FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID:Rajveer Naina ff for LRL lovers.lu:25-6 P 108 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
wow fantastic superb yr
naina ne toh raj ki bolti he band kar de uska gussa bilkul thik h apne jaghah
i love this side of naina aggressiveness se bhari hue naina



love naina
plz try to update next part soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Hey there 😊
Good to have you back.
Just saw you update, but haven't read it yet! Will comment once I do.😃
You please take care of your health and get well soon!👍🏼
Happy Ganesh Chaturthi to you too!
Cheers
R.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Hey gargy!

You last line made me laugh so hard! "Kabbab mein usool..." LMAO 😆

Super cool update yaar!!! Just awesome!
The way Naina confronts Rajveer!
That was the Naina I was waiting to see... The Naina who challenges anyone who comes in the way of her goal ! The fearless Naina full of spark! 😃
But you even showed a little bit of vulnerability in her! That was awesome! You did not over do it and turn her into one of those typical heroines that sit and cry all the time! You stuck to her character perfectly! The strong willed Naina who is vulnerable only at times, but knows how to pick herself up and move forward with determination! 😊
Awesome girl! Great job!!
I loved their talk! And you have justified 'why Naina is feeling what she is feeling' ! She gives it to him straight! I'm glad he felt guilty and tried to explain too... He was not wrong... But she isn't wrong either.
love this 'Jhasi ki Rani' wala roop of Naina!
Hope she doesn't forgive him that easy...😉 JUST for the heck of seeing her all stubborn and challenging!😆
Keep it awesome!👍🏼
and I hope your health is better now? Take care.😊
Cheers
R.
Edited by passiflora4eva - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: meenuraj97

wow fantastic superb yr
naina ne toh raj ki bolti he band kar de uska gussa bilkul thik h apne jaghah
i love this side of naina aggressiveness se bhari hue naina



love naina
plz try to update next part soon




Thanq for ur valuable reply dear..will updat soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: passiflora4eva

Hey gargy!

You last line made me laugh so hard! "Kabbab mein usool..." LMAO [
LOL

Super cool update yaar!!! Just awesome!
The way Naina confronts Rajveer!
That was the Naina I was waiting to see... The Naina who challenges anyone who comes in the way of her goal ! The fearless Naina full of spark! 😃
But you even showed a little bit of vulnerability in her! That was awesome! You did not over do it and turn her into one of those typical heroines that sit and cry all the time! You stuck to her character perfectly! The strong willed Naina who is vulnerable only at times, but knows how to pick herself up and move forward with determination! 😊
Awesome girl! Great job!!
I loved their talk! And you have justified 'why Naina is feeling what she is feeling' ! She gives it to him straight! I'm glad he felt guilty and tried to explain too... He was not wrong... But she isn't wrong either.
love this 'Jhasi ki Rani' wala roop of Naina!
Hope she






😆



And once again ur supportive msgs are here.. thanks..will try my bst to do justic with the charctr..
Edited by gargy4u - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Before i start i want to tell something.for me rn is like heaven made couple.my al time most favrt couple.till now i feel the same magic when i watch them togthr.so intence so passionate so sparking chemistry...i love them as raj naina.they r my medicn to cure my off mood.again i saw the red saree scene and their chemstry was revlng with each dialg n expression.cant stop myslf from skipping a beat.for me they r forevr n eternl coupl..so when the story ended tht mid way i sarched so many stories.some were really grt..but as many years hav passed so stories hav becm limittd too.so i started writing my own as i belive there are meny like me who still miss the jodi and the grtest show.so this it just an attemp to entrtain ppl like me who are mad for raj naina..whos heart still skips a beat watching them in the same frame.who always pray to get back the show LRL with the happy ending this time.but i guess some madness remains unstoppble when they r guessed..so some thirst r better to leave unquenched.if that wuld b like regulr lov story that may nt intrst us the same r8...anyways i m saying al ths bcz i felt nostalgic watching them..no wrds to dscribe their emmotns to each othr.both the actr had printed the charctrz more than prfctly.wht say? Do u guyz agree?

And its a grt respnsblty to potrt the charctr that too by a not at al writer lik me.still...i m just trynng to do justc to my dream jodi...

Part 15:

Watching ali there both became consious.
Naina tried to justify" are ali tu kab aya? Umm.wo actualy nind nhi aa rhi thi so yahan aagyi to dkha sir yahin pe the(saynng this naina lookd at raj as both knows the truth:) ).tujhe bhi nind nhi aa rhi?"
"Are nhi nhi..hum to pani lene aye the.ap baate kijiye hum chalte h.goodn8"and ali went inside disturbing the intense atmosphere.
"Sir r u flnng slpy?" Naina almost forgt to ask raj wheather he wanted to talk or not and forced him to come with her for clearifiction.but not she regain a littl bit sence of mannarism.
"Thnk god Naina tumhe at least mera itna to khayal aya..kabse bus mujhe syuna hi rahe ho.good to see u at least care for my sleep" raj cracked a light joke

But naina was not in the mood"kyun karn aapki care?main kitni raat se nhi soyi yea parwah thi aapko?"

Raj got the point.he knows his justifications will nt be good enough to clam her down.sacrifice of one nights sleep will ve nothing in compared to what naina has gone through this past years.he couldnt say anything to protect himself.just stares at naina with guilt eyez.

Somehow a little mercy came from the heart of the soft naina who cant see rajveer in pain and sge finally said"ok i m also feeling very sleep so u can go.but dont think that this conversation is over.we wl contnu tomrw.now...goodn8"and naina headed towrds her room showing as if she is doing a great favour to allow him to sleep that n8..
Watching her go he said to himslf"Uff yea ladki bhi na..khud bhi nhi janti ki yea kitna soft hai..pagal..i know naina tumhe pura haq hai mujhe sunane ka.i m ready to accept any punishment for whatevr i hav done to u.i promise you very soon i wil make u the happiest person.i cant see u in pain my love..."and headed towrds his room .and soon both felt asleep..


And its a new day.after so many years today naina opens her eyes with a hope.a hope to live again to love again to be loved again..now she can feel her reason for existance AGAIN. Said in her mind"toh mr. sikhawat be ready to pay before u get me"and saw puja ws not by her side."are yea itni jaldi kahan gya?"and turn to see the time"ohh god..how can i sleep so long.8.30baj gya..."and hurried up to get ready.

She wore a creame colour salwar with light jwlry and make up.tody she took a little bit extra time to get ready cauz now she has someone to show to.

When she reached the drawing room she found everyone including the new weds.
"phoolan tu pahle bata deti k upar saj dhaj rhi h to main hi upar aa jata"hodagiri startd."mummiji ki kasam aj ki suruwad itna accha hua to din bhi bahut acha hi jayega kya bolti h phoolan?"

Naina get irritated woth his unwanted attention.
She bid goodmrnng to everyone and then spcly to raj.n he nods.

Here raj was lost in her simplicity.she was lookig as fresh as a mornng dew,osh ki boond.

She found yudi ws also there and by looking at his expression she knows he has been repeate telecasted everythng.

"Naina chai piyegi?aj rajveer sir ne specialy chai banaye hai."puja said intntionly

"Ohh realy..but i want to hav cofee now.sir ek cup cofee milegi?plz"naina asked actng innocnt

now what can poor raj do.he made the plan to buttr her..so he hav to do wht she wants.."yaa sure.."and went to kitchn for makng cofee..naina too folws him there..

"Kyaa baat hai.subha subha uth bhi gye aur sabke liye chai bhi bana di.aur mere kahne pe coffe bhi...impresive..kise buttering kar rhe h?" Naina asked teasngly

"Abhi kyaa kre.tum raat ko jo itna sunaya mere liye neend nhi hota tha to socha subha yea na kahdo k chai bhi nhi pite the mere liye iss liye phle hi bana diyaa. "Raj giv it back to her.

"Ohh to apko wo baat itni chuvi ki pahle se hi precaution .impressv."naina replid cassualy

"Tohh madam kitna chammach sugar lena pasand krengi?"raj asked lik a jooru ka gulam.

"umm 2spoon of sugger n milk.thnk u"...

"And here u go."raj handed over the cup n their hand touched a little and a small eye lock.breaking the silnc raj asked"sooo howz it?"he was lik waiting for result.

"Accha hi hoga.i hav already tasted earlier.ab yea baat alag hai k aap accidnt k bad cofee banana bhol gye hai"this girl cant stop teasnng him.she takes a sip n "see i told u.u hav got a pass mark for this"

"Only pass?which division?"raj was also vehaving childing.what to do.now he doesnt want to hurt her anymore.pampering her is the best policy to make her happy..so he was doing exactly so.

"Umm.ok i m givving u a grace for 1st dvisn"naina said showing ful atti.

"Is it.thanq..."raj was about to say something more and someone came at the kitchen for ...yup...water..it was pooja.

so guyz.thats all for tody..do r8 about the updt.is it ok to presnt them as a littl bit not so serious?do let me know.and this time i want to know ur point of view about raj naina.wht u feel for the coupl..do do do r8.

with lov,
Gargy




Edited by gargy4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nive part
naina toh raj ki class he lagane me lagi h sahi h boss raj ne bohat rulaya h usse ab badla lene ki bare naina ki
kitna att. naina show kar rahi h raj ko
or raj how sweet of him sare nakhre utha raha h wo naina ke
i love u raj fir this u r the best

but yr bohat he chota part h
mjhe pta h ur health is not gud so plz get well soon dear
n yes we all love raj naina or hum humesha unko apne ff me saath laate rahe gay




love
naina
Edited by meenuraj97 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenuraj97

nive part
naina toh raj ki class he lagane me lagi h sahi h boss raj ne bohat rulaya h usse ab badla lene ki bare naina ki
kitna att. naina show kar rahi h raj ko
or raj how sweet of him sare nakhre utha raha h wo naina ke
i love u raj fir this u r the best

but yr bohat he chota part h
mjhe pta h ur health is not gud so plz get well soon dear
n yes we all love raj naina or hum humesha unko apne ff me saath laate rahe gay




love
naina


SAHI PAKRE HAI 😆 😉 we wl unite them.n thnks for ur concrn.i hop i wl b fine soo n wl b rdy with longr updts.gn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok..so here comes part 16:

watching them together puja started playing ringtone i mean humming in low tone DO DIL MIL RGE HAI MAGAR CHUPKE CHUPKE...hearing this both became little embarrs.naina"to aj kya plan h puja ji?"wanted to distract the focus..

Puja became sad"kyaa plan.nothing.yea ali bhi na kitna boring hote ja raha h"

Meanwhile finding raj n naina missing for a while huda came there looking for them and hearing this he cant controle himslf and said"abe usool intresting tha kab.uske lif ke sabse interesting hadsa to tu h."and started jocking.

Yudi also came there and comment"seriously bro pata nhi iss non stop fm ko silent film kaise pasand aa gya.."

And all started laughing and making joke of her.puja said"oye pyaar k dushman tum kyaa jano pyaar kya hota h..wo to jisko jisse hona hota h ho hi jata h..abhi veer jara ko hi le lo(saying so she turns towrds Naina n raj and watching their wired expression she changed the topic) i mean ek tha india me aur dusra pakisthan.phir bhi pyaar hi tha jo donoko milaya...main to mere ranjhna se bahut kush hu.tum logoki tarha insencible to nhi h" puja said protecting herslf..

Ali also came there lookng fr them"are yahan pe tarif kiski ho rhi h?"surprizd to see puja is saying good for smone.

"Are bhai usool kya gf banaya h..bf ka itna sa izzat pe aanch bhi ise hazam nehi.."huda said teasnng him

Alo felt embarsd.."kya huda bhai aap bhi na. "

Pooja to everyone "to aaj ka kya pln h?"

"Abhi to bahar chalte h.bahar sab hamara intezar kar rhe honge.aap log itne waqt andr kyaa kar rhe the?"ali said

"Wow to Naina hi jane..sir itne tim se cofee bana rhe the yaaa..."pooja wanted to tease naina but knowing raj is still only her superior and cracking jokes will not be a grt idea so she stops.

Naina n raj both looked pale as someone has caught them red handed.huda didnt lik the comment.he cant effort to link her name apart from himslf.

"Oye punjaban isme naina kya kre..sir agar ek cup cofee banane me itna tim lagayenge.."huda tried to safe naina.stupid boy...

"Are wo cofee mil nhi rha tha.iss liye late ho gya."raj tried to explain.

"Ok guyzz can we go to the drawing room nw.baki k bate hum yahin kar lenge?"yudi asked littl irriteted by how one is blemmng other

All noded and headed towrd the main room.

Watching them comming together abhi said"are bhai itna tim andar kar kya rhe the aap log.kahin hum kuch miss to nhi kr gye?"saying so abhi gave a tricky smile to raj as if he knew what he was doing there.

"Haaa miss to aap kar hi gya chauhann sahab..humari haat ki cofee:)"raj said in a light mood

"Abb kya kre hume to aap ne chai hi pila diya.option to diya hi nhi:("abhi said making mock sad face

"Kyaa kre sir jo chahiye wo mangenge nhi to samne wale ko pata kaise chalega k aap kyaa chahte ho?"Naina said justifying herslf having cofee.

All laugh and chit chat contnues.all were shareing memries of their posting places,their next planning of lif and all.

Alekh and nilu were loking soo happy together.both were complimenting each other.nilu was in a red salwar and which ws making her so beautiful from other dayz was the sindoor.alelh was also looking much relaxed today.their life was going perfect.

Ali and puja said they are going to inform their parents soon.pooja knows her parents will first oppose the relation but eventualy will fall for the shake of her happiness.but ali has total doubt about his parents approval.so he is waiting his sisterz to get married off before thinking of his own.

Yudi said he has finnaly said to dr. Shalini she has said yes.but havnt informed his parents till now cauz they were already tenssed for nilus proposal.now he wil tel them about his choice and hopefully they will agree too.

Next its huda.."yaar meri lif to set ho gyi h bus foolan haan kar de to meri mummiji toh ready hi baithi h.."said in a light mood.all knew he is not joking but couldnt take him seriously also.

"Naina k itne bure din bhi nhi aye h k use tujhe choose karna pare.tu to bus swapne dekh. Meri naina k liye to koi veer hi wait kar kar rhi h"sayin this pooja lookd at naina who was giving her look like I WLL KILL U..

"Kuyn mujhme kyaa kharabi h..phoolan ko to main pata k hi rhunga..yeaa ek jaat ka w..."before huda can complete his sentence naina said"shut up yaar huda.tujhe aur koi kaam nhi h kyaa.jab dkho ladkiyon se flirt krta rhta h?"she was soo irritated to see how huda is trying on her when she has tell him thousand times that she doesnt think him lik that way.

Now the atmosphere was quite hot as phoolan was in angry young woman mood again.so in order to lighten the mood alekh asks raj"sir aapka kyaa plan h?matlab...aap puri jindegi desh ke liye hi de denge yaa phir...shadi?"

And all became curious to know the answer espcially Naina.it was like her question which alekh fired.

Raj looked at everyone and then his gaze fixed on Naina and replied"mere liye sabse pahle mera desh aur uske liye meri zimmedari ati h. Mera desh hi meri pahli biwi hai.kyaa aisa koi ladki milegi jo apna sautan rakhna pasand karegi.nhi r8...so..."

"Aur agar koi apke aur apke desh bhakti k bich na aye?"naina fired a 2nd ques without thinking anything

Raj smiled"tab to mujhe koi problem nehi honi chahiye.."

Both felt a little relief as they needed to discuss the matter sooner aur latter.good that it gets clear now.so...both are ready to fall in love n for a future.only time will now direct them to go on and on.

Huda didnt find the whole conversation good.already naina had sbowed her not interester attitude and now she is showing interest in raj too much."isse pahle k mamla haad k vahar chala jaye mujhe kuch karna hi parega."huda said to himslf.

Nilu said"soo guyz whats the plan for today?"

"Its ur day.u decide"naina said.

"Ok then i have a plan.lets go to the local temple now and we will hav our lunch outside and then we have to get ready for the reception party at n8 in BLUE moon restrent."nilu said the planning

"Grt..lets go..."pooja was excited to go outside.

This place is known to all as this is hardly 30mins away from KMA.the temple was 10mins from home so they all decided to go there by walk.

When they reach there the weather was so pleasent.it was 10 in the morning and as it was winter so the cold breeze was feeling so relaxing to them.the temple was situated on a small hill.so they had to climb some stairs to reach there.from the top it was such a senic beauty to look at the town with still some fogg.though they had been at the town several times but never went to that temple.as nilu was local so she knew about the temple..but reaching there all could only say it was beautiful.so clam and peaceful..only the prayer rings were ringing and the scent of some agarbatti was complementing the mood.


Ok guyz.is it long nf?commnt plz.
Lov gargy


Edited by gargy4u - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow wow wow
great part
aj tak ke sare part me se mera favorite part
puja u r too gud kya gaana select kiya h bilkul perfect h situation ke hisab se

puja pyaar ki bt kare or apne veer zara ko bech me na laye asa toh ho he nhi sakta
raj naina turn red in no how cute
puja is defending his ranjaha so well

raj ne kaha kon karegi usse shadi ek sautan ke hote hue
naina toh bilkul ready h apne sautan ke saath adjust hone ke liye
ab der mat karo raj jaldi se le aao naina ko apne ghar doli me


plz yr koi huda ko bhagao mjhe bohat irritate karta h yeh jab dekho phoolan phoolan karta rahta h


keep it up
update next part soon
thanks for pm


love
naina

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