MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 5

Waaw amazin update loved it..i like ur story line very much its diffrnt..but i hope manik doesnt fall for soha..i thnk its just attraction r8??he has no feelins for soha r8??anyways waitin for ur update..update soon..

next update plz.. nd send pm to me

Plz plz plz plz pretty plz make jealous manik not nandini

Nice update...
Continue soon and make manan together
Can't see them like this and what is cooking between soha and manik ...Plzzz bring manan scenes and let manik know the reality soon
Waiting...continue soon

When will you upload the next part.
waiting since morning
Please continue soon and make manan together soon
and don't make nandini jealous make manik jealous it will be more fun waiting for your next part
Keep writing and giving us search updates everyday continue soon

when will u update next part?plss update soon dea...desperately waiting for next part

Thank u so much guys, i feel so happy that u guys like my story. Its really worthy when one's thoughts and views are appreciated. And yes, about updating regularly, actually my mom has gone thru a serious operation for stone in her ovary 15 days ago, so i try my best to handle all tasks in my hand effectively.

okay, so here goes the next part.

Part: 9

Its been 1 week, since Fab 5, and sparklings are busy with preparing for intecollegiate fest. but none knows what actually happening in nandu's life.

when karan substituted soha for himself as manik wanted to have soha with FAB5, nandu was disheartened knowing abt this. but very soon shebecame very good friends with karan, and karan also started treating her as his little sister, but also Karan and nandu decided to prepare for a surprised performance at the fest for their friends.

FLASHBACK: (NANDU-KARAN TALK)

Nandu: thanks so much karan, for being there with me... i never thought, i can ever come this close to anyone except my friends..

Karan: ohh comeon nandu, u know, when i first saw u, i noticed a little sadness, a kind of aloofness in ur eyes..i dont knw what happend to me, but i just wanted to erase that sadness from ur soul. and u also know i never had such great friends as uall, and u are like my little sis.. so i can do anything for ur happiness..

Nandu simple hugs karan..

Nandu: waise karan u knw, we friends have decided to leave india after this session, so why dont we make this fest a memorable one for everyone.

Karan: heyy, thats a great idea. and i know how to do that!!

Nandu: how??

Karan: by arranging a suprise performance for our friends at the fest.. i mean like an opening act!!

Nandu(excited):wow!! u r amazing...

nandu again hugs karan.. they break their hug and joins their group!!

FLASHBACK ENDS:

Nandu and karan started practicing from the very net day, and even convinced principle to let their act a surprised one!!

Music Hall:

Manik, and Cabir were waiting for others, just then soha came there..

Soha: heyy manik..

Manik: heyy babes..

Manik comes and hugs her..

Cabir: ahem ahem

Soha manik breaks their hug...

Cabir: heyy soha, even i am here.. manik akela nahi hai

Soha gets embarrassed

Soha: hey cabir, how u doing??

Cabir(sarcatically): never better, since u were not there

manik glares at cabir for alking like this with soha

Soha: ohh, u missed me so much. (dumbly)

Cabir tries to control his laughter, while maik just face palmed himself

Manik: arey leave him na soha, u say how u doing, and how is ur work going on??

Soha: ohh comeon manik baby, i just met u last night.. u r asking as if i dint tell u ...

Cabir raises his eyebrows questioningly at manik, manik just shrugs

Manik: ohh i just forgot

Soha: ohh,

Cabir: waise manik, tu kal raat soha ke sath.. i mean kya kar raha tha??

Before manik could answer anything, soha beats him at it

Soha: wo cabir, he tookme out for dinner date yesterday!!

Aliya who just entered was shocked listening to soha

Aliya: what a dinner date?? and he dint have time for us.. his friends??

Manik(ST):abiski hi kami thi.. ohh god why me??

Manik: aisa kuch nahi hai, wo toh i just..i just...

Cabir: he just wanted to be friends with soha, thats y.. kyu manik..

Manik thanks him thru his eyes...

Manik: yeah cabir, exactly!!

Aliya: whatever,i just came to say that me and druv are not attending college, we have to go and see the prop designs, and artistication for stage

Mukti comes running there..

Manik: kya hua muks?? why r u running like that?

Muks: bhai.. Bhai.. u wont believe..

Cabir: oye.. tu dara kyu rahi hai. bata na hua kya hai?

Mukti: nandini and karan are performing a surprised opening act of the fest

FAB3: what?

Aliya: but how can she? i mean she is in organizing committee

Mukti: but i just heard her and karan talking abt this, that they prepared this act for their friends!!

Soha: but whats the problem in it? i mean theres no such, that if anyone from organizing committee cannot perform..

Cabir: yeah and if she and karan are getting enough time to practice for their act so problem kya hai?

Aliya: then even we shud perform..

Manik: leave it na guys, we don't have enough time to practice, and waise bhi we are seniors we have more responsibility then them.

Cabir: exactly, chalo lets leave...

Mukti- Manik leave with soha to check the preparations, aliya leaves as druv was waiting for him...

Cabir though to go and talk to nandu, and make her realize her feelings for manik.

MUSIC ROOM:

Karan: nandu, I was thinking ki agar hum ye tabla and veena ke sath karenge, toh iska effect hi kuch aur hoga.. u know jugalbandi jaisa kuch...

Nandu(impressed): hey great idea,but how will we base it on tabla and veena in three days, as after that we need to show our act to panditji...

Karan: don't worry, I will do that, u just focus on veena...

Nandu: okay!!

Cabir enters music room, and sees karan and nandu practicing..

Cabir: nandu...

Nandu(shocked): Cabir??

Karan is confused seeing this..

Cabir: karan, can u please give us sometime, I need to talk to nandu... ALONE!!

Karan: sure

Karan leaves

Cabir: nandu, tumye sab kya kar rahi ho?

Nandu: main kya kar rahi hun cabir??

Cabir: I mean, u still sacrificing ur happiness for manik, u r avoiding him, and even ready to leave ur country ur home everything for him!!

Nandu is shocked, as how he came to know all this?

Cabir(reading her expressions): I was there outside library that day, when u were talking with manik.

Nandu(sighs): cabir, I am not doing any damn thing for him.. I am doing all this for myself, as I cant handle any more pain. And staying here will only cause me loads of pain.

Cabir: but nandu u and manik are meantto be together!!

Nandu starts laughing listening to cabir!!

Nandu: ohhgawd cabir.. like seriously, hahahahhahaha..u mean the boy who hates my existence is meant for me to be together..

Cabir: u r not realizing it now nandu..

Nandu interrupts him: cabir please yaar, stop it. I am least concerned talking abt him.. so please.. don't ever start it again!!

Saying this nandu leaves...

Cabir(sighs): nandu, I know u r hurt and angry, but trust me very soon u will realize this!!

Nandu is walking theough corridor, just then she passes thru old store room, and listens some sound, and peeps in and gets shocked seeing the site infront of her eyes...

She sees manic and soha, standing too close to each other, manik's left hand on her waist, and right hand caressing her cheek, and soha both hands circled around his neck, and their lips fused together.

Nandu is stunned seeing the dight infront of her eyes, she starts moving back, and hits someone's chest..

She looks behind and its none other than KARAN, who came here searching for nandu..

Karan: hey nandu, what happened.

Nandu is too shocked to say anything...

Karan looks at her in confusion and he also peeps in the store room

Karan: ohhso u were shocked to see that

Nandu comes out of her trance

Nandu: what do u mean??

Karan: I mean its nothing new for soha, I mean she had been those desperate types of girls who tries to trap rich guys to use them for their benefit.

Nandu is shocked listening these things abt soha...

Nandu: what???

Karan: yes, that's why she is with manik... I admit she is pretty n beautiful but she has got a dark black heart!!

Nandu: ohh god, manik??

Karan: I guess manik uske plan mei phasta jaa raha hai

Nandu: no.. this cant be happening, I need to save manik from her..

Karan: but why r u being so concerned for him nandu??

Nandu: wo isiliye, qki even if he don't I still consider him as my friend.. and also wo sweetheart and jannat ka beta hai.. they are my father's best friends.. so I cant leave him in trouble..

Karan: ohh!!

Nandu: karan will u help me in saving manik from soha??

Karan: ofcourse..

Nandu: okay, but for that I want you to be in this college...

Karan: but how is that possible??

Nandu: don't worry, I will ask my dad.. he make ur's and soha's admission in this college on scholarship.. so it will beeasy for u..

Karan: okay... if that's what you want!mera theek hai, but why soha.??

Nandu: coz if soha wontbe here, then hum uski reality FAB5 ke saamne kaise layenge??

Karan: okay, then I am up for itt

Nandu then calls his father, talks to him abt two her friends admission in her college...

Nandu: ho gaya, dad said aaj u will get the admission letter.

Karan: but seriously nandu, this was not needed...

Nandu: it was needed, and yes I don't want ki hamare friends ko iske baarey mei kuch bhi pata chale... they wont like it..

Karan: hmmm, I understand!! But r we gonna do???

Nandu: u see, soha is very smart.. she has chosen manik as she knows no one can oppose him, so for this matter we need some help..

Karan: who that will be??

Nandu: I know a perfect person for this job..Cabir!!

Karan: cabir?

Nandu: yes, he is my friend.. I know I wont need to explain myself much for him to trust me.. and he is the only one who can in a way control manik.

Karan: okay.. then call him!!

Nandu: okay!!

Nandu then calls cabir, and asks him to meet her behind the music block..

Cabir then comes to meet her, and nandu tells him everything, and that she wants to save manik from soha... they make some plan... and leaves for their home...

Amazing amazing amazing update
Please make manan together as soon as possible
Please don't let nandini go away from manik
I know what you are going through I will pray for your mother she will be alright
Update very soon I was waiting desperately for this part keep writing all the best

Awesome

wow...again awsm update as always..
thanks for the wonderful update...u penned it so well dea...jus loved it...
plsss make manik jelous dea plsss its a kinda request...n also update soon..n take care of ua mom...