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~ TEASER ~

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Congratulations for the new thread 👏



THE BEST CHAPTER EVER IN MY EYES.👏


First of all you have the top gif , his winning walk with pride of his treasure , His Khsuhi who means world to him😊
Second , picture, his turning back with her questioning Look,Her tears his remembering holding her that night in her unconscious state , with all what he did after knowing how even she is breathing with this heaviness when he couldn't bear it for one day.😭
HIS TURNING FACE AND THE SUNSET is showing his redemption.Brilliant👏
Next phase is he is crying remembering her words, her letter, all the time which they spent, her submission in that kiss, and his realization that she was loving him, all this time and he was just pushing her away.He cried his heart out, let that guilt wash away.

Love the use of side mirror, his reflection and oath, you are reminding me off this scene


credit to the owner

Love her war in between mind and heart ,but unlike last time she refused to accept ,this time she couldn't reject the thoughts of him which are invading her.

Now her past, my heart really felt this tug today.She is a true survivor in my eyes.But her walk from her home to his , is so painful.How much scared she will be?I felt that whole scene in front of my eyes.So many good elements are making that scene so powerful.
lightening, drizzle,thunder, homeless people, drunk ones, and broken bottle , and I really winced when she said Ahhh,so so so real it felt and yes police officer on a horse even.👏👍🏼

His own yearning , after all of this .JUST TO HOLD HER.I loved it and the way she was feeling restless all day long , he was so desperate to be with her too.

Love the last lines.

⭐️a treasure to be cherished for eternity, ⭐️

PRECAP is making me all nostalgic , I demand next update soon, very very soon.can't wait.They are in each others' arms
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Congratulations my friend.🤗






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CONGRATS ON NEW THREAD FAIQA :-)
may god bless this story with many more threads and us with many more updates ;-)
Waiting for the next update dear :-)

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Congratzz on new thread di..wish this stry reach many more thread🥳
The precap was scaryone di..hope that don dnt do any harm to khushi
Continue soonish

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