FEW THINGS LEFT UNSAID:Rajveer Naina ff for LRL lovers.lu:25-6 P 108

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Please do continue

Would love to read more about Rajveer-Naina :)

Miss the old Lrl !

what an amazing show it was!

"yes raj its so beautiful nd no sorrow can touch us now.finally we r together and now noone can seprate us.not even death."
"ohh naina..basss.aur kuch maat bolo.bass iss pal ko jeena hai mujhe.sirf tumhe mahsus karna hai..sirf tumhe dkhna hai..aur.."
"aur?..."
"aur bahur sara..."
"bahut sara?..."

suddenly all things began to be distroted and all the site and quiteness began to disappr.naina is soo damn confused what is going on and y her raj is once again going away...
"capt. Naina Singh Major sir is calling you" an orderly said loudly and draw her back from her own dreamy world to this painful reality.
this isnt the 1st time when she had dreamd of him.infact now-a-dayz every single day she starts with him,willing to hear the unspoken words and finally unfulfiled desire makes her more and more strong to leave her earthy body.cause now she knows the only way to be with her love is by sacrificing her body and being in soul consious only.she can be in his arm only after death,she can hear the unsaid things only when she will be dead..but to commite suicide is not what her mentor taught her.so every day she give her best to accept the death and only then she can be with him.only then she can hear the unsaid words..

ok its all fr nw..plz do write hoz it.

PART 3:

about 6.30am
"capt. Naina singh reporting sir, u called me this early is there anything urgent?" all dreshed up Naina asked the major.

"at ease Naina.aren't u forgteing sumthing?" the major asked.
"what sir" perplexed naina asked.
"whats the date?" major
"its ummm.2nd nov.y sir?"
"and tomrrw?"
"3rd... ohhh no..i am...how can i...alekh will be soo..one sec..that mean u are also..."
"yes naina,he has also invited me..and ur leave is also granted yesterdy.though i had to manage the colonel as both of us applied for leave but as the border is not so much tensed this dayz so he had accepted our requests.and we should get going naina.its already too late.we have to catch the bus otherwise..."
"sir give me 20mins for packing.i will meet u at the bus stop.bye"and hurried naina ran quickly toward her tent.
the major smiled a little and said to himself "chaliye chauhan sahab.aab bass aur kuch din.phir..."

at sharp 700 hrs.
cap naina and major abhimanyu rai chauhan broded into the bus.they will first go to delhi.and if everything wil be ok they will reach ambala by 9pm.

at about 9.30pm when the bus reached ambala two persons were waiting for them too eagerly.

ok that all for now.so our plot is moving.can u guess who the person are..umm keep gusing.till then ...
do write..

longer updates would be a treat! 😃 how about a little more description and detail?

just a suggestion 😊

you have started nicely and would like to see how this story progresses! 👍🏼

when the bus reached ambala it was quite late and especialy as it was starting of the winter so the roads were so lonely and foggy that passengers inside tge bus were feeling like being traped in a solitire island..most of them were sleeping including abhi.but for naina it was like reliving thoes days,thoes days when she was in kma as a cadet,thoes dayz when her moto was to prove her brother Navin innocent,thoes dayz when she had her group who stands by her in all circmstances,and most of all thoes dayz when her mentor her guide her l...probably a tear was waiting at her corner of eye to drop.but she hold it back.she crossed the bridge where she last saw rajveer...lot more tears were waiting,she wanted to screm,to let the whole world know her pain, but she hold it back. only god knows from which state of mind she had gone through which made her this much strong.
With all the good and some too bad to describe memories her bus reached to its destination.
Abhi and Naina were the last two to leave the bus.but as soon as they do Two die heartedly waiting handsome welcome them by throwing themselves to abhi and naina..

"oye phulan tu kaisi hai..you are looking so tired.aise agar mummyji dekhle na to kabhi pasand nhi karenge yaar..oye tu fikar na kar ab hudda aagaya h na.is kaydi k sath sath soch rhi hu k main bhi chat mangni de pat vihah kar lu.kyaa bolti hai fulan.." hudda,capt amardeep hudda,now posted at a border of arunachal pradesh, seemd so happy to see his fulan aka naina.

"sala kabhi nhi sudhrega" alekh said in a low tone before giving a brotherhood hug to his naina.they became so emotional as both of them hold a special place to each others life."kaisi hai?"

"main to abhi tak zinda hoo.tera shadi dkhe bagair kahan jati?"naina said in a casual tone.

"hann,abhi kaidi ka dkhle.experince gain karle phoolan.phir.."

"shut up hooda.tu kabhi to serious ho ja.capt agar aisa hoga to juniors kya krega"angry naina said.

"are bhai hum bhi hai isi frame me,koi humse bhi to mile"abhi said in a fake angry way.

all of them meet and while coming home on car their chit chat continues with a little bit of hudagiri i mean flirting..

thatz all fr tody..
lov gargy