MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dea. ..
Superb loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART: 5

SPACE ACADEMY:

Principle calls everyone in the auditorioum.
FAB5 & SPARKLING STARS reach there and smiles at each other.

Nandu gives a faint smile towards them.

Manik and mukti see this and gets more confused as why nandu is behaving like this?

Principle: Hello students... Today, its the beginning for the new session. Its thefirst day for college for all freshers. I welcome u all to the world of music and arts: SPACE ACADEMY.

Okay as i know that u all have come here to complete ur dreams in music and arts field, but there are a handful of students who dont only excel in music individually but also were a famous band in their school. they have recieved many state level and national level awards for their school.

Lets welcome, SPACE's new band: SPARKLING STARS, whose members are Nandini Kirlosker, Navya Kapoor, Abhimanyu Sehgal, Harshad Khanna, and Sanaya Irani!!

Give them a big round of applause!!

okay so sparklings come on the stage

"Sparklings come to the stage"

Prinici: congratulations students. i hope u all will add value to space academy. have a great future. and all the best!!

Sparklings: thank u so much sir!!

Assembly gets over.

FAB5

Cabir: i never knew aaj college ke first day hi we will get another band to compete, and wo bhi nandu

Aliya: ofcourse cabir, she has planned it all

Mukti: but its seriously a shocking surprise to see all them so confidently standingthere on the stage

Druv: i toh alwaz knew nandu mei kuch tohbaat hai!! kyu buddy?

Manik: what the hell guys..?? yahan mei yesoch ke tense hun that from now onwards for everything we will have to compete with another band for our position, and tum log??

Cabir: manik tu tension kyu le raha hai?? they must also be feeling like this!!

Druv: exactly buddy!! nandu navya abhi sanu and harshad hi toh hai!!

Aliya: yeah, and they wont be able to stand infront of us!!

SPARKLINGS pass through that way,and listens to what they were talking.. Sanaya couldnt control her anger towards Aliya, and she goes towards them rest all follows..

Sanaya: sorry to burst ur bubble, kaun kiske saamne stand kar payega kaun nahi, ye toh time hi batayega


Aliya: really?? so u think u all can stand upto FAB5??

now harshad comes forward, supporting sanaya

Harshad: ofcourse why not? agar tum logon ne awards jeete hain toh humne bhi kam awards nahi jeete.

Abhimanyu: last year tum logon ne BEST MUSIC BAND MUMBAI ka award jeeta, thats really nice.. but thats becoz we cudnt participate bcoz of age limit. we were not eligible then.

Aliya: ohh yeah. agar participate karte toh tumhe kya lagta hai kya tum hame hara dete?? ohh please we are Fab 5.

Navya: whatever alia.. fab 5 hi ho.. and tumhare is FAB5 ke do members manik and mukti ye achche se jante hai that we are not less than u!!

Mukti: yeah alia.. please yaar... y r u fighting??

Cabir: exactly.. ye toh achcha hai that our college has got two bands now, jab two competitions ek sath hote hai, now we will be able to participate in both!!

Druv: cabir is right! and i think we shud just let go of this thing!!

Nandu was listening to all this, but was standing silently...
cabir notices this...

Cabir: waise nandu, hum sab ne kuch na kuch kaha.. tum kuch nahi bologi??

Nandu: main kya bolu cabir?? i mean we all are equally good, and whatever it is we all have to perform for our own college.. how does it matter individually kaun sa band zada achcha hai, what we all need to do is just give our best, rather than fighting among ourselves.

evryone gets stunned listening to nandu..

Mukti: wow.. nandu.. such a deep thought!! kaun se book se copy kia? and starts laughing, alia joins her, while manik smirks listening his sister.

Nandu gets tears in her eyes seeing mukti mocking her so openly.

cabir druv and other sparklings were also feeling sad for nandu.

Harshad: mukti.. how dare u. tumhari himmat kaise hui nandu se aise baat karne ki??

Manik gets angry listening to harshad

manik: ohh please harshad, humlog nandini ko bachpan se jaante hai, we know she is just capable of copying others, or just know how to throw tantrums..

Abhi: yeah.. tumlog sirf usey jante ho, usey pehchante nahi.. u only see what she does, u dont understand what she feels. nandu shayad copy karti hogi, but we HER FRIENDS know that right now what she feeling..

Sanaya: she gets emotional. nandini interrupts her!!

Nandini: sanu!! stop!!

Sanaya: kyu nandu.. they shud also know how much they have hurt you... specially these two bro- sis, manik and mukti

Navya is confused listening to sanu, as harshad and abhi had some idea, that FAB5 doesnt treat nandu well.

Navya: hurt?? manik and mukti ne nandu ko hurt kia hai? kab??

Sanaya: yes they... again nandini interrupts

Nandini: no navi.. aisa kuch nahi hai.. sanu toh kuch bhi bolti reheti hai.. u dont bother..

then she turns facing FAB5, and says

Nandu: Manik, mukti, alia, cabir, and druv... The FAB5. i am sorry for all that. mere friends ke behalf pe i am sorry.

Alia: u shud be!!

Nandu ignores her.

nandu: but yes, we THE SPARKLING STARS are no less than u. we already know that. and hume koi shauk nahi hai yeh janne ka whose the better band. and yes we wont interfere in your work, and u too please mind ur own.

saying this she turns and starts going out..

just then manik says


Manik: miss NANDINI KIRLOSKER, ye toh hum ab jaan ke hi rahenge ki kaun sa band best hai... so Just BRING IT ON!!

Alia: yeah lets have a session and dekhte hai who is the loser here!!

Nandu smirks...

Nandu: okay alia, agar tumhe apni losing ki itni hi jaldi hai, lets do itt...

SPARKLINGS: LETS DO ITT!!

FAB3- cabir- druv: done!!

All moves towards the jam room..

Manik: okay so lets toss

Nandu: okay!!

Maniktakes out a coin and toss

nandu: heads!!

manik cathes the coin, and it comes tails...

manik: okay, so FAB5 first!!

Manik, druv and mukti takes guitar, cabir drum, and alia key board piano... and they play

kati patang song from kai po che, episode 45 i guess

performance ends, and sparklings are surprised on their choice of song...

Manikcomes infront of nandu

Manik: now ur turn

SPARKLINGS goes and take the instruments, and plays the same song which NH3 plays in MUSICANA, episode 68, 69, 70.

FAB3-manik- mukti are amazed seeing sparklings performance..

Harshad now comes to manik

Harshad: so manik... who do u think was best??

Cabir interrupts,

Cabir: well guys there is no comparison, wewere equally best, hai na manik??

Manik: yeah!!

Sparklings smile, and leaves

navya- mukti talks for sometime, they all leave for college.

Late night:

nandu: aaj jo hua, i am not gonna let these things repeat again. kal se i will not react to Fab 5. wahi sahi hoga!!

Same time:

Manik: aaj mujhe kya ho gaya tha?? why the hell did i challenge nandini.. i already know that they not at all less than fab5, he thenshrugs his feelings and sleeps...




Precap:

nandini ignoring manik and fab5

navya- sanaya talks about nandini, manik and mukti!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
It was just awesome..u penned it..i m totally loving it..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow amazing update dea. ..
Superb loved it
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART: 6

NEW MORNING:

Navya is worried for nandini, as she has seen the way FAB5 makes fun of her. she thought manik and mukti were their friends, but even they dint stop aliya from saying bad things about nandini, and sanu she was saying abt mani and mukti hurting nandu.. i need to talk to her!!

Nandu and navi gets ready, have their breakfast with their parents and leaves for college.

Manik and mukti did the same.

SPACE ACADEMY:

Aliya- Cabir- Druv were talking when manik mukti joins them.

Manik: whats up guys??

Cabir: kuch nahi, wo hum aaj kaun si movie jaane wale hai ye decide kar rahe the!!

Mukti: achcha bata toh, kaun si muci jaa rahe hai!!

Druv: humne Hamari adhuri kahani jaane ka decide kia hai

Manik: okay with me!

Mukti: mujhe bhi!!

Aliya: toh kab chalna hai, 2.30 ka show hai!

Cabir: haan okay. tab chalte hain!!
FAB3: okayy!!

Just then Nandu and her friends comes there...

Cabir notices them.

Cabir: heyyy nandu..

fab 5 follows cabir

Nandu: hi cabir, Hi D!!

Druv: Hi nandu!!

Sanu: guys chalo class ka time ho raha hai!!

Cabir decides to ask them to join Fab 5 for themovie, as he wants to spend some time with navya!!

Cabir: waise hum sab aaj 2.30ka show hamari adhuri kahani jaa rahe hai, u all can join us!!

Navya: yaa okayy!!

Nandu: no.. i already have some plan, u guys continue.. i will take ur leave now..

Saying this, nandu leaves...

Manik, mukti, cabir and druv were worried by way nandu was behaving around FAB5

Aliya was least bothered

Sanu: haan actualy, i and nandu are busy.. so even i wont be able to join u guys..

Abhi also says the same!!

Harshad: that means only me and navya will come!!

Navya: oh i forgot, even i need to join nandu. sorry guys next time..

Saying this sparkling leaves

Druv: ye insab ko kya ho gaya hai?

Cabir: i think nandu has asked them not to talk to us!!

Mukti: why is it??

Cabir: as if u dont knw!!

Druv: yup.. i guess cabir is right, uske bday ke baad she is beaving very strange

Aliya: who cares guys.. its good she is not coming near us...

Manik: Aliya is right, uska problem wo khus dekh legi.. even if she behaving strange its good, she is not near us anywhere.. her presence suffocates me, i feel like i cant breathe i will die the moment she comes infront of my eyes..

Saying thid manik leaves.. aliya and mukti follows..

Cabir and druv shakes their head, and follows them

But they failed to see nandini cryinglistening to what manik said...

Nandini runs from there, and goes to the beach...

She sits and starts crying histerically...

Nandu: why?? why me?? what have i done to deserve so much hatredness from manik.???

After sometime, she composes herself, and wipes her tears..

nandu: okay, now i wont cry.. its good i came to know what manik actually feels abt me.. now i wont come infront of him even my mistske.. thats nandini's promise!!

Saying this she gets up.. and leaves for college..

She was abt to enter.. when she collided with someone..

She sees its none other than manik..

But she acts as if she dint see him, and leaves from there without saying anything.

manik gets confused and also leaves from there.

FAB5 have a great afternoon, and night out..

While, navya talked to sanu, and was shocked knowing how much nandu has suffered without any fault of hers, and she keeps all the pain inside her.. all alone!!

NEXT MORNING:


SPACE ACADEMY

Fab 5 were in canteen and enjoying.

just then Sparklings come there, Fab 5 doesnt notice them but nandu did..

She make some excuse and leaves from there..

Fab 5 then notice sparklings, and asks them to join them..

Cabir: hey navya, sanu,... join us!!

FAb5: yeah..


Cabir: waise nandu kahan hai??

Listening nandu;s name, manik also looks up, and notice nandu is absent

Navya: haan wo usey kuch kaam tha,toh wahi gayi hai!!

Manik and mukti greats navya... but she doesnt respond, and faintly smiles, and keeps on talking to cabir and druv!!

Manik and mukti are confused with navya's behaviour

After sometime, sparklings get a msg on their cell...

Nandu: guys i finished my work now, i am heading to class, see u all there...

Navya: cabir nandu ka msg hai.. she is going to class, we need to leave... okay bye cabir, bye druv

Sanu- abhi- harshad: bye guys!!

Fab 5: bye!!

Whole day nandini is successful in avoiding anyconfrontation with FAB5.


Precap:

6 months leap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Update fast..i love dis story!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Wow fab update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Wow it's going awesome..make Manik n mukti realize...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19

šŸ‘AMAZING STORY AND INTERESTING AND VERY MUCH DIFFERENT FROM OTHER STORIES WAITING FOR NEXT PART 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rawesme ff!! I luv ur updates !! Plz make manik fall for nandu soon!! N r u posting d nxct part now plz tell..

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