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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all I pray for your friend who had to endure such incident in her life.I hope she is doing well now and has gotten someone like Arnav in her life to make her come out of her fears and handle her emotions.😊
Coming to the update..Man seriously! U are getting better and better everyday..I do not write but can see how u r growing with every update..Arnav was bang on with the meeting with JPalo..the meet could not be better than what you have shown it to be..the words spoken with such ferocity and utmost sincerity and venom that nobody would not,not feel the sting in them! Are we clear on JPalo now? Is he not going to search for Alina anymore?Did the words actually affect him,that may be he would think of her forgiveness sometime? These questions are plaguing my mind for now..The remorse and hurt in his eyes reflect that he is already a dead man, regretting his actions..don't know if I want him to confront Khushi or not..will leave it to u to decide.
She will be Khushi Singh Raizada forever! I have noticed this..Arnav has always been saying this in his mind and even to her..Khushi Singh Raizada..When did he marry her?😆😛 or even give a proper proposal to be his in every form..I know the feelings are all over their body and mind and heart..but it needs to out in air..with all the emotions of heart on their tongues..in front of each other😃

can't even think of her childhood pain..now I do feel angry that Arnav had to leave her when he was her only solace in her life..the admittance of him to her past is in itself so painful..he has to go through both his and her pain together..

Khushi's emotions are so well written dear..I appreciate every word and the situation u created for it..the description with the surrounding is very apt..U have given life to her feelings with drunk men,homeless people,broken glass pieces..these all somewhere denote sadness and fear in their own ways..but the emotions raging over her mind is far more than everything that she could think of..the feeling of just being near him asap dominates everything when u r scared for ur loved one..I loved this part..

But it's not at all fair..y leave us at a cliffhanger..i felt I just started reading the chapter when it ended!😡 Plz plz update it earlier this time..we want Arshi moments especially after the small precap that you have given us..
Edited by Aryancha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
awesome superb. I was waiting for this ff
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
It was AWESOME as ever.the confrontation of arnav and jpalo wass sooo instense.i loved it.the wasy in front of so many men with gun arnav fearlessly threatened him.poor khushi she suffered sooo much. Luckily arnav is there for her who loves her with soo much passion,honesty.he is ready to go any heights for her.and khushi after knowing that arnav went to meet jpalo she ran without caring about the surroundings.arnav khushi are just made for each other.poor khushi hurt internally and from outside too.hope in next update arnav wil be able to heal her.
Suuuper writing as usual. Plz update soon.
Never thought khushi such a horrible past.poor soul.
And this happened to ur friend.just cant imagine how much she has gone through. Hope she is strong and god bless her.
Edited by SarunNArshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Congrats on new thread dear.. Truly deserved... *hugs*


I pray fr ur frnd who had to endure sch incident in her life...
I hope she is doing well now..

Nd now coming to d updt...

Wowww it was AMZNG as evr...
he confrontation of arnav and jpalo was sooo instense...
I loved it so much... U r getting bttr nd bttr everyday...
U r growing wd evry updt...

Arnav meeting wd jpalo was so so intense nd awesome..
D meet couldn't be bttr than dat...
''She ll be khushi Singh raizada forever...''loved d way he said it..

Loved way u described khushi's emotions nd feelings...well written part...
I appreciate every word and the situation u created for it..
Never thought khushi had sch a horrible past..
Poor soul suffered so much...

Aftr knowing dat arnav went to meet jpalo she ran without caring about the surroundings... Thy truly made fr each other ^__^


Hhhaaawww waha kyon roka !!!!!? Eagerly waiting fr next part..
Loved d updt.. Awesomely written...

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Very nice update.. Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
to witness one's parent die infront of your eyes scarred one for life. it took a whole lot of courage & will power to move on in life. with a loving family like Shashi , garima & payal , khushi has been able to move on to some extent.
since the past is out , hope this Jpalo is not going to bother them anymore.

Arnav needs a lot of patience , time & energy to make Khushi come out of this pain.

a very beautiful chapter. you have penned the entire details very beautifully.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
arnav's conversation with jpalo was really worth reading, the conviction which arnav had in his voice and eyes even made the mafia speechless, well whatever he said couldn't be countered as he was right in every word he spoke..
Leading about her past, arnav must have felt devastated and even her request must have grown in his heart foe the girl he so immensely loves..
Khushi had this gut feeling of something being wrong with arnav and so she was sleepless, this is what love does to you, you may actually not know the real reason but definitely know that something or the other is not right..
When she over heard arnav being with JPalo, she must have undergone the same dread she faced decades ago seeing her father being killed infront of her very own eyes and so despite being afraid of rains and lightning, she ran her way down to arnav's place not even knowing what was happening around her..
Continue soon.. It was awesome as always
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
The Deep Emotions The Feels of both Khushi and Arnav so deep
and so real the declaration that love does exist and both indeed
can only obtain it with each other
Again Update was just Phenomenal
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haila, yeh to kamaal ka update tha.. I am so giddy with happiness! Like you are an extremely talented writer. You are just proving your Excellency with every passing chapter and I am just so glad that I have an opportunity to read this exceptionally well written and thought over story.

This is your friend's life? Aww I admire your friend. She sounds like a very strong yet delicate person. Kudos to her for allowing you to give us an insight into her life. And full full marks for your execution and doing absolute justice to her story and arshi.

This chapter was more of an emotional yearning and pent up desires that had come to the forefront.. oh my what a brilliant writing di. I am just stunned to silence and I don't think my words can do any justice to this story. I love this story and I wish (I know you are busy) that we get the next part soonish! :D

P.S: I am sorry sorry couldn't comment on the previous chapter. Navarathri you see... :D
Edited by Sadh123 - 9 years ago

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