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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirchy

Owsome jaan!!!Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont!!!!!Wanna see more AK scenes!!! 😉

thanks ull see alot more ak scenes dun worry😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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dil tere naam kardiya

Part 4

And they kissed,they then aparted and kripa ran home not knowing whether to be happy or sad

Angad-**** why did I do that why did she do that

Kripa got Home

Mom-how was school beta

Kripa-fine mom

She goes straight to her room and closes the door,she cudnt believe she just kissed angad

Kripa-why did I do that why did she do that

Kripas dad-(knocks)kripa

Kripa-jee dad

Kdad-were going dinner to a fren,go get ready

Kripa-yes dad

She got dressed In to this:

They set off to dinner,angad opened the door expecting another of his dads boring frens but when he opened it he was shocked to see kripa

Angad-kripa

Kripa-tum

The parents explaned that Angads dad and krpas dad were childhood frens but they kindve had a fite ad separated but now they are frens again,angad and kripa left the parents to talk and went to the garden

Angad-sorry

Kripa-kisliye

Angad-vo gaari mein jo hua vo nahi hona chahiye

Kripa-forget bout it

Angad-so u look nice in asian clothes

Kripa-thanks

There was a long silence for a while when Angads phone rang,he picked it up

Angad-hi what wow yep kripa ill ask her bye

He disconnects

Kripa-kya hua

Angad-shaz and josh patched up,they called us to the disco to celebrate,u wanna cum

Kripa-luv too but we need permission from mom dad and u have to be over 18 for the discos

Angad-so we look 18 dun u think

Kripa-yea but mom dad

Angad-ill say where going to a frens house

Kripa-ok u asking

Thye went inside

Angad-mom,dad can me and kripa go to our frens house hes gt a partyon

Angadsmom-angad

Angad-pls mom

Angadsmom-gayatri

Kripasmom-fine

Kripasdad-be back b4 11 I mean it

a/k-thanks

in the car

kripa-stop!!

Angad-kya hua

Angad-angad I cat go lyke this

Angad-true lets stop at the mall

Kripa-im skint

Angad-ill pay

Kripa-safe

They get there,angad chooses a pink dress 4 kripa,he payed 4 it while kripa changed in to it,kripa came out looking gourgeous in this:

Angad-wow

Kripawat

Angad-I didn't no u cud make the dress look so ugly

Kripa-ANGAD!

Angad-sorry I was only kiddin,u no how much that dress cost

Kripa-comeon lets go

They go the disco have lots of fun,they cum bak

Angad-kripa tomorrow my performance in canteen be there

Kripa-ok wat time

Angad-9.30

Kripa-alright see ya

The next day at 9.30

Anagd time to perform but he cudnt see kripa naywhere,he started singing,on the last 5 mins kripa came,angad ignored her,after the song angad went straight to the drama studio,kripa followed him

Kripa-hi angad

Angad-get lost

Kripa-sorry iwas late

Anagd-wateva just go

Kripa-angad im sorry I came l8 cuz

Angad-kripa just go

Kripa-anagd listen to me atleast

Angad-GETLOST!!

The whole class stared kripa was now crying

kRipa-(crying)iw as l8 cuz of this

she put a blue gift bag there and ran to the girls toilets,angad opens the bag and fond a black shirt with a note saying"thanks for buying me a dress yesterday best of luck for ur performance"

angad-crap,im such a dumbo

he looks 4 kripa around the school but doesn't find her

angad-yeh kripa kaha hogee

girl-u ooking 4 kripa

angad-yep shes in the girls toilets crying

angad-what thanks anyways

he knocks on the door

angad-kripa cum out

kripa-go away I h8 u

angad-im sorry pls cum out

kripa-die

angad-if u dun cum out im cumin in

kripa-get lost

angad cums in and pins kripa to the wall

angad-I said im sorry

kripa-(pushes him)get lost

she goes from there

angad-that's alli need kripas upset with e

kripa tells shaz shaz tells josh

shaz- until kripa doesn't forgive angad imnot gonna talk to you or speak to you

josh goes to angad

josh-angad im gonna kill u go and beg Kripa 4 forgivness

angad-what difference does it make to u

josh-it does

angad-why

josh explains

angad-poor u

josh-go

angad-where

josh-to kripa

angad-she wont talk to me

josh-well u gotta do sumthin

angad-fine we got maths next ill see wat I can do she is pretty stubbur u no

josh-I dun care put it rite

angad-chil josh here u wanna a ciggie

angad-yep

they both smoke shaz and kripa cum past,shaz walks up to josh

shaz-josh how cud u,ur smoking u promised u wudnt josh I h8 u

josh-sorry babe I luv u

shaz-die

josh-no not again pls

shaz-josh me and u r ova,im going bak to Rishi

josh-no

shaz-yes good bye chal kripa

they go leaving the boys

josh-crap yeh Rishi n ail kill him

angad-ab tu kya karega

josh-u no wat im gonna kill myself

angad-(laughing)shut up josh look if kripa forgives me then maybe shaz mite forgive u

josh-true but u u jerk,dumbo how u gonna make kripa forgive u

angad-I have a plan

josh-wat

angad-ull find out chal

preview-plan in action

-angad,kripa,shaz,josh wag a lesson

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83
cant wait for the plan
awsome part!!

cotninue soonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
AWESOM!!!!!! and u updated after a LONG time!!!!! but it is ok, coz u
made it up by the good part!!!!!! PLEASE continue soon!!!!! 😊

p.s. r u continuing ur other FF's today?????
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85
awsome part shaz! u rocked 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
Awesome part!!!! Cant wait for da nxt part!!!!! Cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#87
thanks for the coments guys next part up tommorow hopefully 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#88
Gr8 part cont soon jaanu!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: brainychild92

cant wait for the plan
awsome part!!

cotninue soonn

thanks😛

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