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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

wow superb update and precap loved it can't wait for next part thank you for pm and congrats on new thread.

Edited by ameena671 - 9 years ago

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Yaara, this is getting more and more intense. With every chapter, there is a puzzle being solved only to make way for a more complicated one. Its is really beautiful, the way you are weaving the story. If..U say that this is a true story and that that brave girl is among us, reading this, I'd like to say, I respect the both of you. No matter how much I am loving to know more and more about the story, it is honestly painful to know that a person, in real has gone through all this. I pray and hope that everything has a good and justified end.

Coming to the story, well laid, well plotted and more so, well connected. I like the way every dot is finding its line, getting connected to another. Its such a remorse to see how ones repentance cant mend back the broken things. Its too late, I agree. Cost too much, crumpled too much.

The way Arnav stood up for, one can live with their eyes completely closed, I tell you. Oh, BTW, I loved that body guard thing, lining on both his sides in the Mansion JPalo. Bloody damn powerful!

I like the pasts coming to light and makin sense, finally! And Gawd! This girl is one strong, stubborn one. Running all the way to his building? In the night? Bare footed?! God save me!

I like the content end after going through all those thrill, excited and distressed episode. Beautifully narrated yaar. Brillant work!

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Arshi2503

@Arshi2503

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Great update.
Why JPalo was obsessed with Lidia?
How she died? How Khushi reached Gupta's
house?
Though JPalo ,a mafia leader he likes Arnav a lot
He approved him as Khushi's choice .But why did he not
accepted Vijay Seth as husband of Lidia?True love always
seeks the happiness of beloved.
Loved Arnav in every way
Thanks for the pm dear
Waiting for Khushi's reactions.

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Cutemithra

@Cutemithra

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Nice chapter.. You didn't drag, as you promised.. Khushi's past was heartwrenching.. She didn't talk about the night to anyone yet right? I think opening up to someone will begin her healing.. And Italian mafia is not a threat.. But he was looking for khushi, for altogether different reasons. Though you gave a scary precap last time, you didn't scare us more in the chapter. Now khushi is at arnav's place, time for some more heart to heart talk?
So you decided to give a sweet precap this time :)

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Aparajita Singh

@appy_19

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Faiqa 👏 Briliiant Job. A great update. as i always use to wonder ki frm where u get such ideas to make stories so intense but this tym this is a Real Story. 👍🏼

Its painful dat ur friend has to go through all this. Omg she is a Strong Lady. Gal i Respect you from d bottom of my heart. i just hope everything goes Good.

well Faiqa you are an Awesome writer n der's no doubt dat u narrate it beautifully to us.!

Love d efforts u make to make us understand d story soo well n get connected to it.

Thankyou soo much ! this was indeed d beaurtiful one.

Love

Aparajita 🤗

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Aparajita Singh

@appy_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Beautiful update and you made it more beautiful with your writing style faiqa :-)

As you said life is not at all bed of roses for some.. my heart goes for that girl whose ever story this is faiqa. .

I loved the way arnav is trying to deal with that palo.. he is directly trying to deal with the problem rather than involving cops or someone else in this.. this gives us an idea how protective he is and can go to any extent when it comes to kushi.. arnav has put his own life at risk when he went to meet him...

He has now understood how much she has gone through and why she said those words in that letter.. Hope he will make her forget everything one day and heal her wounds completely. .

Awesome story faiqa. .

Loved the precap dear ...

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD...

👍🏼🤗👏

Party to banti hain...

Loved this chapter...

Gradually sab sahi ho raha hain...badly want arshi scenes together...

Hope all mishaps get over...

DEDECTIVE MANORAMA KO BULAIGA PADI..EXCOOSE MEE...HELLO HIE BYE BYE

thnx for pm dee ..love u loads⭐️😛

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mansijani21

@mansijani21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Lovely update..!!! 😊

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Fantastic update. Written brilliantly.

So the past is out and who killed her father and why. But will try to meet even after knowing that Khushi saw him killing her father. If he truly loved Khushi then he won't disturb her peace.

Let's see if arnav could change his mind or not.

Loved arnav's brave step going meeting gangster all alone even Aman and few bodyguard would have not done anything in gangster's den. This clearly show how much he loves her and how extent he could go for her.

Khushi can say anything to him bug in her heart she knows she can't live without him. And when two souls are attached together then they could feel each other pain and if they are in any danger.

Now that Khushi is at his house hope they could mend their relation soon and we could get some rabba ve.😃

Thanks for fabulous update and pm.