Tomorrow is your day

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello friends!! I am here with my next work! thank u one and all who supported me so far! Now again I am back with a new fiction.Hope you will enjoy it.
so I need all your encouragement and support as usual.
No characters are bashed or defamed here..this is completely an imagination.
the copy writes are reserved in my name..pls don't copy paste..this is only for forum members.
Well!! I Don't write prologues for my stories because I don't want to figure out the story line in the name of prologue..and the same for character sketch.I should make you to understand the characters in the flow of the story. but still thought of writing a simple short prologue.



[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iVoL06yplC0[/YOUTUBE]






SCENE 1
"Tomorrow " she said.
He looked at her with a surprise and a delightful smile.
"really??" he asked. he could not control his eagerness in his voice.This "really" is not for confirmation but to hear the same sweet news from her again.she blinked her eyes once and smiled.
"Yes! Tomorrow is your day" she said in a soft voice.She blushed.his heart was jumping out in happiness.
"shall I trust you" he asked again.
"Trust your love" she grinned and walked away.
" no fake promises right?" his voice followed her.She turned while opening the glass doors of the bouquet shop and shrugged her shoulders with a mischievous smile.
"no more clues! wait for your day" she walked out.
He was enchanted by that smile.His brain stopped working.An ecstatic smile spread over his face.
His gaze followed the fresh bouquet which took a human form and walked out just.
"So! tomorrow! tomorrow ! yes yes!" he squeezed his fist tight in excitement.
He had started counting his minutes!
SCENE 2
Deputy commissioner of police Mr.SuryaPrakash rushed into that house.He saw her.He saw her dangling neck and her eyes protruding out..her hands were swaying..her legs were oscillating..her loose hairs covering her dark blue face.She was suspended from the ceiling.He removed his cap and whipped out his sweat.He looked around the room and saw that girl who was sitting at a corner by resting her face on her knees.
"who are you" he asked.
she looked at him! her face was pale and eyes were swollen.
"I am her sister" she managed to say that.

stay tunned


CHAPTERS
PART 1PG.NO.3

PART 2 PG.NO.5

PART 3 PG.NO.8

PART 4PG NO.10

PART 5PG NO. 13

PART 6PG.NO.16
PART 7PG.NO.18

PART 8PG NO.20
PART 9PG NO 2
PART 10
PART 11PG NO 25

PART 12
PART13
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yipeee me first🥳
yeh kya thaa😲
so much suspenseee😲 who was that girl was she going to marry someone but some how things got reversed
UPDATE SOON😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dhi!!!!!!!! outstanding!!👏

You managed to hook us with the very first chapter. 👍🏼

please update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I am very much intrigued 😊
Plzzz continue soon 👏

And do pm me 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Yipeee me first🥳

yeh kya thaa😲
so much suspenseee😲 who was that girl was she going to marry someone but some how things got reversed
UPDATE SOON😳

yes always u r first😛!thank u for being always first...will update soon😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonatia

yea u finally updated..awww so beautifully wr8en !!


As ever it was so beautiful!! U took my heart!!


Congracts for the new story!
Eagerly waiting to know who the girl was and what she was talking 'bout!! And i want to know tmrw is the day for what. What so speciall and why the man was so so so excited and for what he was waiting for that made him to count the moments.. So many questions i have..such a short update..!! I wanted to read more..
and by the way in scene 2 that girl said"i am her sister" when the man asked who she was.who is that HER?the girl of 1'st scene? And the man does'nt know the girl of scene 2 but he knows that HER..u kept so many suspense and so many unanswered ques.
upate soon!!



thank u mou baby!! 😊 and what,s this..even i didnt think of so many questions😆..it will be revealed soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KURT15

Dhi!!!!!!!! outstanding!!👏

You managed to hook us with the very first chapter. 👍🏼

please update soon😃

thank u Gee😊 with all ur blessings 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Greys_Anatomy

I am very much intrigued 😊

Plzzz continue soon 👏

And do pm me 😃


thank u dear..will update soon..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds interesting 👍🏼
update soon 😃

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