MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update...
Loved it...
Please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
when will u update next part?
i cant wait more dea...
plss update soon
eagerly waitng
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
It's the best ff I have ever read... Hope your mum get well soon...
Plzzz update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey plsss update soon dea...eagerly waiting for ur update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Hey
I have read all the chapters in one go..
N I must say ur story is just superb...
Super duper nice...
The way u have portray nandini's pain n her frndship is just commendable...
It is a damn nice story...
Continue soon...
Waiting eagerly for ur next update...
U r a damn awesome writer...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey...
I have read all the chapter in one go...
N I must say ur story is just superb...
Super duper nice
The way u have portray nandini character and her feelings and her pain is just commendable
Its a damn nice story
Continue soon
Waiting eagerly for ur next update
U r a damn awesome writer
Update soon plzzz pretty plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting for next pls post soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART: 10

Next day:
As decided by Nandu-Cabir-Karan they started their plan to bring soha's truth out infront of everyone.

Music Hall:

Fab5 were jamming when soha entered. She was very happy.

Cabir(started their plan): hey soha!! what happend?? aaj itni khush lag rahi ho!!

Soha: heyy guys.. and yes cabir i am very happy.

Manik: hey babes, kya hua?? tell us!!

Soha: guess what Manik.. i got admission in this college on scholarship for my music!!

Manik(happy): hey, thats great yaa..

manik goes and hugs soha...

Soha is on cloud nine after seeing manik hug her infront of FAB5

Aliya was fuming seeing this...

Cabir(sarcastically): kitna hug karega yaar... hume bhi usse congratulate karne de

Manik breaks his hug with soha...

Manik: congrats soha... it amazing babes!!

Fab4 congratulates her...

Soha: now, can i have an entry in FAB5 as ur team member??

Everyone was shocked listening to her...

Before manik could say anything...

Aliya and Mukti started fuming on Soha!!

Aliya: how dare you think, that u a commoner can enter our FAb5 gang..

Mukti: exactly, we dont allow any outsider to interfere between FAB5.

Cabir(forming plan): guys, but she is our friend...

Everyone is again shocked seeing cabir siding soha

Mukti: have u lost ur mind... u r saying this... cabir tu bhool gaya kya... only we remain as Fab5, and only our beloveds are allowed to be called as part of FAB5 family, but also not as a member of FAB5 gang..

Aliya: mukti is right, i mean she is just a nobody, we cant allow a god digging creep like her to enter FAB5.

Manik was still shocked to say anything..

While soha was fuming hearing mukti and aliya

Soha(angrily): aliya no body is asking ur opinion. manik is the leader of FAB5 so its his decision if he wants me in or not..

Fab4 are disgusted listening to her...

Soha then goes to Manik, and cups his face...

Soha: manik baby, u only tell me that u want me to be a part of Fab5.. so want me in na?

Manik then gains his senses. he then looks at his friends disgustingly at soha!!

Manik then gently remover soha's hand off his face...

Manik(calmly): soha... i m sorry babes, i might be the leader of FAB5 but i just cant let u in without their consent. and yes ofcourse i want to be a FAB5 member but not at the cost of my friends disappointment.

Fab5 were really shocked that Manik wanted soha to be in Fab5 but they were happy that he respected their friendship.

Mukti who could understand her bhai little more than others knew that Manik has somewhat liking soha, andshe herself thought that soha is good for manik.

Mukti: okay bhai, its like i kinda dont have any problem if soha joins us officially.

Aliya(shocking): what the hell is wrong with u mukti??

Mukti: Look aliya, i know u have some feelings for bhai.. and bhai have felt nothing but pure friendship for u.. also, i think bhai and soha kinda like each other, so whats the harm in giving her a chance...

Cabir after listening to mukti...

Cabir(ST): i think mukti is right, even i have seen the way manik behaves when he is with soha, he is attracted towards her, as she is different from those bimbos, and that she pretends to be very innocent. i think i need to put my step very carefully.

Cabir: exactly, thats what i was saying.. so it means three out of 5 of us agree, and aliya doesnt.. druv abt abt u??

Druv who was all silently listening throughout remember what cabir said to him abt soha and then plans he made with the help of nandu and karan said:

Druv: Guys, if manik mukti n cabir doesnt have any problem in bringing a COMMONER OUTSIDER in FAB5, then i dont have any problem if shes in.. but as Aliya said abt soha being god digging and money minded bitch that we will come to know only if she stays with us.. if she not the king of as aliya said then she can remain with us, but if she is then she will face wrath of Druv Vardaan for playing with her best buddy's emotions.

FAB5 were shocked listening so meaningful thoughts of druv, while manik was overwhelmed seeing his buddy's love for him, Cabir just smirked at druv as if conveying "i know what u r playing at druv".

The most affected was Soha, she never in her dreams thought, druv the calm, composed, silent boy can talk with such a strong domain.

Cabir: okay then aliya whethere u like it or not, from now soha is officially a part of FAB5.

Soha(evilly smirking) at aliya..

Soha hugs evryone showing how happy she is that they trust her.

Soha(st): yes... finally step 1 accomplished. and even manik agreed that he likes me.. now i will rule FAB5, and will destroy them, emotionally,and monetarily...


Meanwhile with SPARKLINGS...

Sparklings are busy in doing preparations for the inter collegiate fest.

Navya: nandu, can i ask u something??

Nandu: haan navi bol na??

Navya: nandu, tum and karan aajkal bahot achche dost ban gaye ho na??

Nandu: haan, u know i never imagined, itni jaldi main and karan itne achche dost ban jayenge..

Navya: toh tum karan ko like karti ho??

Nandu: haan main usse bahot like karti hun..but jaisa tum soch rahi ho waise nahi... i like him as a big brother, and he also treats me as a small sister..

Just then Sanaya comes there...

Sanaya: kya gossip kar rahe ho tum dono??

Nandu: gossip aur wo bhi hum??sanu u know na we hate gossips !!

Sanaya: haan haan i know, now tell me what u both were talking

Navya then tells her abt her talk with nandu...

Sanaya starts laughing crazily after listening to navya

Navya: arey, why are u laughing sanu??

Sanaya: coz, just now i had same talk with karan he said exactly the same thing that nandu said..

Saying this she again starts laughing!!

Nandu gets a text from karan.

Karan(Msg): nandu, cabir's step completed. urs to start. go to music hall now!!

Nandu after reading the msg, turns towards Sparklings...

Nandu: guys i think hume apne performannce ke liye preparations karni chahiye.. here the work is almost done. final arrangements kal karlenge.. lets go to the music hall

Sparklings: okayy!!

Sparklings move towards the music hall, and sees FAB5 already there.

Abhi: heyy guys... tumlog yahan??

FAb5: heyy!!

Mukti: haan hum yahan... waise tumlog yahan kya kar rahe ho??

Sanaya: kyun hum yahan nahi aa sakte?? (angrily)
Nandu holds her hand to calm her down...

Harshad who saw this says

Harshad: wo sanu meant to say that we have come here to practice for our performance!!

Cabir: heyy thats great yaa, even we could see ur rehearsals?? can we??

He winks at nandu

Nandu then goes towards cabir and puts her hand around his shoulder..

Nandu: ofcpurse cabirrraaa... tu bole aur main mana kar dun... aisa kaise ho sakta hai??

Everyone is shocked listening to nandu...

Cabir smiles at nandu's childish dialogs...

Nandu then turns towards others and sees them shocked..

Nandu: what?? ab cabir is like a big bro to me, agar wo bolega toh how can i refuse?? and waise sanu harsad abhi navi tumlogon ne hi kaha tha na ke i shud value those people who value me, toh ab main wahi kar rahi hun!!

Listening to nandu, sparklings understand that their nandu is finally letting herself move on, neither allowing others to hurt herself, nor hurting those who love her...

Navya and sanaya runs and hugs her...

navi: i am so proud of u nandu,

Sanu: u have taken a right decision nandu...

Nandu: okay okay, enpugh of this emotional drama of u two nautankies...

Cabir-druv-harshad-abhi laughs.. while manik mukti and aliya and shocked... soha is totally clueless as what is happening??

Druv then comes to nandu and side hugs her...

Druv: thats like MY NANDU, darling u took right decision, but ultimately u needed us to decide.. lol!!

Nandu then turns towards druv and hugs him completely...

Nandu: yes afterall i love u so much, how can i deny u?? 😉

Sparklings and cabir n druv laughs!!

Manik was getting irritated listening to their talks!!

Manik: what the hell guys?? yahan ye sab kya ho raha hai?? i am not understanding anything??and cabir druv how come u guys have become like best friends of nandini??

Mukti: yes, even i want to know... and what about nandini loving druv?? druv how could u not tell us about ur relationship with nandini??

Aliya: ohh now i got it... this nandini.. when she wasnt able to trap manik, then she trapped u??? she is such a bitch!!

Nandu(shouts): shut the hell up aliya!! what u said han i am a bitch!! u better watch ur words before talking abt me.. just becoz i dont say anything it doesnt mean i dont know how to speak.. i guess u have forgotten abt whom u r speaking... U r damn talking alll bulshit abt the only NANDINI KRILOSKER... and nandini kirlosker doesnt take shit from anyone.. she know how to return it with interest!!

Saying this nandu smirks evilly...

FAB5 are shocked seeing nandu in this new avtaar, and sparklings are happy to see their bold and attitude nandu who alwaz becomes bheegi billi infront of Manik and FAb5

Nandu: U, manik n mukti have made it like in ur life to atleast take my name atleast once daily.. it seems as if without me ur doesnt end.. hmmm... i know i am worthy, but this much i dint know u guys are like such bigfans of mine.. well coming to the facts..

Firstly MANIK- i cabir and druv along with navya harshad sanu and abhi are friends since childhood, but i guess u r not aware since cabir druv n I were aware of how much u hate me, so we dint want to hurt u.. but now... huh!! as if i care!!

Secondly MUKTI: yes, i love druv.. but y only druv.. i love cabir, abhi, and harshad too... so is that enough for ur small nonsensical brain to understand my relationship with them...

And now ALIYA- u dont have any right to ask me about my relationship with anyone present here... i am not like some bimbos who try to get close to popular guys in the name of friendship.. as i dont know, what all u have fed to manik and muktiu against me since the age of 10. guys, does a 10 year kid's brain allo him to be so manipulative to make someone hate other..

Navya: no nandu, i dont think so... but until n unless its from a long time may be years

Nandu: right, aliya i alwaz knew u dint like me since i was 6, but then i never interfered in ur works why do u wanna interfere in mine??

Aliya: listen u...

Nandu(shouts): No u listen.. i am THE NANIDINI KIRLOSker, if i want i can get a Rich, classy, hot, handsome, popular in short by ur definition a perfect guy just with the click of my fingers. I dont need to roam around guys to get myself noticed, my persomality and aura does that work for me.. and yes like u alwaz think i am behind manik.. ohhh puh leeeaaassseee gal, gimme a break.. i deserve the best.. so u can keep it... oopss sorry, u r late, as soha already have him now.. poor u!!

Sparklings are shocked seeing nandu showing her actual self in front of FAB5 but are very happy..

Sparklings starts laughing, as well as nandu..

They leave the music hall


Mukti: what was that? i have never seen nandini like this!!

Cabir: well mukti, theres alwaz a saturation point for evrything, i guess nandu reached hers of tolerating urs, aliya's and manik's bulshit.

Druv: buddy, u know i love u all alot, u r my family.. after mom dad left me it was u who kept me living. but this time nandu is right. it was aliya's fault she shouldnt have said those things abt nandu. no girl would accept such cheap words abther character.

Saying this cabir- druv left with shocked and angry soha and aliya, and mukti and manik in deep thoughts behind.


Precap:

Cabir: we need to pretend as we love each other and take nandu's and manik's help to make FAb5 and sparklings agree

Navya: haan i guess this will be a perfect plan. we can also come to know if nandu and manik have feelings for one another.

Cabir: exactly madhubala...

Navya: but cabir, what about soha...

Cabir: even i am tensed about that only.. but dont worry we will handle.

navya: yes, we will not give manik enough time to spend with soha!!

Someone listens their talks...

Someone: ohh cabir, u r panning this.. dont worry, even if u try to take manik away, i will never let it happen.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow man you are awesome...I literally cried reading the initial chapters...and part 10 is just wow...I loved the fiercy nandu..its great...plz update fast...do pm me!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
awsm story so far
loved it
cont soon

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