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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
part 23

mahi was sitting on chair when aarav entered in the room with a envelope-''mahi..this is for u''

mahi looked at him and on envelope-''what is it??''

aarav handed her-''open it''

she opened it quickly and her eyes widened to saw a letter inside it...-''aarav ji this is an admission letter''

aarav smiled at her-''yeah u r continuing ur studies''

mahi looked at him questionably-''what??why??i mean when u did this''

aarav hold her through shoulders-''i want u to continue ur studies''

mahi stared at him lovingly..he is so caring but now she has many responsibility as a wife and as a daughter in law...

she put the envelope on table-''aarav ji thanks for it but i can't do this''

he frowned at her-''n why??''

mahi -''aarav ji im ur wife and i want to take care of u and our family''

aarav looked at her angrily-''yeah ..u r my nanny n im ur baby right??''

mahi-'no i want to''as she continue amita entered in the room-''mahi u should continue ur studies..and don't feel that u r guest here...u r my daughter and i want to u to complete ur studies...''

mahi refused at first but finally agreed

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next day

mahi opened her eyes and stretched her arms and found his place vacant on bed...she frowned and looked for him after few minutes he entered in the room...he was sweating...

mahi-''where were u''

aarav-''jogging''

mahi smiled at him-''aarav ji i think we should go outside for dinner''

aarav looked at her surprisingly-''mahi are u ok''

mahi-''yes...why??''

aarav smirked-''no i just want to confirm...normally u don't behave like this...dinner and all that''

she pouted at him and got up from the bed...she walked towards him-''what do u mean??''

aarav smirked at her-''nothing...''while moving towards the washroom...

mahi-''i will plan dinner don't worry...''she shouted behind him as he entered in the washroom

''ok ''he replied back

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in the evening

aarav buttoned his shirt when he saw her reflection in mirror...for a moment he forgot to blink...she was looking beautiful...actually gorgeous in black sari which showing her creamy waist and flat tummy...she had wore waist band which was sticking to her waist perfectly...he felt jealous to saw her waist band...

mahi-''aarav ji...chale''

aarav shook his hand and turned to saw her face-''yeah''

she moved a head when he grasped her waist-''mahi u know what??''

mahi felt his warm breath on her face...her lips parted away and she asked softly-''what""

he moved more closer to her-''u r looking sexy..damn sexy...i don't want to go on dinner''

her cheek turned pink and she lowered her eyes..he moved inch closer to her closed eyes when they shivered with a familiar voice

they got separated quickly when amita entered in the room-''mahi aarav...hurry up we are getting late''

aarav frowned at his mother-''mom where are u going''

amita looked at him with fake anger-''its a nice joke aarav ..come soon''
she replied and made her way downstairs ...

aarav looked at mahi-''where is she going''

mahi smiled at him-''with us on dinner...ma...dad and abhi sir we all are going on dinner''

aarav raised his brow irately-''really...how sweet??''

mahi grinned at him-''really??''

he barked on her-''just shut up mahi...i thought that u were talking about us''

she pouted-''aarav ji mein to sabki baat kar rhi thi''

''aarav ..mahi come soon beta''amita called them again

aarav irately walked outside leaving her confused

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they had their dinner with each other...it was very memorable moment for amita and avinash...today their family was completed...

aarav was eating silently while mahi busy in talking with amita

amita-''thank u mahi...u know before marriage we often come here for dinner''

mahi grinned to saw her father in law's face...avinash-''amita...we should leave now''

amita understood her husband's signal and stood up with abhi-''abhi come on beta...''

abhi stood up quickly-''ok mom ''

mahi looked at them confusingly-''where are u going ma ..dad??''

amita-''mahi we are going home...u enjoy ur dinner with ur husband''she smiled and walked out towards entrance

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''sorry''she said innocently..while he was walking silently on her side..

she hold his hand tightly-''i will plan our dinner also''

he looked at her-''don't..??''he replied angrily making her nervous with his growl

mahi-''ok''but didn't leave his hand...they were walking silently when he entwined his fingers with hers...she felt happy from inside...she curled her fingers on his tightly...

she spoke softly-''i love u''

he smiled without meeting her gaze-''i know''

she pouted again-''u should reply back''

he looked at her with a cool look -''mera mood nhi h''

she made her face and walked silently-''u r very rude sometimes''

aarav-''i know''

she glared at him -''i hate u''he smirked at him-''u love me...don't u??''

she separated her palm from his-''no''

aarav-''ok fine...u will say it soon''he grinned again and walked towards the mansion

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he opened the doors when she shivered with the sound and put the sari again on her body...he looked at her...she was standing like a statue...

he moved towards her-''can i help u in removing clothes''she moved back -''no ...''

he moved more closer-''im perfect in this work too''

she nervously looked at him-''no i don't need ur help i will manage''and she rushed towards washroom...he laughed loudly...

after few minutes

she came back in same sari and sat on couch helplessly...he looked at her face-''what happened??''

she looked at his face-''nothing''

to heard her answer he resume his work...after few seconds she looked at him and whispered-''aarav ji''

he turned his gaze to hers-''what??''

she lowered her gaze-''wo actually...my...blouse...actually my blouse hook stuck''she finally manage to answer

aarav nodded-''ohkk..can i call someone ??''

she looked at him angrily-''no... can u pls help me''

he grinned-''if i did something wrong with u then...what will u do''he asked excitedly

she fumed with anger -''i hate u ''he jumped off from the bed and sat behind her...he unhooked her blouse tried hard not to touch her skin...

when he saw her inner he stopped -''done''in moved his hand back

he stood up quickly from the couch...she looked at his face and smiled-''thank u''

she stood up and moved towards washroom to change...he grasped her hand-''can i open ur waist band''

she blushed but agreed ..he knelt down in front of her and open the clip of her waist band...she felt his touch on her skin and gasped...he caressed her skin with fingers by giving her goosebumps...he breathed heavily with his touch

he moved little closer and kissed her belly...she closed her eyes with pleasure ...her fingers moved towards his head she caressed his hairs lovingly...

after few seconds he stood up and looked at her blushed face...she opened her eyes-''i love u''

he smiled and embraced her tightly...she hide herself in his chest and whispered-''aarav ji ...''

aarav turned her face upward-''mahi i love u ...and this is my love not my lust...and believe me i will never hurt u...''she smiled and kissed his chest softly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Oh my!!! This was so romantic 😳 loved reading this part...and Mahi is so lucky she has got such a wonderful family and a loving husband. I mean who does that? Wanting his wife to continue studies ...amazing...!!!
Update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Wow dii..what an update..maza aa gya by God..:) :D
Aarav wants Mahi to complete her studies..that's so good of him..not many husband think so much for their wife..& kitni achhi sasu mom h..aisi sasu mom had ldki ko milni chahiye ;)
U know dii..this update has so many lines which made me laugh heartily..

aarav looked at her angrily-''yeah ..u r my nanny n im ur baby right??''
She pouted-''aarav ji mein to sabki baat kar rhi thi''
That whole talk which they shared while returning from restaurant..!!
she hold his hand tightly-''i will plan our dinner also''

he looked at her-''don't..??''
aarav nodded-''ohkk..can i call someone ??''

Not only that..some made me smile too..:)

Aarav's jealousy towards her waist band..!!
The way he helped Mahi for d hook..!!
And d last part of d update was too lovely & cute..:* <3

All in all a superb update dii..waiting for next :) :*

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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Wow..lovely update..! 🤗
Mahi is so lucky to get such a loving husband and caring in-laws..😊
Waiting for next😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Such a sweet update..
Oh my God..
Me too thought about their dinner date..
But mahi...she is too much..
Dinner with family..
But it was nice..
Family is so sweet..
They left them alone deliberately..
Loved the last part most..
Thanks
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Such a sweet update..
Oh my God..
Me too thought about their dinner date..
But mahi...she is too much..
Dinner with family..
But it was nice..
Family is so sweet..
They left them alone deliberately..
Loved the last part most..
Thanks

thanks dear for ur lovely comment
im happy that u liked it
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Poo_2208

Wow..lovely update..! 🤗

Mahi is so lucky to get such a loving husband and caring in-laws..😊
Waiting for next😊

thanks dear for ur comment
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Rajat_Fanatic

Oh my!!! This was so romantic 😳 loved reading this part...and Mahi is so lucky she has got such a wonderful family and a loving husband. I mean who does that? Wanting his wife to continue studies ...amazing...!!!

Update soon...😊

thank u dear for ur comment
loved it
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: 16lvkkk

Wow dii..what an update..maza aa gya by God..:) :D

Aarav wants Mahi to complete her studies..that's so good of him..not many husband think so much for their wife..& kitni achhi sasu mom h..aisi sasu mom had ldki ko milni chahiye ;)
U know dii..this update has so many lines which made me laugh heartily..

aarav looked at her angrily-''yeah ..u r my nanny n im ur baby right??''
She pouted-''aarav ji mein to sabki baat kar rhi thi''
That whole talk which they shared while returning from restaurant..!!
she hold his hand tightly-''i will plan our dinner also''

he looked at her-''don't..??''
aarav nodded-''ohkk..can i call someone ??''

Not only that..some made me smile too..:)

Aarav's jealousy towards her waist band..!!
The way he helped Mahi for d hook..!!
And d last part of d update was too lovely & cute..:* <3

All in all a superb update dii..waiting for next :) :*

awww
loved ur comment yaar
thank u for ur sweet comment
Riyaa16 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
part 24

seema came inside the room and saw her daughter who was sitting on bed ...she went forward and sat besides her-''still angry with me??

mahek-''maa pls leave me alone''

seema-''i can't leave ...because u r my daughter and i have every right to take care of my child''

mahek looked at her-''maa...your care is just for mahi im nothing for u''

seema caressed her face-''its not like that mahek...i love u both equally...''

mahek-''no maa...u have always supported mahi...even she snatched my love still u r supporting her''

seema-''mahek that was not love...mahi and aarav love each other...and u have always misunderstood her...she always tried to come closer to u..she always helped u even in worst situations...she supported our family knowing that she is not our daughter...she tried everything to made u happy to made us happy then give me one reason to hate her...''

mahek looked at her with teary eyes...seema hugged her affectionately-''she is ur sister...she want our love ...ur love...she had sacrificed her love for u...but mahek doesn't she deserves happiness??u tell me??''

mahek -''im sorry ma''she said through sobs and her mother caressed her lovingly-''its ok beta''

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mahi touched amita's feet and she gave her blessing with a smiling face-''good luck''

avinash also put his palm on her head-''god bless u''mahi smiled at him-''thank u dad''

aarav-''mahi lets go''

he said looking at his watch and picked his files from the table...mahi nods and left for her college...

this was her first day of college she was little nervous ...but very excited as she was going to continue her studies...she was smiling when he looked at her-''mahi''

she jerked and looked at him-''yeah''

aarav-''sit''he opened the doors and moved to other side

after half an hour they reached to her college...she came out from the car and gazed at her college...smile crept on her face aarav glared at her and came closer-''very excited??''

mahi nodded her head-''hmm..very excited...u know aarav ji...i have never thought that i will continue my studies further...this is just like a dream...im very happy and credit goes to u...thank u''

aarav-''i just want this...this smile on your face...i can do anything for ur smile''

her smile widened-''im so lucky to have u in my life...thank u again''

aarav looked at his watch-''can we do this thank u session later ..im getting late for office and u too...go inside and u want anything then call me just once''

she nodded-''ok bye''

he came closer to her face to made her moved backward..but his phone start ringing...he irately looked at her face-''leave it bye...n all the best''

she giggled to saw his face expressions and waved at him

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it was 1 pm and she was sitting in the canteen...her morning lectures were amazing ..she had never thought that after a long gap she will managed her first lecture so well...this would not happen without professor who helped her after class...

she was sipping coffee when a girl sat next to her sadly...

mahi looked at her surprisingly when she start talking to her-''every boy is a bast***..i tell u''

mahi looked at her irritated face again and asked softly-''what happened''

''my boyfriend..he is a cheater ...he is flirting with a girl there???look at him..he is so mean...u have knife??''

mahi looked at that boy who was sitting with a girl in the corner of canteen...mahi frowned at her -''what?? knife?? why??...u want to do suicide for him??''

siya-''oh no..darling im going to kill him...why should i..im so beautiful i will find some one else..come on''she said proudly while caressing her face...

mahi rolled her eyes-''oh...''

siya looked at her -''oh forgot..my name is siya..i think u r new here...??''

mahi smiled at her-''yeah..this is my first day today...nice to meet u''''mahi managed to say last line with a smile

siya shook her hand with hers-''same her...waise u know what...u r also very beautiful but not more than me...im the hottie of this college...every boy is dying to date me...''

mahi looked at her with widened eyes...actually she was very beautiful.. and smart too...and looking sexy in her shorts and cropped top...

how could her boyfriend cheated her.. mahi was thinking when siya waved her hand in front of her face-''what happened sweety...are u jealous with me...if u are...then i can't help...''

mahi smiled forcefully -''no no...actually its time for my next lecture ''

siya frowned at her-''are u serious...?? omg...u r going for a lecture''

mahi nodded-''yeah ...nice to meet u..bye''

siya smiled awkwardly-''ok come soon...bye''

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it was 4 pm in the evening

mahi made some notes in the library and finished her work because it was the time for her husband's arrival..she packed her stuff and came outside and saw siya arguing with a professor

professor mishra-''im giving u last warning..submit ur assignment or else i will mark zero in ur assessment''

siya smiled falsely-''whatever??

professor mishra-''ok then''he irately left the place...

mahi came forward-''why are u not submitting ur assignment''

siya-''what assignment.?? oh that ...actually i don't know what he teach and what have to write in assignment??''
siya spoke carelessly while moving with her towards entrance...

mahi looked at her surprisingly-''u didn't even know what he teach??''

siya nodded negatively...

mahi glared at her strangely and frowned to saw her excited face...she followed her gaze and looked at aarav...who was waiting on entrance of college

siya-''oh my god..he is so sexy''

mahi widened her eyes -''what??''

siya reached to entrance quickly and moved her hand forward-''hi im siya''

mahi pulled her hand down quickly...

siya looked at mahi-''what r u doing...??stop it...''she again forward her hand with a wide smile...

aarav raised his brow while mahi fumed with anger..she quickly grasped his arm and stood besides him-''he is my husband...''

siya looked at her shockingly-''what??..he is ur husband...u r joking right??''

mahi-''no im not joking''she gripped his hand and walked towards the car-''aarav ji come on''

aarav relaxed her-''mahi calm down..im not going with her''

mahi pouted at him-''let go pls''

aarav -''ok come''

they left leaving behind a girl with a shocked face

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