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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaCherry

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

I'm so sorry for late comment,My health is so bad,Please forgive me..😭
It was Awesome Part.😊
Surya and Teju Conversation was so Nice.😊
The story was getting was So Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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u have been saying this long time..y what happened to ur health dear?? get well soon.. and thank u for ur sweet comments😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 8


Tejaswini was staring out at the streets and shops which were moving backwards. The jerks and shakes of the auto rickshaw didn't distract her. The gust of winds dashed her face and threw her hairs irregularly. Vikram turned to her often and tried to speak something but he shut his mouth not willing to erase a beautiful painting. He gazed her silently but his mind was pondering seriously for some words which would grab her attention. After so many days he got this golden moment with his Teju. Though, he was little irritated by today's incidents and her over concern for surya, he was not ready to lose this opportunity which had become very rare.

"Teju! Today is the an unexpected day for me" he said.

Tejaswini glanced him once.

"ya! For me too" she replied.

"really???" he exclaimed

"what makes you so happy now"?

He interlaced her fingers with his and said

"this moment! The time with the most dearest person in my life"

She looked at him sharply.

"do you love me Viky?" her eyes pierced him. He did not expect such a direct attack from her. Anyhow he is going to propose one day. But now suddenly he lost his strength before her direct sharp eyes. He averted his eyes.

" come on viky. Look at me. Do you love me?"

"hmm..y..a..a" he dragged his answer without having power to face the reaction.

" tell me the truth viky. Why did you chase me yesterday?"

He was shocked. he took his handkerchief and whipped out his sweat.his hands were shaking.

"who chased you? Are you mad? Who said you such nonsense? I know. That surya right? Don't believe him Teju. He is dangerous .I warn you"

"shut up viky! Your eyes were shouting the truth. Now don't try to lie anymore. And aren't you ashamed to ill speak some other man to defend yourself?"

"no teju! Please listen"

"what?? What is there to listen? I thought you were my friend. But you had some other intentions behind our friendship and some other expectations in your concerns . How selfish you are? You are not honest in your love. you cheated me. You fooled me. " tears welled up her eyes.

"Teju please ! give me a chance to explain "

She smirked.

"It's going to be a justification not an explanation. Enough viky. Let's stop this drama! Bhaiya! Please stop the rickshaw" she said.

She got down from the vehicle. Vikram got down following her. He clutched her arms and stopped her.

"you broke my faith viky! Nothing could mend this. Leave my hand viky"

The next moment a bike approached the place and a macho man got down from the bike. He showed his I.D card . vikram's grip slackened when he got to know the man is a police constable.

"Madam! Sir has assigned me to arrange you a taxi when you get down the rickshaw in half way."

He turned to the road and gestured to a taxi driver. The taxi crossed the road and parked in front of her.

"which sir?" she asked

"DCP sir" replied the PC opening the door of the taxi.

A surprising smile twisted in her lips. She got into the taxi and thanked him.

"It's my duty madam.! I am supposed to follow you till you reach your home" he said obediently. He signaled the taxi driver to move. It took some second for vikram to grasp the happenings. He looked at Tejaswini with teary eyes. Tejaswini was impassive. He moved backwards and disappeared soon.

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Vikram got down from the vehicle in front of his house. He drew his purse .

"no sir! DCP sir had paid me already" said the driver.

Vikram frowned. His clenched his hands. He jumped the stairs, banged the doors and slumped in his bed.

He felt his whole body was seething. He felt a shadowy figure entering his house.

"who is that?" he shouted.

"hey its me! Are you sick man? Why didn't you attend the class today? we have to decide about our next program ya"

Vishwa! My friend. Screamed his mind.

He dragged his friend and hugged him tightly. His body shuddered in intolerable agony. Vishwa was shocked.

" hey are you crying man? What happened?"

"over! Everything is over" he slapped his own head. "Tejaswini threw me away as a garbage in the roadside"

"what? Did you propose to her? When?" vikram held his head and sat down in vexation.

"I'll tell you. But one thing is very sure. I am not going to lose her at any cost" the firmness in his voice seemed to be indifferent to vishwa. Vikram took a whiskey bottle from his fridge and gulped it. Vishwa was scared. He pressed his friend's shoulders.

" hey calm down man! Tell me what happened. I could not believe that our tejaswini could do that to you. After all she is a trained puppy who follows you wherever you go and obeys you whatever you say"

Vikram snorted.

"that period has lapsed. Now she got a new companion smarter than me" he said.

who"

"Suryapraksh I.P.S"

Vishwa was stunned .. then slowly he said.

"he may be smarter but show you are wiser than him" he clasped his friend's shoulders.

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Surya was engrossed in his thoughts. He felt all golden knot was concealed in those coffee mugs. Who would be the person??

"sir" young inspector Ashish saluted him.

" sir! Have a look at this. This is a complaint filed by DR. keshav Narayan against Dhamayanti."

"what???"a heavy voltage of electricity passed in his brain. Every parts of his body has woken up completely. It was not an F.I.R but a hand written complaint written in a paper signed by Dr. keshav Narayan.

It has been stated that dhamayanti banker at The Central bank tried to deceit his son and loot their properties through his son.

"whaaat"

She played a brilliant game of love with my son and my son too had fallen in that plot"

"what nonsense"

He read that complaint thoroughly.

"I request the concerned officers to take necessary actions against this lady" surya closed the file. He scrubbed his forehead. He frowned.

"where you got this"

"not in our jurisdiction sir!. You were saying about Dr. keshav narayan in this case. So I gathered all in and out about him"

"hmm! Why didn't they file F.I.R"

"they said the concerned parties went peacefully.! But sir, how do you know that Dr.kesav had involved in this case.?"

Dhamayanti in green saree flashed in his mind.

"I had some problems with Getwell hospitals . just now the problem came to an end." Said Dhamayanti.

"why! What happened ?" inquired surya.

She sighed.

"it's a big story. The problem came to an end but not solved"

"Tell me Dhamayanti! I could help you"

She smiled at him.

" some other time Surya! Now I need a change. " she smiled.

To his knowledge that smile seemed to be honest and innocent. Is this complaint true??

Dhamayanti!!! Cried his mind.

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Edited by dhivyakrish31 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yipeee... I knew I will get an update, RES
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Does Teju love Vicky too?? Don't tell me u r pairing her with Surya😲
nyways The Vishwa nd vikram r together planning some VishwaVikrama😆 wondering how will that help this case!
So Dhami ws two timer??😲 Nah I dnt trust, she is a innocent soul yaar! Maybe this helps the case!

Update ended?😭
aur dikhao aur dikhao😳
Edited by -Fleurdelice- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-

Yipeee... I knew I will get an update, RES
...

Does Teju love Vicky too?? Don't tell me u r pairing her with Surya😲
nyways The Vishwa nd vikram r together planning some VishwaVikrama😆 wondering how will that help this case!
So Dhami ws two timer??😲 Nah I dnt trust, she is a innocent soul yaar! Maybe this helps the case!

Update ended?😭
aur dikhao aur dikhao😳

😲What girl???what made u to ask these questions..how u r saying that teju loved vikram..and what again shock..teju is the main heroine.. And surya the main hero..so as per the rule they have to be paired ..lol..y so much of shocking..u won't get shocked for the real twists.but getting shocked for unexpected things..😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update!! The story is full of twists and turns and you are keeping us all on seat's edge!! Please update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

😲What girl???what made u to ask these questions..how u r saying that teju loved vikram..and what again shock..teju is the main heroine.. And surya the main hero..so as per the rule they have to be paired ..lol..y so much of shocking..u won't get shocked for the real twists.but getting shocked for unexpected things..😆



I thot Surya will remain single
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Fleurdelice-



I thot Surya will remain single

Y shud he ???? 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update Dhivya.
Loved Teju & Vikram's convo.
The way she treated him, I like that.
So, Surya sent a constable to follow & protect Teju.
He is really a police Officer, he took responsibility of Teju & he is fulfilling it.
Till now, U only portraying whats going on in Surya's mind mean his thinking , but I want to know whats he is feeling??
I am super irritated with Vikram, He is claiming that he loves Teju.
& his thought about Teju so low.
But whats this in the last part???
I am not believing it.
I am thinking what Surya is thinking, Why only GD against Dami, not FIR??
So many questions.
Great going.Loved the part
Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

u have been saying this long time..y what happened to ur health dear?? get well soon.. and thank u for ur sweet comments😊


I am Fine,Dear.😊
It was Just Cold because of Weather.
Thank so Much for Your Caring.😊
Thats so Sweet of You.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Awesome Part.😊
Teju Part was so Interesting.😊
Vishwa and Dharma are Planning something,it was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.

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