MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
awesomee update. i feel so bad for Nandu. i hope manik & mukti soon realise their mistake.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Awesome update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Thank u so much plzzz update next part asap plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
wow...again amazing update as always...thanks for the lovely update...u penned it so nicely dea...plss try to update regularly cant wait so long...desperately waiting for next part...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART: 8
Nandini was in an isolated corner of the library, when manik came to her.

Manik: nandini!!

Nandini gets shocked listening his voice, as its the first time ever he is trying to talk to her.

Nandu: manik..?? she turns towards him!!

Nandu: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??

Manik: ye toh main tumse puchna chahta hun..??

Nandu: i dont understand what are you saying!!

Saying this, nandu tries to leave from there, when manik holdes her wrist and pulls her towards himself, as such her back is touching his front.

Nandu(shockingly): manik???

Manik: why the hell are you behaving like this nandu??

Nandu: please leave me manik

Manik: not until u answer me nandu!!

nandu: please leave me.. its hurting!!

Manik: ohh please nandini.. dont start with ur drama again, stop using ur cheap tactics to gain my attention, like behaving like ignoring me, and also conspiring with ur friends against me.. like seriously.. i dint know u were so desperate for my attention.. u know u deserve my hatred. u r nothing more than a selfish duckling.

Nandu was very much hurt after listening to manik's rude words.

Nandu forcefully frees her hand and turns towards manik..

Nandu(sadly): yeah, that what i am right?? a dram and tantrum queen, and a selfish Bitch?? but u know what manik.. atleast i never try to hurt my loved ones. i know basically how important they are in my life. and as far as gaining ur attention, mujhe koi interest nahi hai... i was just trying to maintain some distance. u know that day when i heard u telling ur friends abt how much u loathe me, and that my presence suffocates u. i decided then and there that i wont disturb ur peace anymore, coz mite be not u, but i really considered u and mukti my friends from childhood, and abve all u both are my father's best friends children, i couldnt afford to hate you guys..

Manik: ohh please nandini.. ye apna lecture kisi aur ko sunana...

Nandu(dejectedly): okay.. fine.. i know whaterver i say or do, u r never gonna believe that. so here i promise that I Nandini Kirlosker will leave india as soon as this session ends, its hardly few months left, and that i will never ever in my life will show my face to u guys.. if that reduces ur hatred and pain that u feel for me from the childhood. and yeah.. please dont waste ur precious time thinking i am doing all this to gain ur attention. i an doing all this to reduce my guilt to cause u and mukti pain unknowingly.

Sayingthis nandu leaves from there, leaving manik shocked...

Cabir comes out of his hiding place, and is shocked as of what he listened.

Cabir(ST): tum manik ke liye itna kuch sacrifice kaise kar sakti ho nandu?? i know u its ur friendship and guilt trip for him, but no.. nandu.. u mitenot have realised but its love which u possess for manik, which gives u enormous strength to do anything for him. and manik, u r at a huge loss dude!!

Manik leaves and cabir follows him!!

both enters canteen, and sees the rest of FAB5 there.

Without talking much everyone gets busy in their work..

With Sparklings..

Nandu enters music wing and sees her friends there.. see runs towards navya and hugs her, and starts crying..

Navya: nandu?? nandu?? what happened baby??

Sanu: nandu.. princess kya hua? why are you srying so much??

Harshad: kahin manik and FAB5 ne toh kuch nahi kaha??

Nandu at once stops crying and looks at harshad

Abhi: ohh it means harshu is right.. come on tell us

nandu starts telling her friends abt her confrontation with manik.. And again starts crying!

navya: nandu, tumne aisa kyu kaha??

Sanu:how dare that manik say something like that to our nandu?

Abhi: guys, i guess nandu ne jo kia ita right.. i mean come on kabtak wo yun un logon ke taunts and hatred bardaasht karegi.. she need to move on..

Harshad: abhi is right! i never liked that alia and manik, but then nandu too is right onher part, if not for them she need to leave from here for herself..

Sanu: harshad is right, nandu tumne jo kia wo sahi tha, infact why are we even waitingfor the session to end, we can leave just today

Nandu: no guys.. i know i wanna leave this place as soon as possible, but i wantthis session to end, so that our time doesnt get waste. we have a career to accomplish, some dreams to fulfill. and also, right now we have college responsibilities too..

navya: right.. uske baad..

nandu: uske baad, i will leave


Sanu: not u..we all will leave

Navya: yeah.. i cant let my little sis be alone

Nandu: but meri wajah se already u destroyed ur friendship with FAB5 navi...

Navya: nothing is more important than u..

Sanu: so its decided, that we gonna leave as soon as this session ends..

Abhi: that exacly 5 months away from now

Harshad: right! so lets go, and fulfill the duties at hand first!!

Nandu smiles, and thanks god for giving her such supportive friends!!

Nandu: can i get a group hug please

Sparklings: sure!!

they hug each other and leave for their work...



FAB5:

Mukti: bhai... waise us time where did u leave so suddenly?

manik is confusedwhat to say??

Cabir: arey meri gada dhaari bheem, usey kuch emergency hoga, u know natures' call

Aliya: yuck cabir!!

Cabir: arey what yuck, as if u dont go for it!!

Mukti: stop it yaar cabir,its too gross!!

Cabir puts his hands up: okay okay
but waise mukti tujhe nahi lagta ki hume jaa ke sparlings se event related discussion karna chahiye, so that we atleast know na, ki hume kya kya handle karna hai!!

Mukti was goingto say something.. When two people camethere

Boy: excuse me guys.. wo i wanna meet the FAB5 here..

Cabir: achcha.. toh tujhe fab5 se milna hai??

Boy: yeah.. actually my name is karan jotwani, i need to join them in organizing intercollegiate fest

Aliya: ohh so u r karan... hey i am aliya.. she is mukti..he is cabir.. druv..and he is Manik the lead member of FAb5

karan: ohh so u mean u r all the famous fab5

Fab 5 smiles , and smirks

Fab5: yeah

Karan: nice meeting u guys.. this is soha dingly she is from arts and culture section from my college

Fab5: hey soha

Soha: hey guys.. may i pleaseknow where will i find Sparklings??

Cabir: sure, i will take u to them.. druv will u join us??

Druv: sure cabir.. chal..

Soha: okay bye guys.. nice meeting you!!

Cabir and druv leaves, soha follows them

Here manik is lost in soha,

Manik(ST): soha dingly, what a wierd name, but yeah a preety face.. so soha, get ready to get wooed by manik malhotra!!

Mukti: ohhbhai, where are you lost??

Manik: uh.. uh.. nowhwere

Aliya: seriosuly..??

Manik: haan.. obviously na.. i was just thinking not taking soha with us, we did a mistake..??

Mukti(smirks): ohhh really how bhai??

Manik: (convincingly): see, she is from arts and culture deptt, she will know more innovative and creative ways of preparations and organizing the event, so she will indeed be a great help for sparklings!!

Aliya: yeah right, but now we cant do anything, she already left.

karan: but if u guys want, then i can go to that group, and can send soha here!

manik(excitedly): really,

Mukti smirks seeing manik!!

Manik(composing himself): ohhyeah, thats great.

karan: oh kay then i will go and send soha here!!

karan leaves..

mukti: bhai, is it the only reason u want soha dinglywith us!!

Manik: obv mukti, what else!!

Mukti: okay!! if u say so!!

Later, soha joins Fab5, karan joins sparklings, cabir shares with druv of what he heard, and how he things there is something more deep in Manan's life..

Manik is happy to see soha with them..

Nandu jells very easily with karan, and forgets her problems for the time being..

Precap:

Nandu sees manik- soha in compromising position, behind the music wing.

Cabir and druv, tries to make nandu jealous.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Thank u sooo much bahut achi update thi next update asap plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Wow awesome update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
What hell manik and soha
But kyoi nhai our nandu With karan
Poor nandu
How manik say this nandini
Plz tec manik and fab5 without c n d lessons
Epspecially our most er
Privous days I also think that n now my though comes true
I feel crying hahaahhaa
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
again amazing update as always...jus love this story...u penned it soo nicely...
plsss make manik jelous not nandu...
plss...plss next part we want manan scene...n thanks for the lovely update...
update soon dea...eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
👏 its awesome and u are also awesome lovely update
Plzzz make manik realise true feelings and make manan together soon
Waiting eagerly for or next update
Plzzz next update also this long and fast
Waiting...
And KEEP WRITING

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