FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID:Rajveer Naina ff for LRL lovers.lu:25-6 P 108 - Page 6

Sooo.here come the much awaited breaking the suspence...revealing the mystery..

Part 13:
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All sat in a circle around raj to know the biggest mystery of their life..raj starts

As you guyz know i was posted in kma for a secret mission to protect the triggers..though i was a undercover agent but the enemy somehow knew thiz and send Dr.Ritu mishra to mannupulate me and to get the triggers..but as soon as we knew she was the same persone behind Navin's death(raj looks a little towrds Nainas eyes.all the past pains reflect through her eyes and he looked away)we became extra consious but what we were unawar of was that behind all these was a huge polliticalcurroption..Lala Gahlot was also a part of all this.as i was exposed to them so they were going to repeat the history but this time we were 2steps ahead of what they could think.so we planed to fake my death.(looking at their eyez he sences a question and answes)we means me, coln shakti chaubey and some extremely reliable secrt officrs..so when all the plans were ready suddenly u giys came and i had to change a few part..then u all knw wht happned..the jeep met an accidnt and sliped from the bridge and the jeep caought fire.but what u didnt know was that (looking at everyones lightened up eyes he said) yes..i was survived.but as i said it was not exactly our plan so during the jump i got injured..(all were scared especialy Naina) but lucky enough that chaubey reached there before the search team arrived..but as i had severe head injury i got admitted in a hospital..i was unconcious for 2wks and when the comatose stage ends i had dimensia(certain memmory loss)..doc said due to severe haid injury some part of my brain were damaged and it may be reversable..so then coln shakti and chaubey helped me regain my memory as much they could..and with the passed time all my past was again clear to me..but when i was again back to normal till then u guyz had already finished my unfinished mission..i was so proud of you guyz.i was about to come to you but then we get another information...that..Lala was a small head of this conspiracy.but the main root or i would say roots were yet to be unrooted..so inspite of my heartily wish i couldnt contact with u(looking at Naina helplessly and then looking at everyone)guyz..because..for me..my country is my most priority duty..Navin had sacrificed his life to make my country safe..how could i not value his sacrifies(looking at naina)...so..i couldnt witnss ur graduations by myself.though choubey brought every possible single pic of u(looking at naina again and then to the rest)guyz..then we started our next mission and started gathering all the possible infos..in these process we wanted to utilize the maximum reliable officers and thats why i came in contact with alekh and abhi..(he look at them and continued)they were equally shocked as you guyz are now..but hearing the truth they all umderstood my situations and now we r in a secret team..you guys must be thinking that what is the meaning of me to tell you all this after such delay..because i have mannaged coln Shakti to give permission to add you guyz in this mission.as you are my most reliable persons...

Before raj could say more puja said' y are you calling us this late When we were in the same network from the biggning?'

Raj got the ques.and when he looked at naina her eyes were so angry on him for not letting her in before.eyes asked'was i nt that much reliable to u?'

Raj senced the situation and answed in a light mode that 'are hum to sirf field ready kar rhe the.aur alekh aur abhi ko pahle iss liye involv kiye kyunki un dono ke pass better contacts aur infos tha(then looking at naina againg whos eyes were now questioning'achha?') As per coln. Shakti...'he tried to protect him fron Nainas DEADLY GUSSA...

ALi said ' sir iss mission ka matlab to samajh gye par abhi hume karna kya hoga?'

Raj'are ali itna jaldi kyaa h..aj itna bara function gya to tum log thak gye honge...aj reat kar lo..kal subha baat karenge iske bareme...'

All agreed...and leave the hall except Naina..

Raj looked at her..anyone can tell she was upset with what he has done.how could he not involve her in the mission before when her friend and her senior from the same regiment was involved in all these...mostly how could he not inform her about his presence..in the past few years when she was living like a dead person and the only reason was him.how could he not inform her about his well being..
Raj sence all the ques and said' dekho naina..main tumhe bahut pahle bata dena chahta tha..par tum tab aise state me chale gye the ki agar tumhe inform karte to tum aisa kuch kar baithte jisse is mission aur meri presence ta sayad unhe pata chal jata..isi liye..desh k khatir mujhe meri presonal life ko...'raj wanted to say somthing more but supress himself..
Naina looked at his eyes and said 'its ok. I understand What country means to you,what duties means to you,and i also will not come between the spirit of u and ur desh bhakti.from Naveen bhaiya i have learnt one thing that for a army officer country should be his top most priority and nothing can cime in between that.main bhi ek army officer hoon aur mere liye bhi meri watan sabse pahle ati h...even before my L...'and she kept silent.both knew their feeling for each other but it wil tak a little time to accept it before each other...

And then they bid good bye and went to respective room.
But they were unawar of one thing that someone was over hearing their conversation...and said to himself 'nehi foolan tujhe yea hudda itni asanise us capt ki hone nhi dega...tujhe pane k liye main kuch bhi karunga..khuch bhi...'and a wicky smile came on his face..

Ok.to thats al for today.plz r8 howz it.and if it seems too filmy to digest the Dimensia part let me tel you it actually happns in real life too.being a medical person i m saying this..

Do commnt plz...waitinggg

wow nice part
i love it
is huda ko ab kabbab me haddi bana jarure h kya
ir raj bechara kitna suffer kiya usne
naina ka that look acha ? was fabulous
it make me laugh
now they have new mission




thanks for pm
love naina

Originally posted by: meenuraj97

wow nice part
i love it
is huda ko ab kabbab me haddi bana jarure h kya
ir raj bechara kitna suffer kiya usne
naina ka that look acha ? was fabulous
it make me laugh
now they have new mission




thanks for pm
love naina

Are contrast prson kitna jaroori h story m abhi pata chala 😆 ...huda will add the spices.. aur hopfully eventually will make rn more strong couple...lts c wht hapns nxt..
Thnks for encourgng...
Lov gg

Hey gargy!

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

Hey gargy!

Cool update!😃

Coming up with Raj's back story must have been challenging yaar!

So great going!👏

Do you think we can have a flash backs of Raj remembering bits and pieces...? In Parts you know...

Him thinking about how he started regaining his lost memories... that would be cool.

And I liked how pissed off Naina was...😆

it sounded like 'Do you doubt my capability that you didn't tell me first?'

Like she was challenging him. lol

After all she is not an innocent cadet now, but a seasoned soldier.

You know you should put in more of that.😉

He had to do what he had to do. It was the right thing to do. She accepts it, but she does not have to like it... after all she was so badly affected by his death.

No one will blame you if you show her being cold. She understands. but somewhere deep in her heart she probably feels betrayed and is hurt.

Thoda gussa dikhana toh banta hai naa...

You know I miss the old Cadet Naina Ah Singh who would barge into Captain Rajveer's cabin And Challenge him fearlessly...

That fire in her was so awesome!!!!Super dooper cool!

I am really looking forward to what khurafati plan Huda will come up with, now that things are very delicate between Raj and Naina.

Drama kay bagair kya mazha hai yaar?😉

I would say you are doing a great job with Spicing things up!!!😉 It is something much needed in a good story. Makes things interesting no?😆

One request yaar... Whatever you do please don't let Huda turn into a Deshdrohi'...

Bohot hi kamina hota hai most times, but he was never a Deshdrohi.

I really like what you have going on with Huda right now. Like really!👍🏼

just don't let hime turn into a traitor... please yaar.

Show us some of Huda's legendary Hudagiri! The smartass cool dude who thought he was the king of the world has also changed and probably gotten smarter after 3 years. Plus there was never a doubt that he was extremely clever and cunning. Its going to be very interesting to see what this new Captain Huda does to get his darling Phoolan.😉😈

I am very excited to see what this new mission is going to be. Make it very interesting!😉This Mission will give you lots of chances to add in twists and turns. It will give you a lot of scope to create more drama, suspense, thrill, action.(romance too) probably add new characters if you like... Very excited to see how you start with this super secret mission!😉

I really like how you described their reactions, their expressions and thoughts. Minute details can paint the picture in front of the eyes of the reader. The update was quite good in terms of the pace, Wasn't rushed at all. The content was good too, good job with Making it Detailed and Descriptive! Very Very Good!👏

The updates seem to be getting better and better!👍🏼

Also it was nice getting a long update!!!😃

Waiting for your next update.

Cheers.

R

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Wo wo wo...so many things togthr 😆 .. and u r becomnng the path findr of my story..will surly try to do my bst to potrt the charctr..and the past.to mak a intrstng presnt...
Thnks for benng such a readr..
Lov gg

Achha do u guyz hav a recptn party next day of the weddng??wnt to know the rasam...

Hahahaha...

Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

Hahahaha...

Well the size of your update increased and so did the size of my comment... lol😆

I warned you that I get carried away, didn't I?😉

You are very sweet gargy, and I'm happy if I am of any help to you.😊

But please feel free to PM me and tell me to 'shut the hell up' if I start getting on your nerves okay?😉

lol

And in answer to your query most Indian Weddings despite of whatever state, language, religion, caste they belong to have receptions. Most Hindu Weddings have similar rituals, they may differ slightly from region to region, but basics same hotay hai. Thats about wedding rituals. The reception on the other hand has become more of a thing that is expected everywhere, like an introduction of the bride and groom as a couple. So Reception toh hota hi hai shaadi kay baad.😊

So go on now... Update soon!😃

Ok ok 😆 ...but the updt may be a littl bit delayd as i hav came home and is little busy with some programm.so..plz cooprat 😭 😉

Originally posted by: gargy4u

Ok ok 😆 ...but the updt may be a littl bit delayd as i hav came home and is little busy with some programm.so..plz cooprat 😭 😉

So..after lng wait here it is..

Part 14:

Naina went to her room...puja was already ready fr sleep.seeing naina she huged her happily "dkha mere jara veer tere liye kaise wapas aa gya..sir ne to ekdm srk jaisa entry mari yaar.by god dil khush hoo gyi unhe dkhke..pahle to maine socha swapna dkh rhi hu..aur agar ywa swapna hua na...to bhagwan kre yea swapna kabhi tute naaa"
Then with a littl serious note"aur sabse jyada khush main tere liye hu naina..unke jane k baad tune khudke asspass jaisi diwar bana li thi...i m so so so happy fr u naina.aur aab jab veer aa hi gya h to iss baar jyada der mat laga dena.chat mangni de pat vihah..."
Naina was bit self thinking mode.she said mostly to herslf bt cler enough for puja to listen"haa pujaa..in kuch salon me main yea sikh gya huu k life ka koi bharosa nehi.so jab jo mile use jaldi gale laga lena chahiye.phir pata nhi life dusra mauka de k nhi..aur ab jo yea mauka mila h main use aise jane nehi dungi.."she hugged her back and both bid good bye .
Soon puja got asleep bt for naina it was hard to sleep.
First she couldnt sleep coz he was not with her n now when he is back still she cant sleep..so many questions.so many fustrations.so many complains...she continued to role left and right but cant find comfort.she stood up from bed and headed towards some where..
She peak through the room where raj and abhi was.first she though both were sleeping but raj opens his eyes with the knock of the door n gets surprise to find naina at the door..
Quickly he got up from bed and came outside of the door "cadet tu iss waqt yahan kyaa kar rhe hoo?"he looked tensed.
Naina smiles a little"sir abhi apki cadet capt ban chuki h."
Raj cuts his lips 'sorry.but tu iss waqt..abhi to hamari baat hui naa?'
"3saal ki baat 3min me?"naina said sweet agressivly..
"To apko kitni waqt chahiye capt naina aha singh?"raj asked jokngly
Determined Naina said"jab tak mujhe tasalli na ho.any problem(with her magical spark of eyes)?"
Bechara raj...though he too wanted to talk for the whole night to see her to listn to her but at the same time he was too tired.but now he has no options.raj just surgg his solder in acceptnc(the same way how he gave her permission to go to point 1857.remmbr gyuz)

So they went to the corridore.
"So tum bilkul bhi nhi badli na..same old aggration.jo abhi chahiye bus abhi chahiye"raj complains sweetly.
Bit serious"sir badal to main bahut gayi huu par purane log dkhke purani aadat apne aap aa gyi"naina replied.
"To cadeT i mean capt bataiye aap ko kya puchna h"raj asked intentionaly formally
"Sir itni raat ko main wow secret mission ki planning karne ayi hu"naina pretending serious
"R u serious naina?"perplexed raj asked
"I thought so..as u r calling me capt so it has to be official talk r8?"naina replied mockngly
Raj blussed and it was enough for then to bust into laugh but both controled as they didnt want to disturb others or u may say to be disturbed:).
"umm sir,ek sawal puchu?"naina
Raj nodded.
"Kya main abhi bhi apke best student hun?"naina wanted to ask much more but could ask this only.
"Ummm..lets say kya main abhi bhi tumhari best mentor hu?"raj remembred the past.
"No doubt yes,every time when ever i was in a problem wheather u was or wasnt here but u alwas helped me to get through the difficulties.u r my inspiration,my moral,my ethics,my...'naina stops.
Raj wanted to lighten the mood and said "then u know my ans"
"then how could u let me go through all that i went through.how"jolly naina becomes damn serious again and stops the tears heardly.
Raj look at her face and said gently"main ne bataya naa.jimmedari k liye main majbur tha.plz naina..mujhe samjho.i do care for u"
Now again ouur phoolan devi becomes mina kumari and complains with teary eyes"is it ur care?i forgot to smile to talk to live in ur absence and u r saying u cared for me when u were here knowing my situation and doing nothing?"naina hugged him and tears and tears.
Raj took her face in his arm and said "plz naina for god shake tum to mujhe yea blame maat do.jabse us accident k baad mujhe hosh aya all i could remember was someones hazy face with the loud scream of RAJVEEER SIR..then for next few dayz that was my only identity that i could remember.after a week when chaubey came to me i couldnt even recognise him.then he showed me some pics of me and handed over me some documents about my identity.but not the secret agent one as they were till not sure wheather i will be capable of taking al thoes in one go.any ways then i slowly slowly remembr some pasts..but still the image and scream was not clear to me.slowly slowly when chaubey n i became familier again then i asked him about the incident and only then he showed me ur group pic.n looking at ur face i felt some resemble and the perception became clear.then slowly slowly chaubey helped me in some stage to regain thoes days back to me.i remeberd all the happiest and some saddest dayz.i was so excited to meet u,guyz..but after i get my memory back they inform me about my old secret agent identity .and my real mission and goal was to be exicuted being hidden and before we could do someting there u were.knocking everyone down.must say u made me so proude that day.i know u have had done some real life battel even before that which incloulds 2times saving my life but that was the most dangrus.n u nailed it."rajs voice was even so proud of her.

Naina felt proud of herslf too as she was his proud.

"Once again i thought that was my moment to disclose bt as u know now we hav a more dengrous mission to complete and again i was forced to be in disguised"raj was looking soo helpless.

"And then again u made me proud when u became the best cadet. belive me naina i was always with u.after i talk to coln shakti i wanted to post u at KMA so that i can contact u for the mission purpose but u seemed to be determind that u have to go to field n not any field but to to most dengrous postings.i tried my best to make u safe but u were acting insane.so i had to send abhi there as ur senior to look after u as it was not possible for me to be there by myslf..but that also seemed to not work out.even when he was tryng to give u light duties u were becomming stubborn n acting like a ZIDDI..so i had to make a plan to reveal me to you as soon as possibl.so after hearing alekhs marriage i made the plan.do u still think i m selfies.i dont care about u?"

"sir u may think me as a ziddi stupid childish leken main yea sab sunke bhi aap ko maaf nehi karungi. Aap mere liye zindegi jene ki wajah the(looking at raj) aur aap ne itne din mujhe aap k iss sach se dur rakha duties k wajah se.kya mere taraf apki koi duty nehi thi,kya mujhe bikharne se bachana apki duty nehi thi,kya mujhe dukh se nikalke thora sa hasana apki duty nehi thi..aap ek duty k liye dushri duty ko bhul gyi?"naina fires the ques angrily with till tears n tears.

Raj felt a little bit bad for what he had done "dkho naina maine pahle bhi kahan he k mere liye mera desh sabse pahle ata h"

"Kya main apki desh bhakti k bich ati?apne mujhe bus itna jaana?main apko yea nhi kah rhi k aap kyun desh k liye duties nibha rahe h par yea kah rhi hu k mere liye jo aapka duty uska kyaa.agar aap mujhe yea sab bate yea mission pahle bol dete to kya main use secret nhi rakh pati?kya apko itna hi bharosa h apni naina aha singh pe?kya main apki secert khud tak rakhne ki bhi quabil nhi?"

Now raj waz feeling really embarassed."plz naina aisa maat bolo.u know tum mere liye wo ho jo mujhe..."

"Main kya hu sir...?"

Raj controles his emmotions and said"meri bst cadet my most trustworthy person.its just that the mission,coln shakti,,,naina plz samjho..plz.i didnt do it intentionally.."

Meanwhile someone came and said "kya intentionally?"

They looked back and saw ali here.they sat back with a littl distnce.ali just came there for water and watching them kinda argueing cant keep in out of this as we know how peace lover he is...u may say kabab me usul:-)

Ok gyz.after so long one update..still health not good so thats all i could think.happy ganesh chaturthi and advance biswakarma puja.

Lov
Gargy