaate haiKya ab bhi vahan khushhaali me ghar ghar laddo bhijwate haiTu laga le gale mujhko mai bhi tera hi sayaan hun...2O yaaro maaf karna kutch kahne aaya huKutch apne bare me samjhane aaya hunMai hun pardesi naujawan, dil me rahne aaya hun...4 josh-maaf karlo na shaz-josh tum hamesha aise karte ho cums down to shaz josh-kya tum mughe ek aur mocha nahin doge pls kyunki main jaise bhi hon main tumhe bahut pyar karta hoon do saal pehle jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha to meine zindagi ka matlab jaana,pls shaz im incomplete without u I love u pls forgive me shaz-(in teas)u stupid duffer,dumbo ruladiya na mughe(hugs him)I luv u josh-now that that's sorted can ig o eat the hell out of Rishi shaz-josh!! josh-ok ok lets go to the caf shaz-kripa will u be alright kripa-yeah u go ahead shaz-ok angad cums to kripa angad-so kripa-so wat angad-maf karogee kripa-ek shart par angad-kya kripa-tum mere saat picture dekhne chalo angad-picture sure chalo kripa-and u pay angad-oh ab sochna parega kripa-ANGAD! angad-I was kiddin sory lets go they g and find all the films r house full apart from murder,they go to watch that,in between the intimate scenes cum wher angad starts smiling and kripa looks in disgust at the screen and then looks at angad in disgust too kripa-angad ure disgusting angad-wats ur problem kripa-this movie angad-why wats wrong with it kripa-chalo angad-but I paid for it kripa-so im not watching this angad-but its natural kripa-eww im so going chalo angad-no u go kripa-huh fine! angad-hey(shes gone)wait up (loos at the screen)im so sorry mallika muah bye he goes outside and runs up to kripa angad-u r so sad(another word for mean) kripa kripa-wat u enjoyed that film,wats that gals name angad-that babes name is malllika sherawat kripa-well shes disgusting howd the hell can she do those things angad-its natural,its art and di u see how she was kissing that guy woah she was hot and pls stop saying crap bout her I mean I bet u cudnt even kiss like her an angry kripa goes up to angad and kisses his in full passion,she aparts kripa-wat where u saying angad-can u do that again kripa-shut up and lets go angad-one min kripa-wat angad-ure a great kisser kripa-tanks trampy angad-wat kripa-u cumin im waiting at the bustop angad-vaise kripa u wanna go out tomorrow kripa-kyun wats tomorrow angad-weekend cumon kripa kripa-kuch nahin kari oon so I dun mind cumin out with u ill tell shaz angad-no no shaz cant cum kripa-why look angad shaz is my frend and if u don't like her then im not.. angad-shhhhhh I don't want noone to cum wen I meant go out I meant like a d8 kripa-oh(small smile)d8 angad-yes d8 kripa-sorry I dun d8 lafunge angad-cumon kripa pls kripa-no ways angad-just gimme a chance and I promise this lafunga wont let u down what will kripas answer be????????????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#92
that was awsome shaz 👏 but thats not fair u took my josh 😡 not dunt even think of Angad he is mine! i'll tell him to leave u 😃hehe😃 get ready u'll have to pay for what u did 😡

Mrs Laiba Laksh 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
awwwwwwwwww sooooo cute!!! continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
awwww that was awsome shaz dear!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
nice part
cont
ofcourse kripa will say yes
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
aww.. this lafunga wont let u down. soo cutee..

shes gonna b all socho gi(ill think about it)..lolz

great parttttttt... so cutee
cant believe how people see those disguisting scenes!! ITS ART!! art my foot! 😡

anywayzz.. thats my opinion.. well awesome part and cant wait till u continueee
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Posted: 18 years ago
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REally nice part, pls cont soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry for the delay and thanks for the comment anywasy the next part shud be up in half n hour 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

kripa-erm sochoongi

angad-comeon yaar what u want me to get down on one knee and ask

kripa-not a bad idea

angad-f9

he got down on one knee

angad-kripa will u go out with me angad khannah the lafunga who promises if u say yes he will only be ur lafunga

kripa-that didn't even make sense

angad-kya kripa im rubbish at this look I promise…

kripa-f9 ill go out with u

angad-to look after….what did u say

kripa-u tell me

angad-omg u said yes thanks kripa

angad hugs her

kripa-ok im going now

angad-where(upset)

kripa-duffer the bus come

angad-oh ya cum

they go on to the bus and sit at the back of the bustop,angad was slouching on the bus and u cudnt realy tell he was tall,some boys came on the bus and sat on the seats infront of angad and kripa,tey kept turning back and looking at kripa

kripa-angad can we swap seats

angad-sure

when the boys turned back again thinking it was kripa blew a kiss

angad-erm sorry to disappoint u im not gay

guy-eww we weren't blowing kisses at u,we were blowing it at that sexy chick

angad-that sexy chick is my chick so shut ur mouth

guy-oh ok then why don't u borrow her to us

angad stands up

angad-u no who I am,im angad khannah

kripa-angad wat u doing

guy-ure angad sohams bro,were so sory don't tell soham pls

angad-I wont just sta away from my gal

he sits back down

kripa-angad yeh soham kaun hai

angad-soham khannah the worlds biggest gangsta

kripa-worlds

angad-well not world but new york

kripa-new york

angad-okok colleges

kripa-oh alright,angad u no ure so lucky to hve me and u dunt even defend me

angad-hey just did

kripa-no ur bros name did

angad-wat u think I cant sort them lot out

kripa-no

angad got up punched the boys and came back

to a laughing kripa

angad-kripa ab to yakeen hochuka

kripa-yeah

angad-sorry gys the chick said I cuddnt trash u so I had to

kripa-angad lets get off now

she gets up but angad pushes her back down to his lap

kripa-angad

angad-the teachers are outside look

kripa-oh ok let go of me then

angad-na ur cuddly and u smell nice

kripa-thanks but let go of me people r looking

angad-no stop being a wimp

kripa-fine

angad-f9?

kripa-yea

kripa hugs him and starts biting his ear and saying stupid things really loud out causing the whole bus to look back

angad-stop it kripa

kripa-no ur cute and u smell nice

angad-people are looking

kripa-so

angad-kripa

she gets off him and sits in her seat

kripa-exactly that was my point now whose da wimp

angad pulls her back to him and kisses her passionately

all the oldies tut,the teens get free entertainment and the children laugh

angad aparts

angad-so am I still a wimp

the next bus stops

kripa-blushing)lets go

they get off the bus and angad decides to walk kripa home,kripa stops a few blocks away from Home

kripa-vo angad mom dad

angad-yeah im going

kripa-angad

angad-ya

hugs him

kripa-thanks for a brill day

angad-anytime rememba tomorrow ill meet u here at 2 oclock

kripa-ok c ya

she goes leaving a smiling angad

angad-she is one heck of a girl but shes hot,sweet,caring,naughty,cute,wow im a lucky guy

that night kripa was in bed when she received an mms this means a multimedia message,she opened the mms inbox

kripa u dont regret any of this do u?xx

she smiled and sent back this:

Photobucket - Video and Image Hostingread this and ull get ur answerxx

Angad smiled and they both went smiling off to sleeep

Preview-

Gcses

Big twist!!!!!

hi guys this part was all romantic but the next parts gonna be romantic at first but then a twist which wil completeley change aks life

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