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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31


god! so many questions..pls wait na dear..i will untie all the knots gradually slowly..u became byomekesh bhakshi😆
thank u dear for sweet comments..unres soon!



hehehe I dnt know how that vani's dhaka came to my mind I ws jst trying to use some indirect praise😆
yep I remember my brain stores pretty everything😎 I love detective nd spy thrillers😳
unresed for updt 2😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 5

Days were rolling! Sun was rising and setting. Tejaswini could not feel more than that. She was alive that's all. That too came to her awareness by her hunger and thirst. She slept when sleep completely compress her eyelids. She was living in a different house with some other people ,that was in her memory often but she did not feel indifferent in that house. She had the liberty to do whatever she wants. His father was so kind and polite. Tanu was talkative but cute little girl. She could not come to a conclusion about surya and she was not much bothered about it. She saw him hardly in the house. Some times during breakfast, sometimes at the garden, one time very close to her in the portico, one time just behind her when drinking water near the fridge. She was jerked but she just stretched his hands to get the bottle.

She was not interested to speak to anyone including vikram. He was totally busy in his work.

one day she got a sudden feeling of sitting useless in a house. What's the use? He said that he suspects her sister's death and that's why she was brought here. Still she could not cross the irreversible loss but regained all her conscience slowly.

Surya prakash was buttoning his uniform. The door was knocked.

"yes! Get in" he said.

Tejaswini entered slowly. He stared at her.

She seemed to be hesitated. She opened her mouth to frame sentences but she was failing in it repeatedly.

"listen! I don't have full day to look at your face. " he said

Tejaswini was annoyed

"K! have you found anything worthy about my sister's death? " she asked

He furrowed his brows.

"no! I have stopped all the investigations for some time. "

She was perplexed.

"but why?"

" well! It's a tactics in our department . we have give some time for the culprit to relax and leave him to do his routine. He will come out soon with a relaxation..then we will start our investigation." He said

"Strange theory! I haven't heard about this before.i have seen police chasing the criminals before they got escaped..but giving them enough time to escape is great idea Mr. surya" she said sarcastically.

His face became stiff.

"that's for the case we know who the culprit was. Here we have to trace the culprit who absconds suddenly. So we need time ."

" oh ! you may have whole life time to investigate the case but I don't"

He was annoyed"what's your problem now?"

" I need to know who killed my sister or at least to know the reason why I am staying here"

" nothing could be said now" he said in an irritated tone and left the room.

Tejaswini glared at him but he stormed out.

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After so many hesitations and confusions Tejaswini decided to visit her house again. she could get some clues there.

Seeing her walking out of the house papaji stopped her.

"where are you going beti"?

" To my house! " she said in short

" but did you ask Surya?"

He was worried and frieghtened.

" Not necessary. I am not a criminal and he has not arrested me here. No one could stop me going to my home" she walked out.

After reaching the main roads she realized he had brought nothing in her hands.

She looked around and she inquired someone and found out the area she was standing. She started walking to her house. She knew that it was a bad idea but she could not simply sit in that house.

She was drenched in sweat. Finally she reached her house after a hectic walk. She jumped on the stairs and rushed to her house. She was completely fatigued.

" oh damn it! " she banged on the door. She was disappointed highly to see the house was locked.

" how fool I am?? Why I did not even thought of this. This house must be under their surveillance.

She walked down and sat on the stairs. She was suffocating. She rested her face at her knees. She was jerked when a hand pressed her shoulder.

She looked up and relieved.

"Aunty! You" she said

The opposite house owner sheetal was very affectionate to the sisters. She had a special concern for them.

" Teju?? You?? Where are you now.. how did you come here?" she was going on questioning her.

" auty..pls give me some water" she said.

Tejaswini was saying all one by one by sipping the orange juice.

" what is this?? Why should you stay there? I am here..we all are here." Said sheetal.

" I also have that doubt but aunty whatever it is I feel little safe in that house" she said. Suddenly she was captured by that window. The window in her sister's room which was opened .

She stood up and stared at the window.

Sheetal said "it's your sister's room window. I saw she was hanging through this window" she whipped out the tears.

Now. She could see the room was vacant. She could see the bed as it is on that day. She could see the writing table after the bed..and... and..something stroke her brain. Something was missing in that table which she saw that day.

What was that..the pen stand..her little teddy.. she squeezed her brain.

The ganesh idol where the letter was kept.. the bouquet??? Yes! Where is the bouquet?? It was there.. she could not forget those words of surya on that day referring to that fresh bouquet.

Who took it.

" auty! Who came here except policemen?"

" no one Teju! Only police men came here that too for two days..then they locked the house and took the key. After that no one came here as far as I know"

" okay aunty! I have to go immediately. Please aunty give me some money for taxi"

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Surya prakash were leaning leisurely on his couch in his office. His place was surrounded by all the papers and documents taken from Dhamayanti's house. He was checking the mobile bills and rounded a number. He received a call. His face was changed dreadfully.

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Tejaswini was standing on the road for more than half an hour that she could not get a taxi. She was walking in a direction to get a taxi. The traffic was heavy and raining slightly. It was almost night. She started walking again. Suddenly she felt that someone was staring at her.she looked back and found no one. Again and again she felt the same feeling. She stopped walking and looked around. Now she found some shadowy figure was following her. She has no guts to turn back.she increased her walking speed and felt that person also increased the speed. She even increased and it was a run almost. On one stage she lost all her courage and started running blindly. Suddenly a hand pulled her into a street which was deserted.

She freaked out in fear. A heavy arms shut her mouth

" shushhh!!! It's me viky" said he.

She sighed deeply.

" youuu..vikyy"

"shush"

They both peeped out and found no one there. Both were relieved.

" viky! What are you doing here"?

"hmm! I have to ask that? What were you doing here? How do you came here?"

" I ..I came to my house and I haven't get a taxi..so I was walking"

"you came alone.?? What was that super cop was doing? "

" my fault I came without his knowledge..k! how do you get me?"

" nothing interesting! I was sitting in a dhabha and saw you were running blindly.. and saw a man was chasing you. So I came in a different route"

"did you saw the man" she asked with extreme eagerness.

"Yes! But not the face"

" ok where are you going now" he asked

" no idea viky" she said.

" come to my house. I have a lot to speak to you.. come Teju" he clutched her hands.She simply followed him. They took an auto. She was simply staring nowhere. Cool wind brushed her hairs. Vikram seemed to be little satisfied.

"finally I got some time to spend with my friend" he smiled.

Teju looked at him and smiled .

They got down at a junction and walked through the narrow streets which was extremely busy and nasty.

"Sorry Teju! Please bear this nasty streets for me" he said.

She simply clutched his arms and walked carefully behind him.

Finally they reached a house and took the stairs. He looked his house which was sunk in darkness. Both tejaswini and vikram was stunned to see a shadowy figure standing there. Both were panicked. She clasped his shoulders and hide behind him. Vikram swallowed the lump which struck his throat.

He cleared his throat.

" whoo...who is there?"

The man standing there ignited his cigarette lighter. Both tejaswini and Vikram were speechless to see Suryaprakash there.

Surya looked at them and inhaled his cigarette leisurely. He let out the smoke slowly and approached her. He clutched her arms and started walking down. Vikram was stunned and could not move. Tejaswini became dumb and just followed him mechanically without having no clues of what was happening.

( SORRY for this short episode.i posted this in a hurry.. so pls ignore the mistakes)


Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
RES 😛
UNRES

Yipee I am first. 😆

Amazing update Dhivii 🤗
Missing bouquet...So the thrill of finding new clues has been started
Now who was stalking Teju 😲
Lucky for Teju that she met Vicky b4 the stalker but Why do I not feel a good vibe regarding Vicky...something is not that simple with Vicky...I know my silly imagination 😆

And our superhero wow the scene u have described of Surya in front of Vicky's house... dark and dangerous...Did he give Teju 'dont-mess-with-me-ever' look 😆
Teju is about to get a lashing from Surya

Continue the next part soon

Edited by ...Hemangi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
res
news reporters r all barking that whole chennai and tamil nadu is under water! Howz u? Hope u r safe nd dry!

...
Unress
nyc updt
whts the mystery behind bouquet? Who is surya jst a cop jst clear my doubt is he somehow related to Dhami? I mean were they in love nd she got murdered or something so he is nt speaking up? Bouquet kaha gaya? Nd this Vicky I dnt get good vibes frm him at all is he smitten by Teju? My imaginations going insane! WTH is surya pulling nd dragging Teju... Whts problem betn him nd his dad urghhh so many questions!
Edited by -Fleurdelice- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Excellent update Dhi... Teju is beginning to function, getting out of her cocoon, thinking things through... All signs of a slow recovery... Surya is Mr. Cool as usual. And Vikram is just desperate to have some time with Teju! 😉 😆. Just one doubt, Teju was not able to get a taxi, but Vikram got an auto without difficulty. Why Teju did not try for an auto before?

Waiting for the next update... 😳 👏 👏
Edited by KURT15 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
You are Living in Chennai.😊
Please Take Care of You and Your Family,Dear.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
Edited by PriyaCherry - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi

RES 😛
UNRES

Yipee I am first. 😆

Amazing update Dhivii 🤗
Missing bouquet...So the thrill of finding new clues has been started
Now who was stalking Teju 😲
Lucky for Teju that she met Vicky b4 the stalker but Why do I not feel a good vibe regarding Vicky...something is not that simple with Vicky...I know my silly imagination 😆

And our superhero wow the scene u have described of Surya in front of Vicky's house... dark and dangerous...Did he give Teju 'dont-mess-with-me-ever' look 😆
Teju is about to get a lashing from Surya

Continue the next part soon

oh poor viky!😆 what that boy done to u..😆
and yes that surya's scene came up 😛instantly

nahhh1 teju won't receive lashings and all..but who knows she may get something else😉

thank y sweetuu😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

res
news reporters r all barking that whole chennai and tamil nadu is under water! Howz u? Hope u r safe nd dry!

...
Unress
nyc updt
whts the mystery behind bouquet? Who is surya jst a cop jst clear my doubt is he somehow related to Dhami? I mean were they in love nd she got murdered or something so he is nt speaking up? Bouquet kaha gaya? Nd this Vicky I dnt get good vibes frm him at all is he smitten by Teju? My imaginations going insane! WTH is surya pulling nd dragging Teju... Whts problem betn him nd his dad urghhh so many questions!

oh! who is here..sansi 😲 from ur siggy i thought u will be inactive and i was like but now😃
i am fine dear..i am not in chennai. only chennai is suffering more.
and to the story..surya is a cop..y what made u to think so
oh my byomakesh bakshiii😆😈
poor viky😭 y ppl not believe him

shanth rakho meri priya choti behan😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KURT15

Excellent update Dhi... Teju is beginning to function, getting out of her cocoon, thinking things through... All signs of a slow recovery... Surya is Mr. Cool as usual. And Vikram is just desperate to have some time with Teju! 😉 😆. Just one doubt, Teju was not able to get a taxi, but Vikram got an auto without difficulty. Why Teju did not try for an auto before?

Waiting for the next update... 😳 👏 👏


wht a doubt gee😲 😆 I failed to explain that sorry!! she did not tried for an auto yes..and she came running for some distance in some direction na. so lets make it simple..and sometimes autos r taxis guys could get it easily..i have personal experience😛
and if u read it again u can feel another big thing which was abrupt here..something illogical..i missed that in my hurry thought of editing it..but later left it that it may helpthe story. i wont say that now..but u can find it easily
thank u dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

It was So Interesting Part.😊
The Whole Part was so Nicely explained.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
You are Living in Chennai.😊
Please Take Care of You and Your Family,Dear.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.


thank u priya! ya! we all r fine and safe😊

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