MaNan FF:~ Dil Dhadhakne Do~ upd pg 16. - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Amazing story really very excited for the next part agar mera bas chalta toh i would have asked u to write nonstop which is not possible.. Update asap thank u :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Wowww...what an awesome ff you are writing...just live it. Plzzz continue soon. I am soo curious to read further. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi, I am first time reading ur story it's awesome but .I'm confused .I know I'm asking u personaly but what can I do. Can u tell is manik fell in love with aliya. Bcz frist u wrote that fell in for someone n other heartbroken so I am dammi confused. Plz don't separate manan. I know after read it u hell angry with me bur what can I do. I m not waiting for update so I give up n asking u stupid question. I trying pm u but it error so I end up comments box n asking u .Plz read it n ans my question. If u still angry trow tomato or anything but ans it .I'm bagging u ..? Awsome
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G8 job keep updating eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
wow...thanks for the lovely n wonderful update...i jus loved it...u penned it so well..
its jus fab story...i feel bad about nandu
ur such a awsm writer..keep it up
plsss try to update regularly...eagerly witing for next part...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey just read all.parts ...
It was just amazing ...
Plz update soon ..do pm me also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy guys, hearty thanks to all of you for the lovely comments, and yes i am not angry, u all can ask any questions to me related to my writings.

U know it often happens, that we misunderstand attraction or infatuation as love, that we go to such an extent that it breaks us if doesnt proves to be true.

My this story is somewhat related to that scenario, and yes dont worry manan wont get seperated, but as its a great saying that:-

"Ye Ishq Nahin Aasaan, Bas Itna Samajh Lijiye,
Ek Aag Ka Dariya Hai, Aur Doob Ke Jaana hai"

True love can never be easy, this story will portray the hardships, the companionship two people need to become eternal soulmates.

Enjoy the next Part.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Hey it's great ff i love it and i hope next part will be updated soon waiting for it plz update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART: 7

Manik- Mukti- Cabir- Druv were very muchconfused as what happened to nandu, as why she is behaving like this.

It was nearly six months, after the session started, nandini was successfully able to avoid FAB5 with the help of her friends.

FLASHBACK:

It had been a week since FAB5 saw nandini.

Cabir- Druv were sitting in canteen waiting others.

Cabir: yaar druv, mujhe lagta hai somethingis wrong!!

Druv: what are you saying dude??

Cabir: yaar, i am talking about nandu!!

Druv: haan yaar, even i am worried for her. it has been a week since we last saw her.

Cabir: exactly, i understand she avoids manik mukti and aliya, but why us??

Druv: yeah, she comes to college, completes her classes, practice with her friends, and leaves without meetin us. even navya is behaving strangely, i mean she has kinda stopped talking to mukti as she used to talk to her.

Cabir: Yeah, thats because she came to know how much nandu is suffering because of manik and mukti.

Druv: what?? how can u say that??

Cabir: wo.. saanu told me last evening as i forced her to answer me.

Druv: ohh okayy.. i just hope nandini is fine, its good she remains away from us, atleast she wont get hurt!!

Cabir: yeah right, chal. lets go!!

FLASHBACK ENDS:

Navya has become very possessive of nandu, even in nandu's absence if Manik mukti or Aliya tries to make fun of her she shuts them off!! She has become like a protective elder sister.

Sanu, Abhi, and Harshad were alwaz there to support her.

NEW DAY:

S.P.A.C.E. ACADEMY

Princi calls all the students for an urgent assembly.

Students gather at the auditorium, when princi comes

Princi: good morning students. i hope u know that annual Inter collegiate fest are going to start??

Students: yes sir!!

Princi: this year, our college is going tobe host for the event. for this i with the help of your efficient teachers have made a list of students, who wud work as the commitee members, these students can chose associates on their own, specially the people whom they trust the most.

Majorly there will be 12 members in the execitive commitee, they are

FAB5, Sparkling stars, which counts to be 10 people, and Karan Jotwani, and Soha Dingly.

Karan Jotwani, and dingly are from National PG college, so Fab 5, and Sparkling have to take care of them. Fab 5 will be with- Karan Jotwani, & Sparklings will be with- Soha Dingly.

Saying this principle leaves.

Fab 5, and sparklings are excited abt the fest except nandini.

Nandini is shocked as again she has been asked to work with manik and mukti and FAB5

Navya and sanu senses her stature, and comes to her

Navya: nandu, tum chinta mat karo.. humm ain na..?? hum sab sambhal lenge

Nandu: kaise chinta na karun main navya, itne months se i was trying to avoid them and i was successful but again this

Sanu: nandu tum tension mat lo, we are there with you... hum sath mei handle kar lenge

Nandu thinks for sometime, and then agrees

They all starts planning for the fest, but as usual nandu ignores FAB5, and communicates only when her friends asked her something,

She doesnt even reply to Cabir and druv!!

She avoids manik and mukti as if they dint exist for her. she completes her work in college, and alwaz be around navya and sanu. as dont want Fab 5 to come and ask her anything

FAB5:

Cabir: wow yaar, ye fest has come at this time, when we really needed a break, from practice.

Aliya: as now we are committee members, we wont get time to perform.

Mukti: Exactly yaar.. itna kaam hai ki time hi nahi hai practice karne ka we just have 3 weeks in hand, and wo two people from national college abhi taka aye bhi nahi hai!!

Aliya: but mukti, we shud only be concerned about Karan not that soha, as she is with Nandini's team.

Hearing nandu's name, manik and mukti gets lost in thinking about nandu.

They remembers what happened when they went to KIRLOSKERS palace during the last six months.

FLASHBACK:

It was after 2 weeks after Nandu started avoiding FAB5, that Malhotras and kirloskers planned for dinner together.

Suyyu: yaar arjun.. where is princess..?? jab se hum aaye hain she dint even come once to meet us...

Nyonika: yeah.. is she not at home?

Arjun: wo.. I am confused... I don't know usey kya ho gaya hai.. she cocooned herself in her room only.. its been more than 2 weeks we haven't heard her carefree laughter.. as if jaise wo hasna hi bhul gayi ho!!

Purvi: haan.. its not like she doesn't talk to us. But its like she is not princess any more.. she doesn't ask for anything from us.. can u imagine, two days back when I asked her for shopping she rejected me saying she has tones of clothes, even she doesn't do shopping her entire life, there wont any shortage of dresses for her to buy..

Arjun: haan, wo kaka se uska phn toot gaya, she didn't say anything to him.. and when I asked her to buy a new phone she said that she wants a new phone from her savings..

Purvi: and she bought a 6,000 ka phn inplace of her old Iphone 6.

Suyyu-Nyonika-Manik-Mukti all were shocked hearing all this abt nandu.

Nyonika: why don't u try to talk to her??

Arjun: we tried.. she said she doesn't want be dependent on us.. she has shown enough tantrums to us for a lifetime. She just want be the way she is for now.

Manik-Mukti were really unable to believe that nandu who cant even get herself a glass of water did something like this.

Manik though something, and checked his whatsapp..

He was shocked seeing nandu's last seen.. it was the day when they made fun of her and the last day they saw her...

Manik(ST): it means she is avoiding us knowingly.. but why is she doing this. Yeah.. again some drama... she just wants to gain attention as alwaz.. see even today today these parents are talking abt her only, as if they are least bothered abt me and muks.

Mukti(ST): ohh god... once a drama queen alwaz a drama queen. Nandu.. I hate uso much, whenever I want to get attention of our parents their pampering u alwaz snatch it from me..

Even later during the dinner she and navya dint come down, and took the dinner in their room only..

FLASHBACK ENDS:

Manik(ST): ye nandini ko kya ho gaya hai, its been so long she dint even once tried to talk to me and mukti.. I remember how she use to cling to us.

Mukti: right.. its her and her team tension.. anywaz lets go to the canteen,. I m hungry...

Cabir: haan main bhi!!

Druv: tu kab hungry nahi hota!!

They laugh and leave for canteen.

CANTEEN:

Nandu and her friends are already sitting and having food, and doing masti.

Fab 5 enters. Manik immediately notice nandu,

Manik(ST): there she is.. she looks so happy... I am so sure ye uska ignorance and avoiding na koi drama hai..

Manik: geys see sparklings... lets go there...

Cabir- Druv are the first ones to look at them and they also notice nandu laughing and gets happy seeing her.

Aliya makes a face seeing nandu there.

Aliya: ohh.. so she is also there...

Mukti: comeon yaar, hume kya.. lets go there..

Till now nandu hasn't seen FAB5 there...

They reach nandu's table...

Manik: heyy everyone!!

Abhi: heyy guys!!

Nandu is shocked seeing Fab 5 there..

Before anyone could say anything she says..

Nandu: ohh I forgot I need to go the library.. I will see u guys later...

She leaves from there..

Manik(ST): again, she ignored me.. today I wont let her go, I will definitely ask her why she is behaving like this...

Navya: yeh nandu bhi na, kuch bhi ...

Cabir: waise wo hume I mean FAB5 ko dekhte hi bhaag kyu jaati hai??

Sanu: no.. its nothing like that.. she really had some work.. and why will she run away seeing u guys..

Aliya: may be she is scared of us that's y...

Harshad: our nandu is not scared of anyone okay.. and u aliya its better if u don't speak a word against our nandu.. she dint do anything to u so its better if u don't poke ur nose in between.

Aliya: ohh yeah.. seriously, then y did she run away as soon as we came here..

Mukti: leave it na aliya...

Abhi: exactly, leave it.. u guys will never understand... so its better if we don't talk only...

Navya: enough.. u FAB5 if I m not saying anything, it doesn't mean u wil say any damnthing abt my sis, and manik-mukti I thought u were our friends, but even u dint stop aliya from talking useless abt our princess..

Sanu(angry): Navya.. what are u saying, how can they stop aliya..?? when they themselves hate nandu so much, that seeing nandu's face suffocates them, it seems they cant breathe if she is infront of them..

Manik is shocked as he once said something like this to his friends.. Now he is sure might be nandu heard him that's y she is behaving like this...

Manik: what are you saying sanaya??

Sanaya: why manik?? Did I say something wrong, infact six months u only said these things to ur FAb5(sarcastically) isn't it??

Mukti: whatever it is, u have no right, to say all this thing to bhai..

Navya(Shouts): and u FAb5 have no right any thing abt my nandu... okay??

Harshad and abhi are shocked seeing navya shouting on FAB5, but they also know navya is right.

Abhi: lets leave guys,

Harshad: its useless to talk to them, as they cant see how their few words can hurt someone so much that they just want to end their lives.. come onguys.. lets go!!

Manik- mukti are shocked and confused listening to harshad.

Sparklings leave for class..

Fab 5 sits and no one is able to say anything.

Manik: guys, I remember something very important, I wil see u guys later..

Saying this manik leaves, cabir also makes some excuse and follows manik, and sees him going towards library

Cabir(ST): ye manik, library kyu jaa raha hai..?? wahan toh nandu hai!! I need to find out!!

PRECAP:

Manik confront nandini...

Soha- Karan enters..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waaw yaa i just live ur story soo sooo much!!its damn intrstin..nd update faster!!nd give us manan scenes as well..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome
Tnx for updating n reply
I try pm but it's error y
Amzzzing

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