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Prabhleen Arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Super - Duper Awesome

Amazing Update I just love this FF Post Soon Thanks for the PM

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

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lovely222

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Wonderful amazing ending will b waiting for the next update like anything

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hydsri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Wow. Khushi's past has come out. I am sure she will move ahead now with Arnav.

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lala rukh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

awesome chapter...one of the best one for me :)...beautifully written...arnav, his flashback...the suffering of khushi as child,it seems like he re visit the past and suffered equal with khushi once again...awesome writing...

loved his meeting with jpalo...so the dawn was in love with khushi's mother ...i was expecting fight action...but u totally shocked me with the beauty of one word love,it changes stone heart to puddle of emotions...loved the asr in front of jpalo..

loved the way u have shown khushi missing arnav there...and then the way she ran hearing the convo of rahim cha cha...its written beautiful...her disturbed state...her eagerness in reaching arnav...and ending scene wow so beautiful..:) loved each and every bit of chap :)

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bubulswt

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

amazing update loved every bit of it

how u explain there emotions 👏

precap is awesome😳

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nisso

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

awesome update!

loved it!😊

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Zaysha_Khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

great work...i appreciate it dear :D

awesome :O

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Aryancha

@Aryancha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: gowtu
Congrats on new thread dear.. Truly deserved... *hugs*

I pray fr ur frnd who had to endure sch incident in her life...
I hope she is doing well now..

Nd now coming to d updt...

Wowww it was AMZNG as evr...
he confrontation of arnav and jpalo was sooo instense...
I loved it so much... U r getting bttr nd bttr everyday...
U r growing wd evry updt...

Arnav meeting wd jpalo was so so intense nd awesome..
D meet couldn't be bttr than dat...
''She ll be khushi Singh raizada forever...''loved d way he said it..

Loved way u described khushi's emotions nd feelings...well written part...
I appreciate every word and the situation u created for it..
Never thought khushi had sch a horrible past..
Poor soul suffered so much...

Aftr knowing dat arnav went to meet jpalo she ran without caring about the surroundings... Thy truly made fr each other ^__^

Hhhaaawww waha kyon roka !!!!!? Eagerly waiting fr next part..
Loved d updt.. Awesomely written...

Continue soon

Not sure how it happened! Either our thoughts match a lot and then we express in the ditto same words or its something I do not wish has happened now..I tried to fail but noticed this comment has almost everything what my comment had..I wish it is not what I think it is.I know its not copying an author's work,but still if it anything near to that it is not a good taste in your mouth.I sincerely hope it is a misunderstanding 😊