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Posted: 9 years ago
#91


HELLO HELLO

Dear Faiqa


Here is Zanadi with a little different COMMENT
I think you deserve it. So here I am, baby to praise you a little even I very well know you do not want it because you are a honest and goodhearted person. Well no matter if you want or not I am here with a little praise.



You are one of these writers here on IF who still keep close contact with your readers as good as you can even you work very hard and have to take care about your private life.

I know very well how it is and that's why I think you deserve to hear this from one other writer.

You are amazing.

I do not read much here on IF but you belong to one of these rare writers who manage to touch my heart. You manage to capture my heart and soul into your stories so that I feel everything together with your hero and heroine.

Whenever they are sad, I am with them.

Whenever they are angry, I am with them.

Whenever they are crying, I am with them.

But the best is when they are happy. I am happy with them.

Believe me, not many writers manage to capture their readers into the story so much that they feel everything.

You need to immagine my face whenever I find your pm in my inbox.

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And you can't even immagine how I look when I read NEW UPDATE in the pm.


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When I saw the new thread I was like.

What the...

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Where is the pm? I read that you wanted to send PMS later so I was glad you didn't forgot me. (p.s. I have it now in my inbox. Thank you)

But then I saw the NEW update and I was like


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After I read it, Iwas like.


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You nailed it lady. Again you did awesome job and make me happy.

Khushi's past was so painful and sad that it was hard for me to bear it. I hope this was not exactly the past of the girl who have been inspire you too. I am glad Arnav felt Khushi's pain. Maybe this will make it easier for her in future.

Some say sharing the pain is just a half pain.

Loved the conversation between Arnav and JPalo.

I like very much that he is trying to deal directly with the problem without police or anyone else. This are the guys I love in books. In real life I am not that brave.😆 I would call the police. LOL


The way he handle the whole situation showed that he is worth of being part of Khushi's life. He is the person who will be the tower of strenght in the future for Khushi. On the other side Khushi is one very strong young woman. I can't even immagine how it is to have to face something so horrible and still stand up every day and live your life.

I wish the girl who inspire you for this story all the best and one bright future full of love and life. May she never again face anything bad.

Comming back to you Faiqa.

I hope you like my COMMENT😉

I want you to know how special you are and people like you deserve only the best. Stay as you are and do not change. I hope we will have more fun in future together and laugh later about many things.

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Hope I could bring one smile on your face
Love you



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Edited by ZANADI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Awesome Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😊
The Pics were so Nice.😊
Please Update Next Part soon,I am waiting here.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Wow great story please update soon
I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new thread
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Congratulation on New Thread...
Awesome update...
loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Faiqa didu🤗
your chotu devil is here!!
Solly * holding ears and making world's most cutest puppy face and cute little pout* for late comment...
But but I plomish next time I will be on time...!!! really!!

Okay coming to update

Didu you left me speechless!! di I told you before also and if not then m saying it now...
"You are one of the most talented writers on IF I have came across till now..."
seriously di the way you describes scenes and emotions you always took my heart away!! M glad that I became a part of this beautiful journey with many others!!

I hope your friend who inspired may get happiness she deserves...

Khushi's past was really painful... I can't even imagine how much pain and agony she must have suffered!!
The confrontation of arnav and jpalo was really good... I love the way he declared his importance in her life...
Di m so proud of myself as I have a didu like you!! you proved the fact that love can melt the most toughest heart of stone with ease...

I really felt Khushi's restlessness, uneasiness and panicky... the last scene is like cherry on the cake *m eating black forest now... hehehe crazy me!! * you bowled me out at the end
didu m eager to read more!!!
so update soon...
see didu I fulfilled my promise...

Love you

Yours
Monu❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Marvelous update
This is just more than perfect
Finally arnav realize how tough it's for khushi to leave her haunted past behind and take him in and understand his pain
And he hurt that heart which beats for him
Well it's easy to hurt but hard to heal
Here arnav ready to fight the world to protect his world
Well love doesn't need word it needs intention
Here arnav is more than ready to walk on fire if that can keep his khushi near him happy and safe
He is ready to forget his own guilt pain past everything for khushi
Hope khushi found it in her soon to forgive arnav and understand his love
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
amazing
love can be stubborn sometimes but the fear of losing it can make u leave all ur in-habitation behind as what matters the most is that u love them
so khushi felt that Arnav was in pain n wanted smash him for making her feel this way but when she found out all crazy though flew by all she needed is him, to hold him n make her believe that he will not leave her wil always be their
love can never be forced n if its forced it snot love its just that u want to dominate that person in name of love as u know that they crave for it or its their weakness

Jpalo if he really loved Lidia he wld hv seen to it that her daughter wld hv ben happy with the only family she is left with bcoz love is never selfish, its about protecting the one u love even if u know in the end it will kill u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Awesome update!!! But you left it at a cliffhanger! Can't wait for the next update!!
Thanks for the pm and pls update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
finally khushi's past came out..
hope everything will be fine soon

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